TransFormers III: One Shall Stand, One Shall Fall

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  1. Long_Haul

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    The Fall: Chapter One
    Written By: Long_Haul & Thunderchild

    Optimus: Ironhide?, You and Bumblebee Take The left, Find Sam & Makayla Then Touch Back At the rendezvous Point. I’ll telecom Omega Supreme of Our situation.

    Ironhide: Grrrrr. Right! But you better be back at that point when we get there, and I mean that Sir…. Com’ on Bumblebee, LET’S ROLL OUT!!!

    Bumblebee: ………….!!! (Bumblebee’s Voice transmitter is permanently damage, only sounds of static exit his voice box)

    As They Transformed into Vehicle mode,
    Bumblebee & Ironhide can sense something isn’t right. But have no intentions on disobeying a direct order.
    Besides Bumblebee didn’t come this far just to turn back now. He was on a mission, and the feelings for his leader were not going to cloud his optics.


    Optimus: Omega?! , Come In;

    Omega Supreme: Yes Optimus!

    Optimus: Have Yourself Ready to Transport Bumblebee, Ironhide & the humans, Back to Base. Soon as they reach you, Is That Clear?

    Omega Supreme: Loud Sir……SIR??!!!!

    Optimus: What Is It Solider?!

    Omega Supreme: Give Those Decepticons Hell.

    Optimus: I Intend Too.

    As Optimus gazed upon Cybertron, He Saw the Slaughter of his fellow Autobots. He felt a slight shock in the depth of his Spark. Not knowing what it meant. But knowing what he must do. He had visions & Experienced déjà vu recently, but the scene he witnessed, was as clear as day. Today marked the dawn of a new era, or what he hoped for. This has gone beyond trying to make amends. ...Today is the day that a continuous war between Good and Evil, Allies and. Enemies, Autobots and. Decepticons, will finally Come To its Long Awaited end. ONE SHALL STAND ONE SHALL FALL.

    Starscream: This war is over, Cybertron is mine. And prime’s head shall rest on my mantel Along with the corpse of our once So Called Leader, (Starscream let’s out a laugh of insanity, that felt like it has been built up for centuries.) And While His Spark flickers in the grasp of my cold claws Autobots, Decepticons & the Entire Cosmos will now know, what I’ve known all along. I AM KING STARSCREAM; I have no equal & Fear No One. Hahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!

    Shockwave: Radar Systems show that two Autobots are making their way towards the jail Corridor, Seems they’ve come to rescue the flesh lings.

    Starscream: Remind me to type out their death certificates later, (He Grins, and Chuckles) In fact, turn off all security locks to the jails mainframe, lead them right to their earth friends, No need for Autobot scum to turn my kingdom into a scrapheap on their search. Once they’ve reached the earth children, unleash Ravage; let him roll around in the mixture of oil and blood.

    Shockwave: Right Away Sir, the killing of two birds with one stone. How Delightful.

    Starscream: Or in this case, FOUR!!!!!!!

    Ironhide and Bumblebee made there way through ruins and small contingents of rival Cybertronians duking it out, but they couldn’t allow such distractions to hinder there progress. The further they got from the main battlefield, over looked by Starscream's tower, the less fighting they encountered. Soon they found themselves nearing the stasis correctional facility, and the ruined district was nothing short of a ghost town.

    Ironhide: Its quiet here… too quiet. (He said as they slowed there pace to a crawl, cautiously maneuvering around fallen structures and lifeless mechs) Keep your scanners peeled.

    When the pair reached the battered walls surrounding the prison, an uneasy feeling over came the pair. There weren’t any guards, and even the prisoners were quiet, as if they weren’t even there. Ironhide and Bumblebee both transformed and made there way onto the ground via a grumbling wall. When they reached the entrance to the building… again there was nothing to find.

    Ironhide: Smells like a trap

    He armed both of his arm mounted weapons, as Bumblebee did the same and activated his battle visor. He entered first, while Ironhide followed up the rear. They slowly made there way through the dark passages ways, and followed the signs that pointed toward the holding cells. They knew the Decepticons wouldn’t attempt to place human in stasis lock. They made there way down a number of stairs, and finally arrived in the hold facility. A single light alerted them to presence of light; it was the light illuminating from the energized bars of Sam and Makayla’s cell.

    Sam: BEE!

