Transformers in the House

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Autobot_Wall-E, Aug 21, 2009.

  1. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    My first time with funnies and I am using Microsoft Paint so don't be too hard with judgments. Episode 1

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    Please tell me what you think. I will continue to update this even if this one is bad and I will hopefully get better. This is separate from my YouTube series btw.
     
  2. Dremare

    Dremare Had an Epiphany

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    .... Maybe you should have started out with a comic instead of a title panel.
     
  3. doomboy536

    doomboy536 Universe Onslaught fanboy

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    There are plenty of people here on the forums who use MS Paint in their comics, so don't sweat :)  I'm interested in seeing your comic!
     
  4. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Episode 2. I kind of used someone else's idea about using a simple line to connect dialogue to a character but anyway... Here it is.

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  5. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Ok I promise this is the last update for a while. Megatron goes back for some planning. Tried to get funny with this one but I might have failed... please don't be too mean about it.

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    So there you go. Hope you guys are enjoying my comic.
     
  6. myhobby

    myhobby ArigatouArigatouArigatou-

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    starscream: "but that was my idea, megatron!"

    megatron: "silence, fool! you're not alowed to have ideas!"

    microsoft-paint FTW!

    in other news i have given people my opinion on this site 717 times!
     
  7. Robticon

    Robticon Out of the Game

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    :lol  That last one has really funny. :D 
    MS Paint? You're doing better with it
    then I did. :lol 
     
  8. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    No need to apologize if you feel your comic isn't up to snuff... just exercise your creativity and have fun making the comic. Most everyone around here will either laugh if they enjoy it, or offer some constructive criticism. Nobody's going to beat you up or anything.

    I liked the last one. I can see Megatron stealing an idea and taking credit for it. :lol 
     
  9. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    It's update time!

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  10. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Second update right after the first!

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    But wait! There's more!
     
  11. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Ok this is my last post until someone comments or something because I don't want to be accused of mass-bumping or anything. I just figured I would post a few bios so people can get into the characters better.


    Optimus Prime-

    Class: Legends

    Team Position: Autobot Leader

    Known For: Serious Business

    Bio: The leader of the Autobots (as usual) he is normally very serious and rarely smiles. Has an obsession with beating Megatron and dislikes Yellow Jacket a lot.
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    Jazz-

    Class: Legends

    Team Position: Autobot Second in Command

    Known For: Kicking off battles

    Bio: Usually picking a fight or next to Optimus giving or taking commands, Jazz is laid back in general but get him in a fight and he takes on a cocky crazy side.
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    Megatron-

    Class: Legends

    Team Position: Decepticon Leader

    Known For: Sneaking around trying to defeat the Autobots with any type of weapon or tactic that he can.

    Bio: Kicked out of Cybertron after a long war he traveled to Earth with his remaining Decepticons in tow, he now seeks revenge on Optimus Prime. And he plans to use the many random items found around The House.
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    Starscream-

    Class: Legends

    Team Position: Decepticon Second in Command

    Known For: Trying to upstage Megatron and failing.

    Bio: Trying to prove himself a more worthy leader than Megatron, Starscream tries to get Megatron to submit to his ideas and plans only to have them ripped apart in his face or stolen and taken credit for.
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    Bumblebee-

    Class: Deluxe

    Team Position: Scout

    Known For: Usually getting stuck in situations with his little brother.

    Bio: Wanting to be famous for being a legendary Autobot warrior, Bumblebee dives headfirst into conflict, but having his kid brother Yellow Jacket around seems to hold him back. He can be a bit gloomy and self conscious and secretly cares about his brother's well being more than he outwardly shows.
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    Class: Legends

    Team Position: Newly assigned to being "the lookout"

    Known For: Annoying everyone around by being overly eager and talking too much about ridiculous things.

    Bio: He doesn't mean to be annoying, he just wants to talk and be like his idol: Optimus Prime. OP seems not to like him very much, but that doesn't stop Yellow Jacket from doing his best as the oh so "special" lookout position.
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    Breakaway, Sideswipe, Smokescreen, the recruits, and the other Decepticons will get bios once I introduce them. Please comment on my comic to tell me if you do or don't like it (even if you hate it tell me and I will change.) I just don't want to have 5 million posts in a row done by me alone and get an infraction for mass bumping. Please comment on the comic or anything at all!
     
