Transformers: DBA Forever

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  1. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    That's right, we're back in business with a whole new story to tell! Some of you may remember the old fanfic: The Adventures of the Dewbot/Bacontronian Alliance. Personally, I thought it was great while we were all updating it, but the story got convoluted a bit and some people started updating more than others. This time I have a new system for things. I'll be doing most of the updates, with a two guest writers a week (a fellow DBA member). If you are a member, PM me and I'll work out who goes when. As for right now.....IT'S TEASER TIME!


    Before, during the final battle with Unicron:

    "Trust me sir, this kid knows what he's doing. We've been watching him for quite some time. He and his robot friend are capable of great things."

    "With all do respect, Mister, uhh, Sage, was it? With all do respect Mr. Sage, this is an entire planet we're dealing with here."

    "Just sit back and watch, General. He'll come through."


    Now:

    "Guys! I can't find the remote!"

    "Did you check the fridge?"

    "Why would it be in the---oh. Found it."

    It was a typical day in the DBA headquarters. RID Ultramagnus, Young Optimus14, Crazymadman, and ROTF Sideswipe were playing EXTREME FOOSEBALL, Prime13 was watching TV, Sage and Auto were out on a date yet again, and Tyler was nowhere to be found.

    "Dang it CMM, you're the goalie! Why did you let them score?!"

    "Hey, you're supposed to stop them before they get to me, YO14!"

    Just then, the door slammed open.

    "Guys, we've got trouble!"

    It was Tyler. He wasn't with Delta, and he looked all bruised up. His team members gathered around them, asking him what the heck had just happened. He tried to explain it to them, but he couldn't make a cohherent sentence. He was in shock.

    "Come on man, just spit it out already!" said Crazymadman, trying to remain calm.

    After a long silence, he finally spit out an answer. Immediately the other DBA members regretted asking him. It seemed impossible. It seemed like it was a lie, but they knew it was true.

    "SG Delta is alive. He's attacking the city as we speak!"



    That's all for now folks. If you have any ideas or suggestions, feel free to tell me. Don't worry, this will feature a fair amount of TF's in it too, not just the DBA members and Delta. Also, this teaser isn't going to be the first story. This happens sometime down the line. I just wanted to give you all a taste of what's to come. I've got a lot of surprises for you guys, and I hope this little collab turns out as awesome as I hope!
     
  2. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    I don't know why, but I keep :lol ing at the phrase Mr. Sage.

    I call discrimination. ;) 
     
  3. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    Interesting... I might have to keep an eye on this fanfic.
     
  4. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Glad you guys seemed to like it. Now, I have semester finals this week, but I think you all should know that this thing officialy launces June 7th. That's all for now!
     
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    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    Good luck with your finals, Delta.
     
  6. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Well, finals are over. School's all done. What else was on my list-oh yeah! The story officially starts tomorrow!
     
  7. ROTF Sideswipe

    ROTF Sideswipe Scientist

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    I demand that I be techno organic like I have been for months....
     
  8. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    Can't wait! :D 
     
  9. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Today's the big day guys, and I think I'm gonna kick things off with the prologue. Later today I'll give you all Chapter One!

    Prologue​

    Hi there, my names Tyl-err--Agent DP. For a little over a year now, I have been involved with an alien race of sentient robots who call themselves the "Transformers." It all started when I was hit by what I thought was a car. Turns out, the car that hit me would end up being my friend and Headmaster Partner, Delta.

    Together with his team, The Autobots, we've fought the evil Decepticons and their master, Megatron. As of late, the Decepticons have been quieted. Megatron's dead, his soldiers have been scattered aross the galaxy. The biggest threat of all, Unicron, has even been done away with!

    Now Delta and I work with a team of insane government agents that call themselves the Dewbot-Bacontronian Alliance. As you could probably tell, they really like Bacon. And Mountain Dew. Here, let me help you get to know them better.

    Crazymadman: The teams official leader. He took over after the death of General Blackrock. He's well respected by his peers, and really likes it when things go :bay 

    Sage: He's the team's ambassador to alien planets. For some reason, he always introduces himself by saying "I'm Doctor," then grins when people ask him "Doctor who?"

    Autobot Girl: Sage's "partner in crime." She's a crazy fangirl, always chasing after Starscream and his clones- The Rainmakers.

    Young Optimus14: The team's weapons expert, he's amazed by the engineering of Delta's arm cannons. He's constantly modifying random objects around the DBA headquarters, turning them into weapons

    Robticon: The team's resident GIF expert and main caretaker of General Hammon the albino squirrel and Roger the ostrich. He's decided to go on vacation for the duration of this fanfic.

    ROTF Sideswipe: A biomechanical human, he received several upgrades from Young Optimus14. He's really excited by the fact that he's half Cybertronian.