    Ironhide: Stand back. (Ironhide warned before blowing the cell’s control’s effectively deactivating the energized bars)

    Sam and Makayla immediately rushed into the awaiting arms of Bumblebee, never before had either felt the desire to embrace his cold metallic body until now. But despite the joy they felt for seeing there friend and for being freed, Iron new they weren’t out of the woods yet.

    Ironhide: Save it, we’ve got to move!

    Bumblebee slung Sam and Makayla on his shoulders and the two ‘bot’s sprinted up the stairs and towards the exit. When they exited the facility they were promptly met with a large Decepticon force, patiently awaiting the arrival of the Autobot’s.

    Ironhide: It’s an ambush! Fall back. (He hollered through the eruption of gun and blaster fire as he and Bumblebee ducked back into the entrance.)

    After a few short minutes the gun fight was beginning to take its toll on the building, the two Autobot’s and there helpless human counterparts, weren’t going to last much longer. But the urgency of the situation didn’t set in, until an explosion sent a piece of shrapnel into Sam’s face. He fell to the floor screaming and clutching his eye, as blood trickled from his hands. Bee was instantly enraged, and inspired. He blew a whole in a nearby wall with his stinger cannon, then roughly pushed Ironhide toward it. Ironhide was never one to run from a fight, but he had never seen this look on Bumble Bee’s face before. He understood what Bumble Bee wanted of him and reluctantly agreed.


    Ironhide: Get him in. (He said to Makayla, as he transformed.)

    Makayla: Move your hand, move your hand. (She said to Sam, fighting his hands away from his face. She ten removed the shrapnel from his bloody eyed, ripped her shirt to create a make shift eye patch for him, then helped him into Ironhides back seat.)

    As Ironhide drove through the hole in the wall and escaped with the humans, a few of the Decepticons noticed the fleeing vehicle, but were intercepted by Bumble Bee before they could pursue
     
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    Long_Haul N*ggacon

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    This is My 1st time writing a Fan fic. So let me knw what ya'll think.
     
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    my only problem with your script is that there are many grammar mistakes,oh and your sig is way too big..remove before it gets removed by someone else :wink: 
     
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    Ok, Great, but what does the story sound like. im not a pro at this.
     
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    Just a heads up

    Long_Haul and I are both writing this story, I failed to do a decent sweep for any spelling and gramtic errors, (and we all know you cant rely on spell check all the time.) but we'll make sure to keep a better look out for that. All that aside, we've got some kewl concepts in the works for this, we do hope you enjoy.
     
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    not bad.
     
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    Not bad, a good read.
     
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    Transformers: The Fall Chapter 2

    Transformers: The Fall chapter two.

    The smoke from the explosions polluted the air and the screams of gun fire echoed for miles. Optimus always questioned their purpose, The Existence of his kind. Were they simply designed to rage on in this war, or was it deeper than that. Just when his mind began to absorb the fact the answer to that question would remain unknown, his concentration was interrupted by the shrieks of an ungodly voice from across the battlefield.

    Starscream: OPTIMUS?!....... IS THIS IT? YOU, STANDING IN THE MIST OF BATTLE WHILE YOUR ARMY FALLS TO ITS KNEES AT THE HANDS OF THE DECEPTICONS?

    Optimus: ………

    Starscream: WHAT?! NO WORDS FROM THE EVER SO SPEECHFUL LEADER?

    Optimus: ………

    Starscream: FINE! Maybe this will temp you. **Snap**

    Just then the Constructicons: Mixmaster & Long Haul escorted Ratchet & Arcee out from the unknowns of the Tower in shackles, and threw them to the feet of their leader. They were captured while serving on a mission in the search for Sam & Makayla. They’ve been missing for 2 years and were reported M.I.A. Behind the bars of a Decepticon prison, one could only fathom the torture and pain they’ve receive. This caught the attention of Optimus Prime instantly. The new king then preceded his assault, and picked up Ratchet by his throat and dangled the Autobot over the cliff’s that plat owed his tower , in hopes to provoke Prime.

    Starscream: NOW PRIME, I STAND HERE WITH YOUR OWN IN MY GRASP, STRUGGLING FOR HIS PATHETIC LIFE AND ALL YOU CAN DO IS GOCK. YOUR COMODERAY MAKES YOU WEAK.

