2D Artwork: Transformers Mosaic: "The Harvest"

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  1. TF Mosaic

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    The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.

    These are some of those stories. This is:
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    It should be noted that while this project has been recognized by IDW Publishing and Hasbro, none of the works presented have been commissioned or solicited by either company. The stories are not official canon, except where noted. These stories are the result of Transformers enthusiasts taking the time out of their busy days to contribute to a universe they love. No one has been paid for the production of these stories.

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    THE HARVEST

    Written by:
    Katherine McCord xxsomeoneelsexx.deviantart.com

    Art by:
    Razzie Mbessai razziembessai.deviantart.com

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  2. Lock Cade

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    Interesting...
     
  3. MACRAPTRON

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    wat
     
  4. AniProwl

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    What's up with the Mini-Fallens?

    How come they refer to The Fallen as Nemesis?

    How come Jetfire's acting like Megatron?
     
  5. SPLIT LIP

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    There's no way Starscream's that old.

    Come to think of it, not a whole lot of this makes sense.
     
  6. Tom-1

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    Isn't Earth the third planet in the solar system? Unless I missed an update to the definition, like how they booted Pluto off the team ;_;

    WAIT. Mabe Venus had life before us! : O

    Tom
     
  7. Superquad7

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    I say this with great hesitation, but this is one piece that I really don't enjoy on nearly any level. I will say that the storytelling itself (how panels are used, etc.) and the coloring are decent. Aside from that, I don't really have much to say.

    I don't think the illustrative style really fits (I'd think for the movie-verse, it needs to be either really cartoony or really realistic); others have already commented on the story; and much of it is just plain confusing (I had to do a double-take for panel 3 to make sure it was the same bot transforming, for example).

    All of that being said, I think the movie-verse has a hard time translating into comic visuals anyways. I think it works well for movies, but I've enjoyed little of the movie designs in comic book form. With that bias being said, I will also say that such bias really doesn't have a dramatic effect on my critique of this piece.

    I just understood it as Venus, but, yeah, admittedly there is some confusion there as well. Even a small caption identifying it would help.
     
  8. M3Gr1ml0ck

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    Maybe it is not the Sol System? Dialogues seem just suggest that this is one of the many stars the Seekers found and exploited to re-energize the AllSpark.

    The Movie Starscream is apparently not aware of these specific past history details, but maybe something happened in his long life and he forgot his origins, just like others seem to have forgotten as well (for instance, Optimus doesn't seem to be aware of his Prime legacy).
     
  9. Ultrawave

    Ultrawave Hey look, I have a title

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    ^This. I doubt its the Sol System. The "Mini Fallens" as someone said are most likely the other Primes. They refer to him as Nemesis because that would make him Nemesis Prime. (Since no one really knows what the Fallen's name is, it works)
     
  10. Superquad7

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    Actually, from just this piece, nothing like that can be determined. There is nothing in this piece that suggests a location other than it being the second planet in this system, whatever system that is.
     
  11. Belgrath

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    Okay art and coloring, but storyline is just "meh" IMO. And what's up with the Fallen being called Nemesis?
     

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