Transformers: Fall of the Action Masters

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  1. Shatterpoint

    Shatterpoint Neato

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    I've had this idea floating around in my head for a fan fiction,so I might as well get started with it. Here's the premise:

    "The Action Masters are beginning to succumb to the unseen side effects of Nucleon. They are slowly and violently reverting to their former bodies, a process that will kill them. A large enough supply of Nucleon could halt the effects and keep them alive. Fortunately,the Autobots Rad and Mainframe have created a chemical that, in theory, causes Nucleon to grow exponentially. All they need is a bit of pure Nucleon, and a lot of luck. Now they race to Hydrus Four to obtain what could be the last sample of Nucleon in the known universe. Will Rad and Mainframe’s plan work or will the Decepticons jeopardize the life of every Action Master in existence ?"

    If you like Action Masters,stay tuned in.

    If you hate Action Masters,stay tuned in because *SPOILERS* Alot of them will die.*SPOILERS*
     
  2. ARCTrooperAlpha

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    Deaths you say? I'm in !!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  3. Shatterpoint

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    Prologue

    Prologue

    On the planet of Cybertron a group of robotic beings called Transformers prepare a shuttle for a mission of life or death.

    “Where’s Jackpot ? The shuttle leaves in 2 breems and we can’t afford to delay the launch for another solar cycle.” said Kick-Off. “He said something about the Lucky Draw casino.” replied Skyfall.

    Meanwhile a black and gold Autobot and his robot bird rush down an almost deserted street towards the shuttle.

    These Autobots are different than the others, they gave up the ability to transform, to be…

    The Autobot stopped running to clench his sparking arm in pain, then he proceeded to run towards the shuttle.

    Stronger…

    The rest of the Autobots began to board the shuttle. The Autobot’s body began to spark and deform, he gave the orders to his bird, Sights, to go on ahead and tell the other Autobots to wait for him to arrive.

    Faster…

    Sights flew towards the shuttle, to alert the other Autobots, he got the attention of Kick-Off before.. “GRAAAAAAAGHK!” A scream of pain echoed through the street followed by a small explosion from the black and gold Autobot’s spark chamber.

    More alive.

    And the Autobot Jackpot was no more.

    TRANSFORMERS: FALL OF THE ACTION MASTERS

     
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    ARCTrooperAlpha Well-Known Member

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    not bad i guess. Mysterious opening. Except I think you need some enticement, like the big names BB, Ironhide, Optimus in the beginning, even if they're minor characters/
     
  5. Shatterpoint

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    Those characters will show up in a side story that will tie into a major plot point,well, some version of them anyway *cough,shatteredglass,cough*.
     
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    The next part IS COMING, I've just had alot of writer's block not enough free time to work on it.
     
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    whenever you can
     
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    what do you need help with ?
     
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    I had a bit of trouble trying to keep characters in character, according to their bios or any official fiction they were in. The chapter should be done and uploaded by the end of November.
     
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    I can see why. They're hardly touched since Marvel, and as you're trying to write them in character, it be difficult because you're well and truly on your own, yes ?
     
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    Sorry about the wait...


    Chapter 1: The Iron Hope

    6 diagnostic drones carried Jackpot’s corpse into the Iron Hope ’s medical bay, they passed most of
    it’s crew, already uneasy and frightened about the journey ahead. It was quiet aboard the starship; no one was in the talking mood, except for Rad, one of the two Autobots in charge of the mission. “I told you to keep Jackpot’s death a secret until after we synthesized an antidote!” he shouted,”Primus knows how bad their morale is already!” Rad was expressing his anger to a red and blue Autobot whose head was wired up to a computer. “What am I even wasting my time for; you probably can’t even hear me while hooked up to that half-afted Teletraan-1.” The computer’s screen blinked and the Autobot removed the wires from his head. “Well I didn’t have much of a choice, I wasn’t just going to leave his body there and for your information Rad, if it wasn’t for this beautiful machine we wouldn’t have Teletraan-1 or the information necessary to help manufacture our growth formula.” replied the Autobot in an aggravated tone, but Rad had already left the lab in a fit of rage. The red and blue Autobot was named Mainframe; he was the other Autobot in charge. Mainframe could tell that the mission was a heavy burden on Rad’s shoulders; he had known him for many stellar cycles as a calm, easy-going ‘bot. This was a side of his long time fiend and colleague that he had never seen before.

    +*\<0>/*+

    The Iron Hope was not a large vessel, yet it had several rooms: a lab, a garage, a cargo hold, an armory, a medical bay, an engine room, a bridge and oddly enough a cellblock and an interrogation room. In the garage, Over-run, Sprocket, Rumbler and Circuit were working on their vehicles, preparing them for any problem they might encounter on Hydrus Four. Sprocket left his Attack Cruiser, injected himself with a Synth-Nucleon boost, sat down to a nearby table, and started a conversation…with the empty chairs next to him. “What the Pit are you doing?” asked Over-run with an annoyed tone in his voice. “I’m just taking a break, talking with my friends Que and Dino.” Sprocket replied. “You…you do know that…” “Know what? Something that Que wouldn‘t know? He is a genius after all.” said Sprocket. “N-never mind.” Over-run replied. He was about to go back to his helicopter when Sprocket interrupted him. “You getting kind of nervous Over-run?” “No, what makes you say that?” “Que noticed you were loosening and tightening the same bolt for the last 10 breens before you came over here.” Over-run didn’t say another word, he just went back to his helicopter and continued to work on it. Rumbler looked over at his twin brother and sighed.