    Optimus: Starscream …. Let them go. This doesn’t concern them and you know that.

    Starscream: YOU SEEM TO FORGET THAT THIS CONCERNS ANYONE WHO DECIDES TO GET IN MY WAY. MEGATRON REALIZED THAT AS HE CLINGED FOR LIFE ON THE COLD GROUNDS OF CYBERTRON…….. (HAHA) AND SO WILL YOU.

    Optimus: If you want me, feel free to follow your needs. Follow your dark, mystic path if you wish. But release the two. YOU DON’T WANT TO DO THIS!!!!

    Starscream: Oh, IS THAT A FACT? Hmmmm. (He Grins) WELL PRIME YOUR ABSOULTLY RIGHT. I DON’T. DROPING A WORTHLESS PIECE OF SCRAP FROM THIS HEIGHT LEAVES A POSSIBLITY OF SURVIVAL.

    Optimus: STARSCREAM, DON’T, FALL BACK!

    Starscream: AHHHHH!!

    Ratchet: Optimus Helppp....!

    Through the metal, wires and the tough interiors went the arm of Starscream. He ripped out the spark core from Ratchet’s chest, which he then crushed in his cold claws. Arcee looked away in horror only to wonder what would become of her. Optimus watched, as he witnessed the unforgivable murder of his partner, his comrade and his friend. He tried to quickly put together a plan of attack, but could not make a move till Arcee was out of harms way. Both eyes were glued upon their fellow autobot as the honest glow flickered out slowly from his optics.

    Long Haul: Ah, No fun. His death was ‘pose to be mine. I’m sure I’ll have to dispose of the remains. (His face formed an expression as if it’s all he does) Fine, But I call Prime.

    Starscream: No, I have special plans for Optimus Prime, you and Mixmaster may share the female.
    (The two then began to stain the ground on their murderous path towards Arcee.)

    Mixmaster: Hello lil’ lady, Oh don’t be scared.

    Long Haul: You should feel honored to receive a Constructicons death.

    Mixmaster: The Strongest will survive and the weak shall parish. Unlucky for you, that’s what category you’re placed in.

    Arcee unburied her face from the gravel and looked up only to see two 30ft tall Decepticons towering over her. Long Haul quickly grabbed Arcee by her wrist and lifted the female Bot off the ground and right in front of him. She got to stare death in the face. He began to crush both her wrist, and she let out an indescribable scream heard throughout the heavens.

    Arcee: You Monsters, (*Pant*) Why? (*Pant*) does…. It really…. Serve you Delight…. causing pain? You make me sick, you filthy sack of …….

    Long Haul: Now, Now missy. You shouldn’t speak like that.

    Mixmaster: It’s not lady like, Right Boss? (Mixmaster Then Transforms in vehicle mode and the mixing drum begins to circulate)

    Starscream: No it’s not.

    Optimus: NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

    Starscream looked over his shoulder to lock eyes with his nemesis. Optimus notices two things
    1) The flames of hell filled Starscream’s retinas to the brim, blinding him.
    2) Another Murder of his kind would take place.
    Arcee believed her end soon approached, so with her remaining energy & hope, she struggled to break free of the grip which held her close. It was no use; she was quickly overwhelmed by the strength of the Constructicon. Arcee was then thrown, with disturbing force, into the back of Mixmaster’s Drum. The screams sent chills up Optimus’ robotic spine; they could just barely be heard over the sounds of the vortex’s grinding gears. Then silence fills Prime’s listening sensors. Mixmaster transforms back to robot mode.


    Mixmaster: Wow! Did you hear those high notes? Hahaha!

    Long Haul: Best ones I’ve heard all day.

    Mixmaster: I Agree.

    Starscream: NOW PRIME, WHEN YOU’RE READY TO MEET YOUR FATE, (He Chuckles) I’LL BE WAITING. THAT IS, IF YOU CAN MAKE IT UP HERE IN ONE PIECE (He leads his two minions back inside the tower)

    Optimus fell to the ground, realizing he just stood there and watched the extermination of his two friends. With that, he released a raging yell to the stars, so loud he made barley standing towers around him finally crumble.

