2D Artwork: Transformers Mosaic: "Creation Matrix"

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  1. TF Mosaic

    TF Mosaic Well-Known Member

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    The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.

    These are some of those stories. This is:
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    It should be noted that while this project has been recognized by IDW Publishing and Hasbro, none of the works presented have been commissioned or solicited by either company. The stories are not official canon, except where noted.
    These stories are the result of Transformers enthusiasts taking the time out of their busy days to contribute to a universe they love.
    No one has been paid for the production of these stories.


    Creation Matrix.” Story, Art & Letters by Damian Ghela.

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  2. Dropshot

    Dropshot Transform your destiny

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    Not my favorite.
     
  3. diablo

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    I really hope they don't kill of prime that quickly in the second movie - it kinda anticlimactic
     
  4. transmetal2dinobot

    transmetal2dinobot Sub-Commander

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    i'm conflicted on this one
     
  5. REDLINE

    REDLINE longer days, plz? Veteran

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    I don't think he's supposed to be dead, he just created "the matrix".
     
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    i thought it was pretty good, but i want to know IS prime dead or being reformated?
    the end isnt clear in my opinion
     
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    Rotorstorm OriginalRotorstorm Fanboy

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    a good idea though i don't know what to make of how it was written.

    the first half is quite good with prime and ratchet questioning it.
    but the second half seems rushed. There are stories that can't be told over a single page and this is one of them.

    A much more interesting approach would be for it to do nothing noticable to prime apart from making him a living walking allspark capable of bringing life to objects around him.
     
  8. General Magnus

    General Magnus Da Custodes of the Emprah

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    Sparkmatrix? Yeah not digging this one. sorry.
     
  9. kjeevahh

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    i would be surprised if something like this doesn't happen in the movie
     
  10. Geminii

    Geminii Toyetic multiformophile

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    No apostrophe in "its", and "infinite" doesn't have an "a" in it. Pet peeve.

    Spelling aside, I can't really tell what's going on - not so much a problem if this was a comic book page, but the Mosiacs are generally supposed to be reasonably complete scenes in and of themselves, as far as I know.

    The art's nice. It cleans up the designs well, the camera angles are good and the colors work. Not entire sure about the panel flow, though - someone with more experience can probably critique it better.
     

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