Transformers: Generations

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  1. Evertransformin

    Evertransformin Well-Known Member

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    Hello all. So I booked marked this site about a year ago and have used it to stay up to date on all my TF needs, finally got around to joining and I'm starting my own comics thread. A little note about my story line: It follows the events of the G1 cartoon up until the movie, than I change things around a bit.

    Ramjet and Skywarp became Unicrons Hearlds with Megatron
    No Headmaster/target Master
    Prime's rtn takes place, but he comes in his power master mode (Spike being engine)
    WheelJack, Ratchet and Brawn survive since their lasercores were still intact
    Optimus destroys Galvatron & from the ashes emerges Megatron in his G2 tank form
    Meg's tries to tap into the Dead Universe but is pushed through space bridge by beaten Prime (IE War With in volume II) Rodimus reassumes leadership
    Bludgeon and Dark Convoy lead con's sculpting their faces after Megs and Prime to appear more meancing on the battle field, they completely own Rodimus in battle
    WheelJack updates Rodimus' shell under same lasercore pretense
    Any autobot not appearing in a g1 shell also underwent reconstruction of lasercore (IE Magnus, Grimlock, Prow, etc) Shockwave does the same for any non g1 cons
    Rodimus defeates pretenders and Thunderwing and Thunderclash assume control
    Autobots science expands over cycles and they manage to repair Optimus again now in laser rod shell.

    The rest will be explained as my story progress but that is a few things to keep in mind. Allright lett's get started: This my Prologue

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    hehe, size might be a bit large. Anyway I'm telling the story in a now/then fashion inside text will always tell when the story shifts time. The above is a 'WAY' back then installment for a kind of back story. So on we go


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    Icespark A Spark in the Darkness

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    You did a great job! :D  You have very good photography skills, and you put the toys into excellent poses! :D  Your fight scene was very well done, and your story sounds to be very promising as well! :D  I also really like the fact you're using Ratchet, and that he seems to be very much in character! :D  I look forward to seeing what you have planned for your future comics!
     
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    Ripclaw DementedDino1

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    this is looking good so far

    cant wait

    im planning a story arc myself

    all i need is a title lolvery good effects
     
  10. Evertransformin

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    thanks guys, I realize its a bit hard to read, i'll try to correct that a bit more with the coming stuff
     
  11. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    Very very nice indeed. Keep it up, I will be checking back regularly :D 
     
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    MORE :) 


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    still don't like Skywarp's teleporting effect but hopefully my photoshop skills will grow with time.

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    Ripclaw DementedDino1

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    this is getting better and better
     
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    Icespark A Spark in the Darkness

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    Your comic is really starting to move fast! I really the the effects you put in for Wheeljack's scan and for Skywarp's teleportation! :D  Your flying effects are also nicely done! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your story and your comics! :D 
     
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    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    The panels are neat and the effects convey to the reader what is actually happening. Kudoes to you, man.
     
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    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    Great stuff! The fight between Optimus, Thundercracker and Starscream was really good. :thumb 
     
  20. Evertransformin

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    wow. thanks guys. I won't be able to update again until monday but to save any confusion, Cybertron Starscream and Armada Thundercracker are called Thunderwing and Thunderclash. Why exactly they are clashing with the seekers will be revealed a bit later. Stay tuned.
     

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