    Optimus: Arcee, Ratchet. I promise you, your deaths will not be in vain. You wore the Autobot insignia proudly. (He looks to his side to see a dead soldier, reaches over to place his fingertips in fallen energon fluid. Smears it over his face like war paint, Then rose back on his feet)
    As I do. No more questions will cloud my mind. It is clear what I must do. It shines a path to my destiny which may also be my fate.


    Inside the Decepticon Tower

    Starscream: Well, seems Optimus is ready to face the music. Bout time, I’ve grown tired of these weaklings.

    Ramjet: Ironhide & Bumblebee have reached the humans and prepare to exit. Shall I intercept?

    Starscream: No need Ramjet, Release Ravage 1 & 2. It is time to put them down for good, plus there’s an ambush surprise awaiting their arrival.

    Ramjet: I’m on it.

    Shockwave: Sir, we are making excellent headway. Our charts indicate that at our current rate, we will
    have eliminated over HALF of the Autobot army. Cybertron will be ours!

    Starscream: Wrong Shockwave Cybertron already belongs to me; it’s just a matter of sweeping the grime from underneath our feet.

    Shockwave: Brilliant sir, what measures should we take with Optimus Prime? I feel he may still pose a threat.

    Starscream: Your feelings do not misguide you Shockwave. He is not the type to back down; Prime will try to succeed at all cost. It’s that motivation he has given himself.

    Shockwave: So what do we do from here?

    Starscream: It’s time I fill you in on phase 2: “Maximum Takeover”. But for now, let’s have some more fun with Prime.

    Shockwave: “Maximum Takeover?”… Excellent sir, Shall I release the drones? They should at least keep him busy while we go over it with no interruptions.

    Starscream: Then it’s settled; Send the drones.

    Shockwave: Right away Starscream….. I mean “KING” Starscream.

    Starscream: Long Haul, Mixmaster?

    Long Haul: Yes!
    Mixmaster: Yes!

    Starscream: Go to Grounds, escort the drones to Prime then hold your position. If he manages to get pass them & is toting a little luck, I want him taken down. No questions. IS THAT UNDERSTOOD!

    Long Haul: Gotcha

    Mixmaster: Yeah, Yeah. Let’s go.

    Starscream: What is taking that half wit so long? Simple tasks can never be taking care of. (*Chirp*) “Ramjet, this is your leader. Come in…Ramjet telecom back with a status report immediately

    Starscream: Ahh! Shockwave go and check on him.

    The Constructicons made their way down to the battlefield with over a half dozen drones, meanwhile Shockwave headed down to the prison blocks to start his search in the disappearance of Ramjet.

    On The Battlefield

    Optimus is ready for whatever may come his way. Just then the towers ground doors opened and from the shadows stepped out Long Haul & Mixmaster and along with them a half dozen of Decepticon clones. A red eyed army lined up awaiting their 1st order.

    Mixmaster: Well, well Optimus. Seems we have been chosen as the instruments of your demise. How does that grab you?

    Long Haul: I sure hope you enjoyed the show earlier, because you’ll be receiving the same treatment.

    Optimus: You can blame YOUR evil ways for the death of my friends
    .
    Mixmaster: That maybe so, But you were suppose to play the “Hero”, be the leader you think you are and save them.

    Optimus: Soon as I’m done running through your mindless drones without hesitation, your heads will roll ruggedly across the pavement of Cybertron, and you will know the power of the Primes and the strength of the Autobots. Now how does THAT grab YOU!? (Primes hand converted to his heat shank and he pulled the pistol out from his back)

    Long Haul: The execution of “Optimus Prime” will ink its self in the history tablets of the Decepticons. And my name will partner that page.

    Mixmaster: DRONES, ATTENTION! THE ONE IN YOUR PATH IS NAMED “OPTIMUS PRIME: LEADER OF OUR ENEMIES” MARCH FORWARD AND TEAR EACH LIMB FROM HIS BODY! SHOW NO MERCY!

    The blood thirsty Decepticons started their march towards the target in sight. Untamable like a pack of rabid dogs and Optimus was going to keep his promise. As he charged the army without a doubt in his mind, you could see the spirits of his good friends behind him.

    At the Prison


    Bumble Bee was making quick work of the Decepticon ambush. He was in an infuriated rage. He sprang from his battered hold in the prison entryway, and soared through the air… stray blaster and gun fire just barely missing him as the Decepticon’s attempted to adjust. Bumble Bee landed on the largest Decepticon in the bunch, he was nearly four times the size of him, but Bee dropped him with ease, planted his foot on the ‘Con’s throat, using his falling weight to knock his opponent to the ground. Then, while still standing on the Decepticon, he fired off a round into its head, effectively deactivating it.