  12. Magmatron22

    Magmatron22 HADOUKEN!!!

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    :lolol :lolol  I love yellow jacket
     
  13. Thunder_Cracker

    Thunder_Cracker Friendship is Evil!!

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    Nooooooooooo not the Ninetndo!!! T.T

    Noooooooooooooo not the PSP!!! T.T

    The alarm clock was the only acceptable thing to be aloha-whacked :D 

    Nice comic ^^ I await more :) 
    Would help if your pics were a little less blurry, but it's all good nonetheless ^_^
     
  14. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Thank you for the people who commented and allowed for another update! :D 

    I will update this post with the comic update later on today. Two have been filmed and one is edited and uploaded to Flickr so they will both be out soon! EDIT: and here it is! the next episode will follow shortly....

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    (It's MegaTRON you tart -_-)

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    Ahh rats :D  Looks like Megatron got away! But here are the bios for the Autobot recruits: The Twins!

    Skids-

    Class: Deluxe

    Team Position: Recruit/Foot Soldier

    Known For: Knowing "everything" and his big mouth

    Bio: Twin brother of Mudflap, Skids also idolizes Optimus Prime. He thinks that he's street and he also thinks that he knows everything that there is to know, but deep down he is young and inexperienced and is a bit of a coward.
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    Mudflap-

    Class: Deluxe

    Team Position: Recruit/Foot Soldier

    Known For: Cracking jokes and not paying attention

    Bio: Mudflap is a silly little bot with ADD. He is Skid's twin brother and although he is the stronger of the two, Skids pushes him around a bit. He isn't known to be the smartest bot on Cybertron, but he is very brave and loyal to his friends. One of the few Autobots who isn't annoyed by Yellow Jacket.
     
  15. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Here is the second update for today, please comment even if you don't like it! If you think it's bad and tell me what is bad I can change! But for now, here is the next part.

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    Sorry if this one was a bit boring, I just needed this scene to build up to a major point in the plot. The ext one will be more fun I promise.
     
  16. Magmatron22

    Magmatron22 HADOUKEN!!!

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    FO' Sho'! :lolol 
     
  17. saberconvoy

    saberconvoy Well-Known Member

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    cool comic
     
  18. Omega Charge

    Omega Charge Prepare for trouble...

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    Ah, looks like Starscream has plans.

    Your pics are pretty blurry, which might put some people off, but I think it's a cool little comic you got going here! :D 
     
  19. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Next episode is quite a long one but I think you'll enjoy it :D  I will be posting it in two parts since it is so long. Finally get to see the rest of the Autobot team.

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    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Here is part 2 of my previous update. I'm going on a "vacation" to the most stupid place ever but I have an idea for the comics as long as I can take my dad's laptop with me.

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    Some bios:

    Breakaway-

    Class: Deluxe

    Team Position: Flyboy

    Known For: Being the peacekeeper and loving space, the sky, and anything above him

    Bio: Breakaway is laid back and has a heart of gold. He is very good at cooling down heated arguments and helping things come to a resolve. Breakaway loves flying and everything associated with it excpet for Decepticons. He hates them for giving flying things a bad name and wants to take down every one that dares cross him or his friends.
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    Sideswipe-

    Class: Deluxe

    Team Position: Close Quarters combat specialist

    Known For: Going fast all the time and trying to outdo/outclass everyone.

    Bio: Sideswipe thinks that he is the coolest thing and likes to show off. His cocky attitude gets him in some dangerous fights but he speeds through them and rarely loses which only feeds his ever growing pride.
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    Smokescreen-

    Class: Deluxe

    Team Position: Tech Support

    Known For: Being a perfectionist and confusing people with words and actions

    Bio: Smokescreen likes to set traps and makes things blow up almost as much as confusing his enemy. His favorite escape tactic when he is outnumbered/outgunned is to throw a smoke grenade into his enemy's midst and run like heck laughing about it. Usually repairs the team's computer when it's down.
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