Transformers Cybertron - Reckoning

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  1. wreckage

    wreckage Sweet biscuits!

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    This is my re-write of Transformers: Cybertron. It picks up three years after the energon tv show. The decepticons are now under the command of Jhiaxus (cyb. Megatron), the war has escalated (a lot) and Megatron will not be returning it just seems stupid to bring him back after dying just cheapens it I think.

    I'll update my story a much as I can but understand I'm a high school student and have a lot of work to do.

    Hope you enjoy it feedback is always welcome

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    Scorponok’s optics flickered back on. He was in a dark room and lying on what appeared to be a metal table. He ran a diagnostic on himself all his injuries were now repaired and he was now black and gold. A bot stepped into the room Scorponok had never seen him before.

    “Who are you” Scorponok shouted

    The bot turned revealing his face which was shaped somewhat like a V. His optic flashed red.

    “I’ am Noisemaze, Your new master” he said coldly “You will do my bidding or be destroyed”

    “I have only one master the mighty Galvatron, I take orders from him and only him” Scorponok shouted back in protest.

    “Ah yes Galvatron, he’s dead and no longer any of your concern. I have implanted a chip in your head which allows me to induce a great amount of pain if you disobey me.” Replied Noisemaze “Let’s give it a try shall we”

    Noisemaze pressed a button on a remote. Scorponok fell to the ground screaming in pain. It felt like his insides were burning, like his very spark was being extinguished molecule by molecule. It stopped, painfully Scorponok got onto one knee.

    “What would you have me do…Master” Scorponok said weakly

    “Good” Said Noisemaze “Your task is this, Gather raw materials for me and my brethren”

    “For this task you will be teamed up with more of my loyal troops” Noisemaze said as Dreadwing, Slugslinger, Sharkicon and Cannonball entered the room.

    “Now go” Noisemaze growled.

    Scorponok and his team turned to the door and left. Noisemaze left the room as well but through a different door, walked down an empty hall and entered what appeared to be a docking bay. The room was filled with thousands of Scrapmetals all in spider tank mode moving around.

    “Soon my brethren we shall feast” Noisemaze shouted.
     
  2. wreckage

    wreckage Sweet biscuits!

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    Finally updated. Enjoy

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    The Autobot capital ship the Prometheus existed transwarp above what used to be an Autobot stronghold but now nothing more then a burning rock in space. Ultra Magnus sat in the command chair horrified by what he saw.

    “If only we had gotten here sooner,” he thought to himself as he slammed his fist into the arm of his command chair. He was surprised by this as normally he wasn’t prone to such an out burst. He always kept himself under control. The war was starting to take a toll on him and on everyone for that matter.

    “Sir” Towline shouted “I’m picking up multiple Decepticon signatures. Looks like three destroyers and one capital ship”

    “Shit!” Magnus said under his breath “Bring all weapons on line, have all pilots report to their fighter and fire up the Transwarp engine. I want to be able to jump as soon as possible” ordered Magnus.

    “We’ll be able to jump in five minutes” said Prowl, who sat at the helm.

    “That five minutes may as well be an eternity, we’ll be blasted out of the sky before then” thought Ultra Magnus.

    Prometheus was one of the Autobots biggest and most powerful ships in the fleet but was no match to four ships. Prometheus was a long ship with a large octagon platform covering the ship from its middle to stern with two fighter bays jutting out from either side of the platform and two large engines at it’s back. The ship was armed to the teeth with 36 individual missile pods, six railguns, four on the top of the platform and two on the bow and the main fusion cannon that was built into the bow itself below the bridge.

    Skywarp sat in his command chair on the ship “The Beliskner”. It was a destroyer longer then the standard class destroyer, it was relatively flat compared to most ships and had two veritical transwarp engines at the back giving it a sleek and deadly look.

    Snowcat was the weapons officer on the Beliskner. He had changed since Megatron died. While he still enjoyed fighting but he was never heard yodeling ever since he had lost control of the decepticons to Jhiaxus. He was the very reason why the decepticons had reformed after the energon wars telling the populous of Cybertron how Megatron had sacrificed himself to destroy Unicron and how the Autobot tried to stop him. With those words he had recreated the decepticon army not only with former Decepticon but a good portion of the cybertron populous. While the movement started out slow when Jhiaxus showed up and removed Snowcat the Deceptions become a true army again.

    The three Decepticon destroyers started to move to try and surround the Prometheus while the Capital ship moved in front of the Prometheus as if the command of the ship was trying to look Magnus in the eyes.

    Magnus was not going to be caught off guard. Before the Cons could move into their positions, the Prometheus fired 14 of its missile batteries at the destroyers doing a fair amount of damage to one of the destroyers but not enough to count it out of the fight. Prometheus veered up and turned port as the destroyers returned fire. Some of the shots missed but since the Prometheus had started to raise upwards a good portion of the shots hit the engines.

    Sparkes shot out Prowls’ console “Sir, we’ve lost jump capabilities. We only have sublight engines now.

    “Damn it” Magnus shouted “Alright they want a fight they got a fight!. Scattorshot target the lead destroyer and fire fusion cannon.”

    The cannon fired the blast and hit the destroyer’s neck cutting it in two before exploding. The ship’s burning carcass drifted in space almost colliding with the Beliskner. The destroyers responded by launching their fighters and a volley on missiles. The missiles impacted on Prometheus blowing several holes in it’s armored plating.

    Fires erupted on Prometheus bridge.