    He then rolled off of the Decepticon now deceased, dodging the laser fire of another ‘Con, then hopped up from his roll into a jump kick, which dazed his next victim. Using his dazed victim as a shield, he allowed the’ Con to absorb numerous shots from his comrades, while he plugged two more ‘Cons with blasts of his own. He then ripped the spark of his victim from its chest plate, and hurdled the lifeless mech at the remaining ‘Con before him. When the ‘Con dodged the body flying at him, he stood up to find a surprise attack from Bumble Bee.

    Bee used his right hand, converted into its blaster mode, to uppercut the ‘Con, the uppercut was accentuated with a blast from the cannon, disintegrating his enemies’ entire head. All that remained were two more behind him, which he was alerted to by getting hit in the back with there bullets. He smartly spun around and chucked the spark in this hand at them, then shot at the flying energy source when it fell to the feet of his adversaries. They were lost in the explosion that resulted.

    With his friends on the run, and the Ambush team taken care of, Bumble Bee’s rage was beginning to subside, now he was concerned about Sam, and wanted to hurry up and join them. As he began to transform into car mode, a missile zoomed in and prevented him from completely transforming. He was forced to remain in Robot mode, and he picked himself up, slightly damaged, and discovered two Ravage drones nimbly descending the prison walls. He had dealt with one of these before, back in Jordan, now he would find out if there was more than one way to skin a cat…




    To Be Continued..............
     
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    Hello, i want to thank all those who replied & shown support. Like i said this is my 1st time doing a fan fic. Sorry if it takes a while for me to post, "Internet problems." But i hope this chapter makes up for it. Stay Turned for chapter 3 coming next week. And a Huge thanks to thunder, for really making this stay fresh to def. But keep replying and we'll keep posting.

    THANKS
     
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    It's a very engaging tale so far, but boy, is this dark. I mean, those two deaths were really brutal. I take it you're definitely trying to settle the score for the Cons.
     
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    Long_Haul N*ggacon

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    Im a huge decepticon fan, but im just trying to make it good. remember this is just the intro story......... so keep checking back, chapter 3 will be here this week. Dont miss it.
     
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    Long_Haul N*ggacon

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    Looking for......

    Hola TF fans,
    Im looking for some Artist to put together some concepts for my fanfic. If your instrested, let me know. I;ve already got Bio's and Vehicle Pics. Me and my Partner Thunderchild put together some sick designs. Using some Bots & Cons that everyone will love. Plus i love the movie ideas and concepts, so ive decided to get that going with my story. So if theirs any takers just send me a reply.
    and tanks Again
     
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    As distrubing as it sounds, we really wanted this story to be violent, the main focus of the story will eventually be the raw action. But even I am pleasantly surprised with the story that's shaping up from our collective effort.

    Another interesting note to consider: Long_Haul came up with which Decepticons were going to use, and I came up with which Autobot's were going to use, so in a way where sorta pitting our favorites against each other in a very imaginative way.
     
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    Soon Soon!
     
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    Long_Haul N*ggacon

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    Hey TFW People,

    i wanna take this time to apologize. I just moved and Long Story, But Comcast Customer Service SUCKS!!!!
    But Here is Chapter 3, Hope You All enjoy it as much as i Damn did. lol
    Thank you once again to everyone who took the time to Read And post.

    *Keep it coming, and me and the big homie will keep it posted*
     
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    The Fall Chapter 3

    Chapter 3

    Bumble had already engaged the Ravage cats, and they were doing a number on him. One would flank him and plunge his long claws or teeth into Bee, while the other would stay back and shoot at him with the machine guns attached to his hip. Bee finally managed to reach over his shoulder and pluck the Ravage that was lodged onto his back off of him, and threw it at the other. While the two where regaining there bearings, Bee sprinted in and did a baseball slide into the two cats, tripping them up. Then, while they were down, Bumble Bee did a windmill spin (popular break dance move he saw once while surfing youtube with Sam) connecting with multiple kicks on the two cat bots, before he finally flipped up to his feet.

