This is my first attempt at a serious comic. It has no fixed continuity. It´s a brand new story. Hope you guys enjoy it. Now with you, "Transformers: Legacy" -------------------------------------------------------------------------
Good start. I like the atmospheric scene setting of the narration, and the sick part of my brain LOVES the idea that Leige Maximus keeps Prime's corpse strung up to break the spirits of any Autobot dissenters. That's very cool. Also, I'd like to point out that the first panel, that opening shot of Jetfire, is a GREAT angle and pose. Looks really moody and introspective. Great work. One quick suggestion, you might want to try downloading GIMP and take a glance at some of the tutorials in the forum. I know I sometimes come across as a GIMP salesman, but especially in a serious comic, the MS PAINT gunshot effects you've used here slightly take me out of the narrative. It only takes about two minuets to whip up the kind of laser blasts Warring at Play throws around, and it really adds to the visual appeal of the comic. Also, the second panel has a spelling error: "Wars that went ni place." I know I'm the LAST person who should be talking about spelling errors, but it does take people out of the story. Overall, good stuff. Looking forward to your next update, because I want to know where this story goes, and that's the core goal of any photocomic.
Thanks for the initial support guys. Regarding TC and the resistance forces, it´s still a working project. He was not really the introspective and moody type before the Liege came. He changed and a lot of Transformers have changed in order to survive. Others are just opportunistic douches and this will apply to both Autobots and Dcepticons who decide to follow the Liege´s orders.
There´s more to Crystal than meets the eye. I plan to explain why she´s a "vampire". Btw, anyone here has that symbol that had the Autobot and Decepticon faction symbols united? I kinda would want to use that in my comic.
Crystal is kinda creepy. I wasn't expecting that. (It's awesome though). I have one criticism though. I mean this in a good natured way, I'm not trying to bash. If you are gonna be using ms paint for the effects, Try and use brighter colors so they stand out more from the background. Again just trying to help, not trying to be an aft. Also-Is this the symbol you were talking about? Image:Ancient Transformer Symbol.png - Transformers Wiki Just about every symbol ever can be found on this page Insignia - Transformers Wiki Keep it up man!
Thanks. I was searching for that symbol. Regarding Ms paint. I sent a PM to Coolhand and downloaded GIMMP. I hope he can shoot me some tips on how to do laser blasts and explosions. And yeah Crystal is creepy, it´s part of her character. Those that oppose Maximus are not all like TC who wants his world back. Some, like her have their own reasons, which will be explained in time.
Cool good luck with gimp! Be sure to check the tutorials thread as well. I look forward to the continuing story