transformers: generation x issue #2

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  1. maximus prime3

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    well here it is, i hope yall like it

    Transformers: Generation X

    Issue#2 Autobot annialation

    In the last issue, Blaster and his team of autobots were heading to earth when they were attacked

    Blaster: what was that?
    Jazz: decepticons, they have breached sector 6 and 7, what should we do
    Blaster: dinobots, destroy those intruders

    So the dinobots went to sector 6 and 7 to destroy the decepticons

    Swoop: Me swoop wonder where decepticons are
    Grimlock: Me Grimlock think they run away from my awesome might

    Just then, 5 decepticons attacked the dinobots

    Lightspeed: trainbots form Locomotion

    Then the 5 trainbots formed Locomotion, a powerful decepticon gestal

    Locomotion: Dinobots, prepare to die
    Grimlock: Dinobots, form Dinoking

    So the dinobots formed Dinoking, a powerful autobot gestal

    Dinoking: Me Dinoking kill Locomotion

    Then Dinoking pushed Locomotion out of the ship into deep space

    Back at the bridge……

    Blaster: so dinobots, did you get rid of the decepticons
    Grimlock: Me Grimlock kick butt
    Blaster: good, so that means there will be no more trouble

    Just then, the autobots arrived at earth

    Sidescream: any trouble on the way here
    Blaster: yes but the dinobots took care of it
    Sidescream: since your all are right, let’s go kick decepticon butt

    To be continued
     
  2. maximus prime3

    maximus prime3 Banned

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    who created dinoking? i need to give him or her props for their creation cause i used it
     
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    maximus prime3 Banned

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    please post. i am begging you
     
  4. Bryan

    Bryan ΜΟΛΩΝ ΛΑΒΕ

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    Since you're begging, I'll post.

    I don't really know what to say, though. I guess I can commend the Herculean effort you've made, but you're either very young or a very poor writer. Instead of writing for the internet, you might want to consider focusing on your English homework for the time being.
     
  5. Alpha Prime

    Alpha Prime Ten Years Strong

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    No plot really. Dosen't connect to the last chapter you wrote...at all.

    I thought the english was alright.
     
  6. maximus prime3

    maximus prime3 Banned

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    yes it does, read the last one carefully
     
  7. Alpha Prime

    Alpha Prime Ten Years Strong

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    Sry, i was thinking of your other fanfic
     

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