    Meanwhile, Ramjet had flown to the prison, but approached from the buildings rear entrance, and did not see the commotion taking place out front, he transformed, landed, and entered the building. Out front, the tide had changed. The Ravage units were now out matched. Bumble Bee had a strong choke hold on one, and delivered a massive soccer kick to the other. When the cat-bot smacked against the wall of the prison, Bee threw the other Ravage into it, then proceeded to blast them with his cannon. The two were blown into the building, and were equally damaged. Bee peered into the hole caused by his cannon fire, only to find that the Ravage units suffered more then structural damage, something had come loose in there primitive processors, and the units had begun to fight with each other.

    Now that they were no longer a threat to him, Bumble Bee transformed into his Camaro and roared off, hoping to catch up with Ironhide. Ramjet, was alerted to the sound of the cannon fire, and assumed these were the sounds of the Autobot’s demise at the hands of the Decepticon ambush. But when he turned the corner to investigate the sounds, all he found were two deranged Ravage units. They stopped fighting each other when the jet-bot came into view, and they immediately charged in our there new target. Ramjet was taken completely by surprise, and was instantly lost in the thrashing screams and ripping metal that now filled the halls of the abandoned prison.


    Elsewhere

    Ironhide zoomed through the battlefield, he avoided all stray fire and even managed to plow through a few unsuspecting Decepticons as he closed in on the rendezvous point. When the spot came into view, Optimus was no where to be found, no Surprise to Ironhide, but Omega Supreme was there, towering over the battlefield. A swarm of low ranking Seekers were assaulting the giant Autobot from the air, and Menasor was attacking from the ground. Omega wasn’t at any risk of being defeated, not at the moment any way, but Ironhide was where he was supposed to be, and there was a good fight to be had.


    Ironhide: We’re here. Take cover behind that barricade (He said to Makayla, as she helped Sam out of the truck) I’m going to help Omega, shout if you need me.

    With that Ironhide, transformed then shot off a few rockets to get Menasors attention. Then he charged in to meet the combiner head on. Though Menasor was considerably larger than he, Ironhide's battle finesse was second to known, and he took the advantage in the fight almost immediately. Every punch he threw at Menasor was accompanied with a blast from each fists respective cannon that Ironhide had mounted on his arm. Utilizing the American boxing techniques he temporarily studied while on Earth, Ironhide danced around Menasor, blowing off hunk’s of the large Decepticon mech with every punch thrown.

    Menasors attempt to fight back was useless; any melee move he tried to throw was dodged, parried, or countered. Finally Menasor couldn’t hold himself together any longer, and the Stunticons all disengaged there combined form and crumbled to the ground, each injured and exhausted. Though they couldn’t fight any more, Ironhide was war tempered and knew they would have to be deactivated. He charged up the hydraulics in his knee joints and vaulted high up into the air. While he was up there, he let out a devastating barrage of rocket and cannon fire on his enemies below; they didn’t even have time to retreat. When the dust cleared, and Ironhide nimbly fell back to the ground, the only sign of life that came from the pile of Stunticon parts was the upper half of Motormaster, who was trying to crawl to safety.


    Ironhide: (as he coldly stood over Motormaster) Punk Ass! (He then plugged Motormaster with one final shot)

    While Ironhide was defeating Menasor, Omega Supreme was afforded the opportunity to focus on the swarm of Seekers surrounding him. He was able to wipe out a handful of them with every blast of any of his cannons, especially the largest plasma cannon on his head. Eventually the swarm retreated and the two Autobot’s were able to at-ease as they waited at the point in which Optimus told them to converge.


    Ironhide: How’s he doing? (He asked to Makayla)

    Sam: It hurts like hell

    Mikayla: His eye is gone (she said as she removed Sam’s bloodied bandage, and ripped off her other sleeve to make him a new make-shift eye patch)

    Sam: Bumble Bee, where’s Bumble Bee.

    Ironhide: Hmmmm (He said as he stood up and peered through the battlefield)


    Ironhide scanned through all the commotion until he finally spotted a car… A single Camaro speeding toward them from the distance.


    Ironhide: There. He’s coming.

    Mikayla helped Sam to look around the barricade, but even with one eye, Sam could tell that the incoming Camaro was not Bumble Bee.


    Sam: That’s not Bee.

