Digibash: transformers fall of cybertron smokescreen

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Art' started by mirageandjazz11, Aug 30, 2012.

  1. mirageandjazz11

    mirageandjazz11 Banned

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    http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2..._smokescreen_by_mirageandjazz1197-d5d10kt.jpg

    it took me 5 hours to make this so dont post negative comments about this.

    ok i decided to make this when my friend on seibertron Godzillabot Primal could not make it cause he could not make a white dude into smokes colors i used gimp. eery color is mine the head is godzillabots head of transformers prime smokescreen but we are good buddys so i am sure he wont mind. i took on a project he could not finish.

    foc jazz toy belongs to Hasbro along with his character

    smokescreen belongs to Hasbro

    head belongs to Godzillabot primal on seibertron

    the colors effort and time is mine along with claim being the first one to make and finish one.
     

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  2. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    But a 38 on him and we can go hit the casino.
     
  3. SaberPrime

    SaberPrime Well-Known Member

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    Um... sorry but that does not look like you spent 5 hours on that, more like 5 minutes. It could use a lot of touch ups so there aren't clearly visible blocks that were left unpainted. Also if you can't take some constructive criticism you really shouldn't be doing this kinda stuff at all. You can't post something and expect nothing but good reviews no matter how many hours you put into it.

    That being said even though it looks unfinished it's still a nice representation of Smokescreen.
     
  4. mirageandjazz11

    mirageandjazz11 Banned

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    Thank you but this bad comment comeing from the guy who says that Soundwave used dark energon. To bring Megatron back just to let you know he used normal energon not the dark kind he also used the electric gun how could he used dark energon when there is no proof that he used it?
     
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    That has nothing to do with anything ever.
    Just take the criticism, dude. It's called constructive for a reason.
     
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    mirageandjazz11 Banned

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    it is from an argument he tarted about prime and foc/wfc not being the same thing and one of the things he said was in foc soundwave brought megatron back using DARK energon. i am just telling him it was not
     
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    ....Still has nothing to do with anything.
    Just because he thinks that WFC/FOC isn't in the same continuity as Prime (an opinion I actually agree with) doesn't invalidate his criticism.
     
  8. Galvanitro

    Galvanitro Vanguardian

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    No offense; I like the idea but sheesh, that looks just plain awful.

    The blocks everywhere, the new head is poorly edited in. It definitely looks like just a few minutes went into it. Certainly not more than an hour.
     
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    mirageandjazz11 Banned

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    It took 5 hours from my phones art program editing thing I did not do this from computer that and I said no negative comments i took a lot of time on this
     
  10. Wheelceptor

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    Hey, guess what? You post a piece of...let's say 'work' on the Internet, IT'S GOING TO BE CRITICISED. If something isn't good, people are going to complain.
    This isn't good work, regardless of how long you spent on it, so you can't expect everyone to be like 'Oh my god, that's so awesome! Please father my young!'.
    Dumbass.
     
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    mirageandjazz11 Banned

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    That's not what I am saying and if you call me a dumb asset again I will and I mean I will try to get you banned ooh and don't call me any thing else too. I meant that you can't criticize without a really good reason and you have to criticize in a nice way please. Have a good day ma'am
     
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    That's not what you're saying, huh?
    Well, it seems to me that you were asking for no one to criticise anything bad about your....piece.
    And then, when SaberPrime did, you tried to write it off as nonsensical because of something completely unrelated.
    And another thing - I'd leave it at that if you just acknowledged the faults in your own work, but you haven't. You've just said 'But I said no negative comments! I put a lot of time into this! Waah!'
    You know what I think? I think you may have put time into it, but not exactly that much effort. If you had, it wouldn't look as bad as it does, and thus people wouldn't post 'negative comments'.
    Also, the fact that you threatened to get me banned only cements how self-destructive you are. I can't be banned for criticising work, because that's my right as a member of this site.
    TL;DR - If you don't want your work to be criticised, make good work. Don't churn out something half-assed and say 'I put time into it, so screw you for not liking it'.
     
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    What he said. You trying to push your own thread off topic. I responded to your quote about Soundwave over here. http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/trans...art-prime-spoiler-warning-12.html#post8238058 Please keep your debates regarding that topic in that thread and not in completely unrelated threads.

    Yeah well as others have said you can't really expect people not to post any negative comments. As long as it's constructive criticism and not just totally trashing you or your work then people can say whatever they want.

    Oh OK so you're saying we can criticize in a nice way, which is what constructive criticism is and exactly what I was doing yet you said I couldn't do that and have said the same to others who are actually being nice... well except for one...

    You can't get in trouble for criticizing his work but you can get in trouble because of this.

    The part in bold there, you can't call him that, it's against forum rules. If you hadn't said that then he'd have nothing he could actually use against you. They won't ban you for it though, the most they'll do is put an infraction on your account.
     
  14. Wheelceptor

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    Yeah, that's fair enough.
    Maybe I'm reading too far into it, but I really didn't like the attitude that he was implying. I guess it got to me, and I went a bit overboard. And for that, I apologise.
    But, I'm not going to apologise for giving my opinion on something posted to the public in an art forum, because that's my right as a member, and I'm sure you understand that. :) 
     
  15. optimegatron

    optimegatron Not over, not finished.

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    Oh boy, what a magnificant thread!

    Seriously though, that Smokescreen could use a lot of work. It's not that terrible, but it definately isn't very great.

    Word of advice; keep working on it, post it when you're COMPLETELY finished, and if it's good, the people above me who have supposedly posted "negative comments", won't.
     
  16. Jazzfan0217

    Jazzfan0217 Just chillin'

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    This, When you post something you can't not expect negative critisism, if you truely did spend 5 hours on it I'll take your word for it. There's no need to go into a whole arguement over a repaint. I have to admit I've seen better but on the positive side the arms look pretty good coming from me. Just keep trying and you'll end up with a better one, no need to take things so personal. :) 
     
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    i cant remake it so but if anyone wants to edit it i give you my permission to edit it to look better if you do please give me some credit
     
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    thanks glad to hear a good comment from another jazz fan
     

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