Transformers: Descending and Other Storylines

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Icespark, Dec 6, 2007.

  1. Fez Findie

    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    No problem.

    ... You gotta wonder, what the hell they were thinking when they decided on the size class and colors... (or what they were on)

    ... Prolly at the same time when they made the same decision on Nightscream... XD
     
  2. Icespark

    Icespark A Spark in the Darkness

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    No kidding! The Beast Machines toy line was very messed up! Seriously, the tallest character gets the smallest toy, and the stupid bat is larger that Optimus Primal?!

    Speaking of that stupid bat, I completely hate BM Nightscream; to me, he was a horrible character! I was waiting all through Beast Machines for him to die and for some good characters to show up.......guess who got two of Nightscream's toy, once for a birthday, and once for Christmas.......

    :lol 
     
  3. Fez Findie

    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    I heard they originally intended a bit different character. The most I remember though is that it would have been a female one... XD

    Wow, must have been a bit awkward, getting those and of course needin' to smile ^^ XD
     
  4. Autobus Prime

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    :lol 

    Indeed, "BM Silverbolt" says it all.
     
  5. Icespark

    Icespark A Spark in the Darkness

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    Bring the Paine!

    You're correct, the character was going to be female, and I think was eventually going to fall in love with Cheetor. I'm not certain how that idea would have turned out, but, it absolutely had to been better than Nightscream! :lol  Why couldn't they have used someone like Night Viper, or Buzzsaw, Skydive, or Hammerstrike? I'd have even rather seen Longhorn or Geckobot!

    Yep, awkward isn't the word for it! :lol 

    That it does, that it does indeed! :D 

    Here's the next comic! Just a warning, this comic is probably one of the longest I've ever made.


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    I hope everyone enjoys it! Also, please, let me know what you think of the dialog for the Final Fantasy characters; along with any comments for improvement. It took me a while to write for them, with many, many multiple re-writes, and I think some of it is still somewhat unnatural-sounding. I'm far more used to Transformers. :lol 
     
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  6. Icespark

    Icespark A Spark in the Darkness

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    Shinki Marbles

    Hello everyone,

    Here is the next comic! :D 

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    I hope everyone enjoys it! :) 
     
  7. Fez Findie

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    THESE UPDATES ARE SOOOOOOOOOO LONG! TOOO MUCH TO COMMENT AT ONCE! :cry 

    Though, I totally did love how they managed to take down the Decepticon attack swiftly without itseemin' like it was because of one-sided overpowering... no, sword through face isn't somethin' even a Megatron could shake off! :D 

    And damn, Hamtaro's with hammers for golf clubs!? What the fudge? :lolol  (and really neato with the shinki's playing with marbles XD)
     
  8. Icespark

    Icespark A Spark in the Darkness

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    Thank you very much for the comments Fez Findie! :D  I really appreciate it! :D 

    I know these were long, for some reason, they just kind of turned out that way, and I'm not really sure why. :lol 

    Thanks for they positive comments towards the Final Fantasy comic; I did try to strike a balance, I'm really glad you think it worked. :) 

    They're not hammers, they're Ham-mers! :lol  :)  I'm glad you liked the marbles too. I've been wanting to make a comic with them for a while, but never had a chance to til now. I'm really glad you like it! :D 

    Thanks again for all the comments! :D  I'll be catching up on your comics soon too, I haven't forgotten!
     
  9. Autobus Prime

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    :lol 

    Everybody! Let's all gooooo, down to Dumas Walker...

    ...until somebody trips on the giant marbles...I was waiting for that to happen...:D 

    It was funny to see the Shinkis playing giant marbles. Due credit for actually having them shooting marbles with 'em. Can you imagine marbles with 100-pound shooters? Deadly!

    ...

    I wonder...does this Paine know "The Little Engine That Could"? The version with the landmines?
     
  10. Fez Findie

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    Well, you could splice'em in shorter parts and put'em up with some time between parts, even within a day, while knowin' ya got more stuff ready. That'd make readin' and commentin' easier and stuff :) 


    And your last comment... did you think I comment on your comic for any other reason but you to check mine? Huh?

    Just kidding :p  Your stuff's awesome.
     
  11. Anodythe

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    "Lost his marbles" :rolleyes: :lolol ...always good for a laugh!
     
  12. Icespark

    Icespark A Spark in the Darkness

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    A Day at the Shinki Races!

    Thanks Autobus Prime! :D  I'm really glad you enjoyed them! :D  I couldn't resist the slipping on marbles joke; it was too good of an opportunity to pass up! :D 

    I wasn't aware of what your reference meant, so, I looked it up! That song would be a good fit! :D  Thanks about the marbles too. :)  I used to play marbles with my grandfather all the time, though, when we played, there really wasn't any rules aside from making a circle and knocking them out. :) 

    I like the sound of 100 pound shooters: the Autobots would be fascinated, and the Decepticons would think they were cannon ammunition or something! :lol 

    There's a version with landmines?! :eek: 


    Hi Fez Findie! You've got some really good points. This next comic is the last one I'll post in long format, I'll see about trying to put in chapter breaks. :) 

    I just don't want anyone to think I've abandoned reading the other comics! I just wish I had more time. :(  There's so many great stories on this board! :D  I'll be trying to catch up soon! :D 

    I do want you to know how much I appreciate all your comments and feedback; it means a lot to me, and I'm really glad you enjoy the comics! :D 

    Thanks Anodythe! :D  I'm glad that you enjoyed the comics! :D  Like I said, I couldn't resist the joke! :lol  :D 


    Here's the next one! :D 

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    I hope everyone enjoys it! :D 
     
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  13. Fez Findie

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    Waspinator was totally jinxing himself by saying things are seeming to be fine... :D 

    What a face paced rally that was ^_^ Though in need for a rerace :D 
     
  14. Icespark

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    Hi Fez Findie!

    Thank you for the quick reply! :D  I'm really glad you liked the comic! :D 

    Waspinator never knows when to stop while he's ahead. :lol  :D  Who knows when he'll learn! :lol 
     
  15. Autobus Prime

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    :lol  :lol 

    Nice race! It's always a good day to beat up on Waspinator, too. I like his laundry list of assorted misfortunes.

    I also like how you've given Ach & Yda's vehicles independent personalities.

    IS: Well, they might be heavier. I was just guessing how much a marble big enough to stand on would weigh. :) 

    As told in Major Paine. :) 
     
  16. ShadowDragon

    ShadowDragon R to the D to the D yo.

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    Tigris was riding Ach, Asuka was riding Yda.
     
  17. Autobus Prime

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    SD:

    Ah, it would seem you are correct. Shows how observant I am today. :D 
     
  18. Icespark

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    Thanks Autobus Prime! It's just a typical day in the life of Waspinator! :lol 

    Thanks ShadowDragon! :) 

    Well everyone,

    Christmas is pretty much here! I do realize that is slightly late, however, at least it's still up prior to Christmas day! Right? Right?!

    I hope you all enjoy! :D 

    Merry Christmas, and Happy New Year to everyone!

    (P.S. This is the first time I've ever made something like, please let me know what you liked, didn't like, or what needs improving! Thanks!)


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  19. Icespark

    Icespark A Spark in the Darkness

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  20. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    That was really nice, awesome job Icespark! :D