This story already has a great setting that should keep it clear and interesting enough to follow, and hope to see what you can do with GIMP 'cos that was honestly somethin' I hoped ya would fix, 'cos this bein' a serious story, MS paint effects can kinda take away from the mood ^^; (I even recall some guy insisting not to use GIMP even if he was recommended to use it... and not really telling why) And use of less often seen characters like Crystal is always a plus =D (not to mention how creepy ya made her to be XD)
Yeah Yeah,revenge is a good thing, But you killed Ironhide, Oh dear WHY?!, Thats it Im gettting a primus sized swatter
Holy cow that's deep. Excellent use of the various blackarachnia molds-even more so because you fleshed out their powers and abilities. Killing ironhide-this is one tough spider! (great way to help hit on the seriousness of the situation too).
Aaah, good to see a turncoat who isn't doin' whatever they're doing for anything noble in particular, just revenge. ^^ Though this did yet again set a group of characters nicely =D
Why would you do that? Yeah, it´s how desperate the situation has become. The Rebels are scrapping the bottom of the barrel when it comes to troops, hence why they let a sadist amoral bot like Crystal into their ranks There´s still more to come.
GM: Hmm...not necessarily a bad move, either. If she succeeds in her vendetta, that's a potentially dangerous element cleared away...and if she fails, well, there will be fewer assassins, one way or the other...of course, she would definitely be one of those complicating factors, if peace is to return. ...in the meantime, she's undoubtedly a dangerous weapon, and she's somewhere you can keep tabs on her. Always a good thing, where assassins are concerned... I'm sure Thundercracker's motives aren't as Machiavellian, though.
Characters? I have a few more to intro. In fact the first parts of the strip are to intro the characters to the reader. So far we have Thundercracker (leader), and Crystal (assasin). As for the Liege,, I was actually thinking of the G2 character at the time I wrote the strip. Still, I´m sorry Grimlok, it was not with the intention of stealing any of your ideas.
This is a good start. I like the mystery and the danger the 'good' toys face here. Crystal Widow (nice name btw) appears to be the lead character for now, and I like her background. As Coolhand suggested, you might wanna give GIMP a try. It can do wonders and can help your comic a lot. Keep it up!
I'm sensing a lot of tension between members of the resistance. Say will their be Autobots who will be working for the new order?
Dude, I am loving this. I'm a sucker for dark stories, and this one is as dark as it gets! Megatron AND Prime dead? Wow, nice move! I'm liking the makeup of the resistance so far, and how you've shown there are plenty of collaborators with the new order. You've got yourself a fan