    As the others were finally able to focus in on the speeding car, it became very evident, that Sam was right. The Camaro was almost exactly identical to Bumble Bee, only its black racing stripes were off set by its metallic GREEN paint job.


    Ironhide: GET DOWN! (He shouted when he realized who it was that was approaching)

    Ironhide dropped to one knee and began to open fire on the speeding car, but it was too agile and it easily evaded the incoming shots. Once in melee range, the car transformed, and the insect looking mech that folded out form the car, sprang on Ironhide, roughly planting him into the ground. In place of hands the Decepticon had two large sweeping blades, like a preying mantis, which he swung franticly at Ironhide.


    Ironhide: Get off of me! (He said as he kicked the green menace off of him) I hate to rob Bumble Bee of the opportunity to slag you, but I’m gonna finish you off, here and now.


    Decepticon: Stupid Autobot, you can’t defeat Wasp, Wasp will shred stupid-bot to pieces.

    Omega Supreme: Not if I have anything to say about it.


    Omega went to swipe Wasp away with his giant hand, but Wasp was incredibly fast and he threw Ironhide into Omega’s swinging fist. Ironhide, was hit with so much force, he went flying nearly a mile off in the distance.


    Wasp: Stupid Autobot’s.


    Omega was now agitated, and made to crush Wasp, but Wasp didn’t even flinch at his hulking opponent, instead he just stared into the air behind Omega. When Omega turned his head to see what had stolen Wasp’ attention, he was met head on by a 2000 pound SLAM ER bunker busting missile. The large missile lodged itself into the side of Omega’s face, before exploding. Mikayla, yanked Sam to his feet and the two fled, ensuring they were not squashed under the decapitated body of the falling Autobot.

    The missile came from Astrotrain, but he couldn’t relish in his victory over the sizeable Autobot, Stratosphere was hot on his tail. The Space shuttle and the C-7 both lacked in the maneuverability department, but Stratosphere now felt he had to bring Astrotrain down for destroying Omega. There slow paced chase eventually blend with the rest of the ground and Ariel battles taking place nearby.


    Mikayla: I don’t know where to go? (She shouted franticly as they ran from the exploding site of Omega Supremes fall.)

    Sam: Just keep moving, lookout for our Autobots.


    The two were lost without their guardians, and were running dangerously close to nearby combatants. But there greatest threat was Wasp. He sprang over the burning corpse of Omega Supreme, and Transformed in his car mode to take chase. By the time the humans realized he was stalking them, there was no way for them to avoid him, he was sure to run them down. That is until a red Autobot of some notability, hopped out from a nearby battle and intercepted Wasp with his foot. The powerful kick sent the Camaro into an uncontrolled spin. When he finally came to a hault, he transformed and squared off with the red autobot.


    Bumble Bee: I’ll take care of this Hot Rod, there’s an orbital escape pod nearby, get the kids to it and keep them safe. (He commanded as he stepped between Hot Rod and Wasp)


    Sam and Mikayla were shocked, it was the first time Bumble Bee had spoken since the Battle at Mission City in 2007.


    Sam: No Bee, come with us. I need you buddy.

    Bumble Bee: no Sam, if we don’t end this here and now, you’ll never be safe. Go.


    Before Sam could protest any more, Hot Rod transformed into his Chopped ‘50’s Coupe, and Mikayla forced Sam inside. When Hot Rod sped off, Wasp charged in on Bumble Bee, he knew he would have to take out his arch rival quickly if was going to catch up to the humans. He immediately sliced off Bumble Bee’s arm, the one that transformed into his arm cannon, but Bee did not allow himself to become phased. With his remaining arm, he grabbed his foe by the throat and head butted Wasp with enough force to crack his opponents gem like optics.

    Both were now handicapped in one form or another. Bee was missing an arm, and Wasp’s vision was impaired, but the ballet of martial arts attacked that was exchanged between the two was phenomenal. Wasp executed a series of spinning butterfly kicks, that connected with incredible accuracy, Bee wouldn’t be able to with stand many of them, so on Wasp’ third attempt, Bumble Bum caught Wasp’ foot and slammed him to the ground. He then put the Decepticon in a wrestling hold, and snapped Wasp’ legs in half. Now the opportunity to finish off his foe was upon him, he flipped Wasp over and drew his could hand back… he would need the all his strength to crush Wasp’s spark. But before he could strike, Wasp lunged both of his blades into Bee. Then a light began to peep on his chest.

