2D Artwork: Transformers Mosaic: "The Treasure Within"

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  1. TF Mosaic

    TF Mosaic Well-Known Member

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    The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.

    These are some of those stories. This is:
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    It should be noted that while this project has been recognized by IDW Publishing and Hasbro, none of the works presented have been commissioned or solicited by either company. The stories are not official canon, except where noted. These stories are the result of Transformers enthusiasts taking the time out of their busy days to contribute to a universe they love. No one has been paid for the production of these stories.

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    THE TREASURE WITHIN

    Story and lettering:
    Franco Villa M3Gr1ml0ck on deviantART

    Lineart:
    Gianluca Gamba JazzLuca on deviantART

    Colors:
    Christian Ludwig

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  2. Razorrider

    Razorrider Well-Known Member

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    Interesting way of introducing the Duocons.
     
  3. Blueshift

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    There's too much 'tell' and not enough 'show' in this one for me, I'm afraid. It might have been better to have the first half show us Scavenger interacting with the other Constructicons, and then have him retreat to his 'find'
     
  4. Superquad7

    Superquad7 We're only human. Super Mod

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    I kinda agree with you and kinda disagree at the same time. I think your suggested way would give some variety, but perhaps at the expense of the visuals, as it may end up with a page that looks very cluttered. I do think some variety is needed as the dialogue boxes tend to go all over the place forsaking the visuals.

    I have to say I had to do a double take to make sure that was Battletrap and Flywheels. The visuals of their designs threw me off just a bit.

    I really like the story a lot, but I think I do agree with Blueshift to at least say that there does need to be some work done on the layout level. Nevertheless, this is a very fun piece!
     
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    i like it. Nice work!
     
  6. Rumble02

    Rumble02 Radicon of Obliticons

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    Fantastic. Thats how its done. Very good story
     

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