continued the Florida everglades? what on earth could be in the Florida everglades? why, the "NoAR" of course! (with my own little twist.)
The Comedy Of Truth now that "transformers: homeworld" episode 1 is over, i decided to do "the comedy of truth" comics for a wile starting with, title: "CNN" yuck to my speling, yuck to my photos...
continued comments? questions? constructive criticism? random facts? silly jokes? lullabies you love? come on people, throw me a bone here!
Sephiroth, main antagonist of Final Fantasy Vll http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sephiroth_(Final_Fantasy) based on his appearance in Kingdom Hearts (i hate that boss...)
and now, the epic conclusion to the sephiroth vs cloud fight! who will win? before i forget, sephiroth's design changed title: "cloud's final fantasy" yeah, that sure didn't give it away...
a little preview of transformers: homeworld episode 2 a main antagonist of epic-sode 2 is introduced.
bonecrusher hates repeating himself but you guys aren't listening. BONECRUSHER IS COMING! looks promising dude. s
I'll do my best to deliver on that promise I'm starting something new, "transformers: desk-lamp!"... ha ha, get it? spotlight/desk-lamp? don't worry, I'm not starting yet another comic in this thread, it's in continuity with "transformers: homeworld" title: "brushguard"
here's what i think: TILT as a sound effect is hilarious! i haven't heard that used anymore, as as a kid who grew up watching re-runs of classic cartoons(which had quality animation back then by the way)this feels nostalgic. storywise, i do love the failed experiments and other hijinks, but it suffers a bit from the angles you use. the most important thing to remember is you have to give your characters "faces" so to speak, a way for the reader to identify who is speaking in what way. there are some panels where i am slightly offed at the composition and the punchline or comedic effect is a bit jeopardized. overall your writing is quite easy to follow and has a good composition, though you might want to expound on the believability of the starscream is a traitor angle, other than brushguard said so. that and work on your picture angles. sorry if this is a long post, i just really like how this is going and thought you might want some commentary. keep it up man!
i always liked *tilt* yeah, I'm not the best photographer, and my camera is, well, let's just say "poor." i do get what you mean about "giving characters faces" and I'll try to do more than "just get all the people in the picture, darn the angle!" after all, I'm still learning the limits my camera has. (not to mention my limits ) skyfire and mover are the required "do anything to get ahead, braindead idiot henchmen." that being said, yes that was my worst writing ever. it embarrasses me that i posted such a poor story. still, i guess i could say that more conversation happened off panel. (still the comic did what it was purposed to do...) thank you for your thoughts. I'm glad that this comic is being enjoyed!
