2D Artwork: Transformers Mosaic: "The War Within."

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  1. TF Mosaic

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    The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.

    These are some of those stories. This is:
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    It should be noted that while this project has been recognized by IDW Publishing and Hasbro, none of the works presented have been commissioned or solicited by either company. The stories are not official canon, except where noted. These stories are the result of Transformers enthusiasts taking the time out of their busy days to contribute to a universe they love. No one has been paid for the production of these stories.

    For all Transformers news / updates / information, click here

    Transformers Mosaic FAQ, click here

    THE WAR WITHIN

    Story by:
    Josh van Reyk http://joshvanreyk.deviantart.com

    Art by:
    Ibai Canales Canalus on deviantART

    Letters by:
    Franco Villa M3Gr1ml0ck on deviantART

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  2. netkid

    netkid Where's my Goddamn shoe!

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    This reminds me, someday I wish to write a Mosaic based off of FIGHT CLUB using Punch and Counterpunch.
     
  3. Baron Prime

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    Very nice.
     
  4. Nachtsider

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    We have met the enemy and he... is us. :bay 
     
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    This one is one of my favorites
     
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    Bravo, excellent piece!
     
  7. Mechafire

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    This is excellent. Always wanted to see a Mosaic centered around P/CP.
     
  8. Superquad7

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    This is a very cool piece. I think Counterpunch's mouth looks pretty odd, but that's nitpicky. The storytelling is very strong. Great work :thumb 
     
  9. Geminii

    Geminii Toyetic multiformophile

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    One panel. Counterpunch saying to Punch "I want you to hit me as hard as you can."
     
  10. jon

    jon That dude from the forest

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    I was thinking more of the whole narcolepsy thing. Waking up in strange places no idea how he got there. But that'd be pretty good too. Other autobots walking up seeing him fight himself. But I like the overall feel of this piece. I like the last scene the most with PCP realizing what they've been doing.
     
  11. Geminii

    Geminii Toyetic multiformophile

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    There's a lot of little nice touches, too.

    - Cloudraker(?)'s "Alright, 'Con, you're... Punch?" line.
    - That the McGuffin is being held in both Counterpunch's and Punch's left (sinister) hand.
    - That Punch's left shoulder is viewed in all previous panels as being yellow, but in the last panel (viewed from behind), it's the blue of Counterpunch's own color scheme.
    - That the characters coming through the wall are a Clone (who uses the opposite one-or-two-bots misdirection to P/CP), and Searchlight, a spy whose bio says he "sees all" and can look right through things with X-rays.
    - If it _is_ Cloudraker, he's known for being a neurotic mess who suffers mode-lock - something scary and not entirely out of the realm of possibility for Punch.
    - And of course, in the last panel, he's been caught, ahem, red-handed.
     
  12. Infosaur

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    There was another one (at least) a few years ago.

    Also am I the only one that thinks PCP is an odd abreviation for a Transformer that tends to black out and wake up in odd places?
     
  13. Geminii

    Geminii Toyetic multiformophile

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    "I'ma guest star on mah own album, y'all biscuitheads..."
     
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    Hype1 D Witwicky biographer

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    The art work is cool and though I do share Supersquad's nitpick about the mouth in that one panel, as far as the story telling goes I'll temporarily turn all my fingers into thumbs because it deserves ten thumbs up, lol

    And Geminii made great observations on the little extra touches...I didn't even know about or pick up on some of the things he points out, but even NOT knowing about them, they still give the reader a guller sense of the story.
     
  15. Superquad7

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    Who's SuperSquad? :lol 

    :poke 
     
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