Transformers: Legacy

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  1. General Magnus

    General Magnus Da Custodes of the Emprah

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    This is my first attempt at a serious comic. It has no fixed continuity. It´s a brand new story. Hope you guys enjoy it. Now with you, "Transformers: Legacy"

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  2. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Well-Known Member

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    Not bad, not bad...
     
  3. Plastic_nomer

    Plastic_nomer Doing the unmentionables

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    Love the intro, and thundercracker as a main,or atleast I think so, is win^^
     
  4. FattBoy94

    FattBoy94 is playing "catch up"

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    I'm guessing Thundercraker is the "Shatered Glass" Starscream.
     
  5. ectoneon

    ectoneon Well-Known Member

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    Holy cow man. Way to start off with a bang!!! I'm hooked.
     
  6. Hype1

    Hype1 D Witwicky biographer

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    Interesting.
     
  7. gunman_sr5

    gunman_sr5 Energon Station Comander

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    Off to a great start.
     
  8. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    Good start. I like the atmospheric scene setting of the narration, and the sick part of my brain LOVES the idea that Leige Maximus keeps Prime's corpse strung up to break the spirits of any Autobot dissenters. That's very cool. Also, I'd like to point out that the first panel, that opening shot of Jetfire, is a GREAT angle and pose. Looks really moody and introspective. Great work. :thumbs2: 

    One quick suggestion, you might want to try downloading GIMP and take a glance at some of the tutorials in the forum. I know I sometimes come across as a GIMP salesman, but especially in a serious comic, the MS PAINT gunshot effects you've used here slightly take me out of the narrative. It only takes about two minuets to whip up the kind of laser blasts Warring at Play throws around, and it really adds to the visual appeal of the comic.

    Also, the second panel has a spelling error: "Wars that went ni place." I know I'm the LAST person who should be talking about spelling errors, but it does take people out of the story.

    Overall, good stuff. Looking forward to your next update, because I want to know where this story goes, and that's the core goal of any photocomic. :thumbs2: 
     
  9. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    Interesting. I might have to keep an eye on this comic. :) 
     
  10. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    :popcorn  Great new series G.M

    I wonder who's with Thundercracker's resistance team?
     
  11. Shockscream

    Shockscream Chairman of Nerd Day

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    Hmmm... Interesting. Indeed, I shall keep an eye on this.
     
  12. General Magnus

    General Magnus Da Custodes of the Emprah

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    Thanks for the initial support guys. Regarding TC and the resistance forces, it´s still a working project. He was not really the introspective and moody type before the Liege came. He changed and a lot of Transformers have changed in order to survive. Others are just opportunistic douches and this will apply to both Autobots and Dcepticons who decide to follow the Liege´s orders.
     
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    General Magnus Da Custodes of the Emprah

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  14. General Magnus

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  15. Lock Cade

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    OMG, Blackarachnia killed Barricade! :cry 
     
  16. General Magnus

    General Magnus Da Custodes of the Emprah

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    There´s more to Crystal than meets the eye. I plan to explain why she´s a "vampire".

    Btw, anyone here has that symbol that had the Autobot and Decepticon faction symbols united? I kinda would want to use that in my comic.
     
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    Dragonwolf dragon-bot

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    interesting stuff so far
     
  18. ectoneon

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    Crystal is kinda creepy. I wasn't expecting that. (It's awesome though). I have one criticism though. I mean this in a good natured way, I'm not trying to bash. If you are gonna be using ms paint for the effects, Try and use brighter colors so they stand out more from the background. Again just trying to help, not trying to be an aft.
    Also-Is this the symbol you were talking about?

    Image:Ancient Transformer Symbol.png - Transformers Wiki
    Just about every symbol ever can be found on this page
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    Keep it up man!
     
  19. General Magnus

    General Magnus Da Custodes of the Emprah

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    Thanks. I was searching for that symbol. Regarding Ms paint. I sent a PM to Coolhand and downloaded GIMMP. I hope he can shoot me some tips on how to do laser blasts and explosions.

    And yeah Crystal is creepy, it´s part of her character. Those that oppose Maximus are not all like TC who wants his world back. Some, like her have their own reasons, which will be explained in time.
     
  20. ectoneon

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    Cool good luck with gimp! Be sure to check the tutorials thread as well. I look forward to the continuing story
     

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