    Bumble Bee knew what the blinking light was, it was Wasp’ internal self destruct mechanism. Very few Cybertronians had kept these devices installed in them; evidently Wasp was crazy enough to keep his. He knew once it was activated it couldn’t be turned off. Wasp had done his job for him, now Bumble Bee just had to clear the area. But when he tried to get up he couldn’t. Wasp’ blades were pinning him in his spot, which was Wasp intention… a kamikaze kill.


    Wasp: Bumble-bot will die with Wasp, Wasp wins once and for always.

    As the deranged insect began to laugh hysterically at his proclaimed victory, Bumble Bee struggled to remove Wasp’ blades from his chest, but the more he fought, the stronger Wasp seemed to become. His efforts were useless; Bee knew his fate was decided. When he finally accepted that this would be his final resting place and that at the very least, he helped to save his best friends escape, Wasp detonated and the two were incinerated in a brilliant flash.


    At the Evac site

    Hot Rod made it through the battle field unscathed, and came to a special evac site, guarded by a number of Autobot’s. Leading them was the City Commander.


    Ultra Magnus: Hot Rod… report. (He commanded before Hot Rod was able to release his passengers)

    Hot Rod: Optimus’ Rendezvous site has been compromised, Omega Supreme has fallen. (He said once Sam and Mikayla got out and he transformed)

    Ultra Magnus: Omega must have foreseen this, that’s why he had us establish this secondary sight. Trailbreaker!

    Trailbreaker: Yes Commander

    Ultra Magnus: What is the status on Optimus’ team?

    Trailbreaker: Moonracer is with us; she’s sustained some injuries, but will be fully operational soon. Our scans show Optimus on approach to Starscream Tower, Ironhide appears to be closing in on him. Communications are still down, and the others are all registering off line. (He reported)


    Sam: Wait, off line as in dead?

    Ultra Magnus: Yes young human, when we go off line, or essence units with the matrix and we become no more.

    Sam: Bumble Bee is still alive, he’s coming.

    Trailbreaker checked his wrist mounted computer, but gave Ultra Magnus a heartbreaking shake of his head. They knew Bumble Bee was off line, and Sam witnessed their wordless exchange.


    Sam: No…NO! We have to go back, we have to make sure.

    Ultra Magnus: Hot Rod, you and the children are to secure yourselves in the escape pod, and await the order to launch.

    Hot Rod: Yes sir. (He replied as he and Mikayla wrangled in the hysterical Sam, and lead him toward the field of escape pods nearby)

    Ultra Magnus stood and observed for a moment. The battle that still waged a few hundred yards away was beginning to settle down. From the surviving masses he only saw Decepticons.


    Hound: Commander! (He hollered as he sped in, then transformed) We’ve lost the southern front.

    Ultra Magnus: Optimus Prime is one of the best friends I’ve ever had. (He said thoughtfully, but not necessarily responding to Hounds report) He will always bear my faith. But if we stay here, we will face total annihilation. Whatever he is planning, he must do it soon. (He then turned to the Autobots defending the line) All hands fall back to the escape pods; we will escort the humans back to earth, and formulate a plan from there.

    The Autobot’s on the line, had never fathomed a retreat this late in the game, but the Commander was a seasoned combatant, and they were all a bit battle weary. They hesitantly obeyed the orders of their leader and scrambled to the escape pods. Ultra Magnus was the last to claim a pod, he stopped to gaze at his fallen city one last time, and then he two entered a pod and prepared for a full scale orbital retreat.




    To Be Continued...........
     
  17. Thunderchild

    Thunderchild Well-Known Member

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    Sorry guys

    Lots of errors in that chapter, that was my fault, I forgot to scan it through.
     
  18. DecepticonSpike

    DecepticonSpike Kimber/Stormer Fanboy

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    I just couldn't shake the feeling that I started in the middle of the story.
     
  19. Long_Haul

    Long_Haul N*ggacon

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    Well stpry begins on 1st page homie.
     
  20. Thunderchild

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    In away your right, though not essential to the overall plot, this story begins with the Autobots along with Sam and Mikayla being on Cybertron in a post ROTF time stream. I assure you, the when, how, and why they are there is unimportant, so much so that Long_Haul didnt feel the need to incorporate it.
     

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