The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole. These are some of those stories. This is: It should be noted that while this project has been recognized by IDW Publishing and Hasbro, none of the works presented have been commissioned or solicited by either company. The stories are not official canon, except where noted. These stories are the result of Transformers enthusiasts taking the time out of their busy days to contribute to a universe they love. No one has been paid for the production of these stories. “Creation Matrix.” Story, Art & Letters by Damian Ghela.
i thought it was pretty good, but i want to know IS prime dead or being reformated? the end isnt clear in my opinion
a good idea though i don't know what to make of how it was written. the first half is quite good with prime and ratchet questioning it. but the second half seems rushed. There are stories that can't be told over a single page and this is one of them. A much more interesting approach would be for it to do nothing noticable to prime apart from making him a living walking allspark capable of bringing life to objects around him.
No apostrophe in "its", and "infinite" doesn't have an "a" in it. Pet peeve. Spelling aside, I can't really tell what's going on - not so much a problem if this was a comic book page, but the Mosiacs are generally supposed to be reasonably complete scenes in and of themselves, as far as I know. The art's nice. It cleans up the designs well, the camera angles are good and the colors work. Not entire sure about the panel flow, though - someone with more experience can probably critique it better.
