2D Artwork: Transformers Mosaic: "Tormented Joy"

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  1. TF Mosaic

    TF Mosaic Well-Known Member

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    The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.

    These are some of those stories. This is:
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    It should be noted that while this project has been recognized by IDW Publishing and Hasbro, none of the works presented have been commissioned or solicited by either company. The stories are not official canon, except where noted. These stories are the result of Transformers enthusiasts taking the time out of their busy days to contribute to a universe they love. No one has been paid for the production of these stories.

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    TORMENTED JOY

    Story by;
    Martin “Tronprogram” Fisher http://tronprogram.deviant.art.com

    Art by:
    Peter “I Sith Lord” Istyle I-SithLord on deviantART

    Colors & Letters by;
    Javier “Shinobi Rendar” Reyes ShinobiRendar on deviantART

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  2. kjeevahh

    kjeevahh n/a

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    nice nod to movie blackout's design!
     
  3. Boy who screams

    Boy who screams Banned

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    It's alright...but we had a Vortex one before...
    EDIT: Linky...http://transformers-mosaic.deviantart.com/art/quot-Gentle-Persuasion-quot-66221551

    The art is moodier, Vortex seems a lot more insane and Cliffjumper is cooler in the 'prisoner' position.

    I'm not saying "Tormented Joy" is bad by any means, it's just been done before.

    Plus, the internal monologue at the end does nothing for me. I don't like the explanation of his motivations, it's kinda better left unsaid.

    Still, it's a good piece, but I think my enjoyment of it would have been greater if "Gentle Persuasion" hadn't been made. As it it, I'm glad it was.
     
  4. llamatron

    llamatron Shut up, Nigel. TFW2005 Supporter

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    No offense but the the monologue at the end is really clunky.
     

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