    “Sir, Massive damage to the hull, fires on C deck and ahhh” Prowl never finished what he was saying as his console exploded killing him instantly. Overhaul jumped over to the helms control pushed what was left of Prowl’s body out of the chair and tried to salvage would he could of the console.

    “Magnus, I recommend we launch our fighters.” shouted Downshift over the com.

    “No, they’ll be no match for those destroyers” responded Magnus.

    “Sir, were getting our asses kicked. We gotta do something”

    “Fine launch the fighters but you have 30 nano kilks to get out of our flak barrier or the cons fighters are going to gut us.” replied Magnus

    Downshift turned to the rest of the fighter pilots “Alright you heard the captain get to your birds and launch ASAP”

    The Autobots fighters exited the bays some engaged the enemy fighters while the other half veered off and targeted the engines of the Beliskner. During that time the enemy fighters came within Prometheus’s Flak barrier as the railguns opened fire destroying two thirds of the incoming fighters.
    The Prometheus turned 180 degrees to face the Decepticon capital ship and fired its main cannon. The blast streaked toward the capital ship but was stopped by a shield.

    Magnus was left speechless as neither side had developed shield technology for ships. The radiation from the transwarp drive had always prevented shields from being implemented.

    “Fire all missiles. Let’s see how strong these shields really are!” ordered Magnus.

    36 missiles sped towards the Capital impacting on the shield but the shield still held. The Capital ship then fired its fusion cannon.

    “Overhaul pull up now!!!” ordered Magnus as the blast tore through the bottom of the ship. Explosions rippled through the lower decks. Wires, support beams and metal fragments now littered the bridge of the Prometheus.

    “Towline Damage report” said Magnus “Towline?”

    Towline never responded as the display behind him had exploded blasting a hole through his chest.

    “Sir, main systems offline the main cannon is destroyed and we only have three missile pods and two railguns left and the engines are gone” reported Overhaul.

    “Shit” Magnus said as sat back down in his chair.

    The fighters were having better luck then Prometheus with most of the enemy fighters destroyed. They were causing havoc for the two remaining Decepticon destroyers. Downshift veered straight down in his fighter onto the Beliskner targeting the sensor array and destroying it. The Beliskner was now flying blind. The rest of the fighters targeted the bridge of the second destroyer with their missiles destroying it. The destroyer was now dead in space. With the destroyers out of the way the fighters turned their attention to the Capital ship and turned to engage it. The first wave swooped in but was destroyed by the ships’ railguns, the second wave hit the ship from beneath to no avail.

    The Capital ship charged up it main cannon and fired destroying all but four of the Autobot fighters.

    “Shit” Downshift yelled “Alright regroup see if we can distract the ship long enough for Prometheus to get back online or take one of the hits for Prometheus.”

    But before the fighters could veer off, multiple ships dropped out of Transwarp. It was a fleet of Autobot ships which immediately opened fire on the Capital ship knocking out its’ shields along with blowing a hole through the ship from bow to stern.

    “Sorry we missed the party. Need any help” said Jetfire cheerfully.

    “What the hell are you so happy about?” yelled Ultra Magnus “If you didn’t notice my ship is half slagged and we now have a major disadvantage against the Decepticons.”

    With no sensors Skywarp had no choice but to make a blind jump hopefully into Decepticon territory.
     
  3. wreckage

    wreckage Sweet biscuits!

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    Guardshell ducked as Mudflap swung his crane arm at him then quickly straightened up and slammed his fist square into Mudflap’s chest. Mudflap staggered back but quickly retaliated with a swift upper cut knocking Guardshell onto his back. He tried to regain his footing but was slammed against the wall by Mudflap and took a blow to the chest from Mudflap’s crane. Guardshell wasn’t able to focus properly one of mudflap earlier attacks must have dam…. Guardshell didn’t have time to finish that thought as Mudflap smashed his fist into his face knocking him once again onto the ground. Mudflap stomped on Guardshell’s back again and again, he knew he couldn’t take much more of this one more blow would finish it guardshell thought to himself.

    “Training session complete.” the computer voice said

    “Ouch, you O.K. Guardshell, I sort of lost control of my temper there.”

    “Meh, nothing a hot oil bath won’t cure.” Guardshell replied before collapsing on the floor.

    Mudflap picked Guardshell up off the floor and carried him down the hall and into the medical bay and placed him on a table and signaled for the doc.

    “Make sure you patch this miserable mech up as fast you can so he can go drinking tonight. I’m buying rounds.” Mudflap said jokingly to the doc before leaving the med bay only to be met by bulkhead the lead instructor at the training facility.

    “What was that?” Bulkhead said anger in his voice

    “That was the medical bay and before that the training room.” Mudflap sarcastically replied.

    “That training exercise was supposed to be defensive” Bulkhead said.

    “A good offense is a good defense or is it the other way around?” replied Mudflap

    “Just listen to me. The more you fight like a Decepticon the more you become like a Decepticon and the closer you find yourself to being kicked out of this facility.” warned Bulkhead, as Mudflap walked away.
     
  4. rebelbot

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    Good story so far, maybe can check out my story. Its called "The Power of Friendship".
     
  5. Mongoose Fire

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    This is a good story so far...keep up the good work :D 
     
  6. Alpha Prime

    Alpha Prime Ten Years Strong

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    Great Story! You really keep the TV personalities really well. keep up the good work!
     
  7. BrookeGirl

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    The story is GREAT keep it coming!:dj  :thumb 
     

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