    Prime13: He's the team's anime expert. He likes using giant drills, but his weapon of choice is his catapult.

    There are several other members of this team, and I'll give them their bios after the various updates I give. Don't worry, everyone will have their story be told.....including the bad guys. That's all for now!
     
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    cool
     
  11. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    Interesting bios.
     
  12. Crazymadman

    Crazymadman Dewbot leader

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    Sounds awesome so far, Delta. :D  I love how we're like a special ops. team.

    Also, shouldn't me and Sage be the leaders? Me being the leader of the Dewbots, Sage being the leader of the Bacontronians, and Auto could be the Alliance leader, which means that she makes sure the two teams don't get into another war?
     
  13. Young Optimus14

    Young Optimus14 MTMTE Theorist

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    I'm totally awsome.
     
  14. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    It's about time I started this I suppose. Glad you guys seem to like your bios. I know I missed a few, but I didn't want to overload you guys with a huge first update. I'll be giving people more bios (and interviews if they're interested) as time goes on. Anyways, here we are, the first chapter!

    Chapter 1​

    "Hey Sage, what're you doing?"

    "Oh, hey YO14. I'm just trying to fix the fourth wall. It got broken a few too many times during our last fanfic."

    "Isn't acknowledging that this is a fanfic breaking the fourth wall."

    "Crap. YO14, could you hand me that thing please?"

    "Sure. What is it, some kind of NAIL BAZOOKA?!"

    "No dude. It's a drill. Hand it too me."

    "You found my drill?!"

    The room was getting crowded now, as Prime13 entered the room. The whole scene was chaotic, as is typical for the DBA. There hadn't been too much action lately, so Sage was getting a bit stir crazy. To be honest, everyone was. I was busy looking after Roger and General Hammond, but they were being quite difficult. Delta wasn't much help either. He was busy in the lab trying to contact his old team, where ever they might be.

    In short, things were way too quiet. We needed a mission. A crisis. Anything to end the monotony. What we didn't know was that, deep in an undercover science lab, a man by the name of Victor Drath was about to make our lives a living nightmare. You see, a while back Delta and I had taken out a team of Seekers called the Rainmakers- Acid Storm, Sunstorm, and Dirgegun. Victor, however, was working to revive them.

    "Guys, I'm running to the store. We're getting low on Diet Dew," announced Autobot Girl.

    "Don't glomp anything on the way there Auto!" Crazymadman yelled back.

    "Yeah, save that for Sage!" Prime13 joked. Sage just gave him a look.

    The day continued to crawl by, until there was a knock at the door. It was a new applicant, a girl who was interested in joining the DBA. She seemed enthusiastic, and slightly intimidated.

    "Hi guys, I'm Swiftcat, but you can call me Swifty! I'd like to join you guys, if it's cool!"

    "How....how did you find us?" asked YO14.

    "Well, I was invited here. Tyler told me about it, and I thought it sounded coo--"

    "Wait a second now. Agent DP told you about our secret military organization?!" interrupted Sage.

    "Oh, hey Swifty! I take it you've already meet the guys?"

    "DP, did you invite her to join us?" asked Crazymadman, being a bit more calm about the situation than Sage.

    "Uhh...yeah. She's a pretty good fighter, and she's fun too! You know how boring this place has been lately."

    "All right, Swiftcat. How's this: we test your abilities. If we think you're DBA worthy, you're in. If not....."

    This time I gave Sage a look. She passed all the DBA's tests, so Sage and Crazymadman both agreed to let her join. Now the question remained: Would she be a Dewbot or a Bacontronian?



    "Yes.....come on Acid Storm. The Headmaster Process with be over soon enough."

    "Mr. Drath?"

    "What is it, Joey?"

    "Sunstorm and Dirgegun's upgrades did not go as planned. They're mental processes are going haywire!"

    "Dangit! All right, here's the plan Slick. Deactivate them for now. I'll look into what's wrong after I've finished with Acid Storm here."

    "But...sir..."

    "WHAT?!"

    "They've escaped!"
     
  15. Crazymadman

    Crazymadman Dewbot leader

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    Awesome first update.

    I find it funny that this Victor guy calls one of the seeker Joey. :lol 
     
  16. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Actually, Joey's his assistant. Because I love obscurity, Joey is based on the G1 character, Joey Slick- the guy who temporarily had control of Megatron when he was stuck in gun mode!
     
  17. prime13

    prime13 UCHUU KITAAAA

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    Nice one, DP. I wonder where my drill went to... And hopefully Sunstorm and Dirgegun won't cause too much trouble.
     
  18. Lock Cade

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    Awesome first chapter, Delta! Can't wait to read more!
     
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    Oops, double post.
     
  20. Young Optimus14

    Young Optimus14 MTMTE Theorist

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    That is a NAIL BAZOOKA! I just "modified" it
     

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