    *+*\<0>/*+*

    Rad walked down several corridors, passing a number of drones and Minicons on his way to the interrogation room. He arrived to find Rollout, the Autobot “master spy”, viewing a monitor hooked up to a device on Sight’s back. “The Pit are you doing?” Rad asked. “This little birdie told me that Jackpot had a surveillance camera hooked up to him as “insurance” when he gambled, so I‘m looking over the past few cyber-weeks worth of footage to find out more about his death.” Rollout replied. Rad glanced over at the screen, he saw a deformed Jackpot sitting at a table with 5 other Cybertronians playing some sort of card game. “Looks terrible doesn’t he? He had been skipping his Synth-Nucleon injections, thought he’d be lucky enough to survive, guess his luck got the best of him.” Rollout said. Before Rad could reply there was the sound of an explosion and the ship quaked. A voice came over the ship’s intercom. “Commander Rad we’re under attack!” “What?! By who?” “Who do you think?” the voice replied.
    Rad clenched his fist and grit his teeth .
    Decepticons.”





     
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    Poor jackpot cant catch a break...
     
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    Chapter 2: The One Way Trip

    Trypticon City, Kaon. Earlier

    "But Lord Megatr-" "Silence Banzaitron! My word is final, your suicide mission is not worth the waste of resources nor are your worthless troops. Now get out of my sight!" As Banzaitron left the room he heard Megatron mutter "What use to me are cybertronians that can't even transform? Nothing but mere fodder." Banzaitron had always hated Megatron and his way of rule, but that was the last straw, to insult his comrades was one thing, but to insult him, one of Cybertron's greatest warriors? That was it, if he was going to die a horrible death, it might as well be an honorable one, one that would attone for what he had done in his life, and attempting to eradicate the leader of the Decepticon Empire seemed like a fitting way to die. As he contemplated on how he would do it, a winged cybertronian confronted him in the hallway. "Greetings Banzaitron, I'm glad to tell you that your little field trip has already been arranged." "What are you talking about Starscream?" "I personally have gone behind Megatron's back and set up your trip to Hydrus Four." "What's the catch Starscream? There's always a catch when dealing with you." Starscream let out an all too familiar smirk. "There isn't one, unlike Megatron, I care for my fellow Decepticons, weather they transform or not. I'm offering you my old starship, a large supply of energon, some drones and a few hand picked soliders to assist you. It's quite the offer if I do say so myself." Banzaitron stood there with his hand on his chin, considering the offer and trying to find Starscream's alterior motive. "Well? Do you accept my offer or not?"

    =*+*\<0>/*+*=

    The Star Seeker, Deep Space. Now

    "Fire the Shock Cannons! I want that ship disabled, not destroyed!" Banzaitron yelled at his troops. Groups of Decepticon drones manned their stations and activated the cannons, fireing on the Iron Hope's hull as it fired back at them. "Gutcruncher, send out the Space Combat drones! Have them board the ship!" "Yes sir!" Gutcruncher spoke the command into a communicator and pulled a lever. The bay doors of the Star Seeker opened and released an armada of drones that transformed and flew off towards the Autobot ship. A green Decepticon looked out the ship's window, giddy about what was about to happen. The Iron Hope opened fire on the drones, blasting them to bits in the depths of space. The green Decepticon cheered on as each drone met a firery demise. "Charger what the Pit are you doing!? Get back to your station!" "Lighten up Krok." the green Decepticon said. "I'm just watching the pretty fireworks."

    ^=*+*\<0>/*+*=^

    Trypticon City, Kaon. Earlier

    Banzaitron glared at Starscream. "I'm becoming impatient Banzaitron, do you accept or no-" Banzaitron grabbed Starscream by the neck and slammed him up against the wall. "*ack* How dare...you*urk*treat your...superior this way!" "Your lying to me Starscream, spill your guts before I do!" He dug his claws into Starscream's neck cables. "Fine..I'll tell you, just put me*cough*down!" Krok released Starscream from his grasp, Starscream gasped and staggered to his feet. "If you leave," said Starscream "then you won't be able to return to Cybertron, as long as Megatron is in charge. You will be marked as traitors and either exiled or shot down as you depart." "And you expected us to survive?" "My ship has one of the most advanced stealth systems in the known universe, only I know the activaton codes for it." "And let me guess, you'll give me the codes in exchange for my eternal loyalty when you attempt to overthrow Megatron?" "That's a very blunt way to put it, but yes."

    Banzaitron rubbed his chin as he thought, would he risk his own life for this egotistical fool of an Air Commander? Then he noticed the large crack that had formed on his arm just from slamming Starscream against the wall.

    "You have yourself a deal, 'Lord Starscream'."
     
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    I recently realized that I posted the unfinished version of Chapter 2.

    I have fixed this and added the missing part.
     

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