Have I set some sort of precedent by using Talon as a "hi-and-die" character? Nice to see he at least got his name mentioned... The action's flowing thick and fast here, and it's helped by the effects you've used. GIMP can be a tricky thing to work, but keep practicing. Even if you used Paint, I really like the shot where Sideswipe puts a laser through the tank guy's head. Awesome stuff
Some creepy chicks, they are... though what you expect out of a bunch of spiders? XD That last frame... did you edit it at all, 'cos it did look like he had his eyes closed in a manner fittin' for context
Gosh, the Death Cult is spooky as all-get-out! (But then, with a name like that, they're probably not going to be handing out cookies!) (Maybe poisoned cookies.)
A little update I´ve decided that the first season is mostly introducing the characters, why they are here, who they are, and their causes. There´s still a couple of more resistance fighters to introduce, along with some badguys. --------------------------------------------------------------------------
A short update. The oath is based on an oath from Bayblon 5. -----------------------------------------------------------------------
Got yourself another reader here! Fantastic story you've got going. I definitely look forward to reading more.