Transformers Classics: Devastation (First Fan-fic)

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  1. knook

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    Transformers Classics: Dawn of Destruction
    Decepticon Base, Earth

    Thundercracker: *lands on the ground* The humans are getting too wise!
    Skywarp: Stop being so foolish, there just blundering apes
    *Starscream walks in, hes battered and looks as if hes taken a beating*
    Skywarp: What the hell happened!
    Starscream: The Huma.... *Starscreams goes into Stasis Lock
    *Megatron emerges from the Shadows*
    Megatron: HA! Starsream you fool, never underestimate and species no matter how primitive they are
    Megatron: Thundercracker, take Starscream to the C.R chamber

    Megatron's Control Room

    *Megatron walks up to a large black computer console*
    Megatron: Astrotrain Report!
    *Astrotrain is situated high above the Earth silently surveiling the Autobots*
    Astrotrain: So far no luck, the Autobots elude me even know after 200 years.
    Megatron: did you see what happened to Starscream?
    Astrotrain: Yes, the army seems to have adapted a sonic pulse that renders Transformers defensless, they then used a rocket launcher and alot of guns to take Starsream down.
    Megatron: and Thundercracker?
    *the screen crackles*
    Astrotrain: WHAT!?
    Megatron: Thunder..
    *Megatrons voice is cut short as he sees a shuttle fly towards Astrotrain*
    *Astrotrain Transforms, he is HUGE*
    Astrotrain: DIE HUMANS!
    *Astrotrain swipes at the shuttle but to no effect*
    Megatron: ITS AN.........ASTROTRAIN!
    Astrotrain: hu?
    *a bolt of light hits Astrotrain in the back and he freezes, he then enters Earths atmosphere and burns up crashing in England*
    *Megatron slams the control pannel and exits*

    Decepticon Base, Earth

    *Skywarp senses Megatrons emotions*
    Skywarp: Megatron?
    Megatron: Astrotrain is dead
    *Thundercracker enters and walks to the side of Megatron*
    Thundercracker: how is that possible?
    Megatron: The humans, there killing us

    Central London, England

    *Astrotrain lays motionless in the center of London, a crown is gathered around him*

    Peson 1: Bloody hell, what happened?
    Person 2: seems like a Robot
    *Tourists scurrie around it taking photos*

    Sector Seven. England Branch

    Jim: Been a while since we had some action
    Dave: Lets blast the bastard!
    *A tall, old man of authority walks through a large golden door*
    ???: There is only one option, we need to destroy London!
    Dave: WHAT!? you crazy senile old bastard!
    *Gaurds rush towards Dave grabbing him*
    ???: Release him, he dosent understand
    Dave: WHATS THERE TO BLOODY UNDERSTAND!
    ???: Its for the good of the world
    Jim: leave it dave.......please
    *Dave shrugs off the guards and looks angrily at ???*
    ???: the attack will commence in 5 minuites, prepare the Sound Blaster!
    *The Sound Blaster is a large Black weapon that has a Satelite type look but it fires sound instead of receiving signals*

    5 minuites later, Central London

    ??? *over a radio*: prepare
    ???: 3
    ???: 2
    ???: 1
    ???: Fi.....
    *As ??? starts to utter fire the Sound Blaster starts to Transform*
    Transformer: HAHAHA! head my Warning Sector Seven, you cannot beat the Decepticons
    * The Transformer attacks the building using Sound Waves destroying most of the city*
    Transformer: Next, we will destroy YOU Sector Seven!
    *The Transformer picks up Astrotrain and flys off back to the Decepticon base in Nervada.

    The End
    i will continue if you want me too
     
  2. DarkScreamer

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    yes yes please continue it's a really awesome story and so cool that the humans r actually beating up decepticons. hahaha
     
  3. knook

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    Okay, sorry its late but here it is:

    Transformers Classics: Dawn of Destruction

    Decepticon Base:
    Thundercracker: Megatron?
    Megatron: *wearily* What is it Thundercracker?
    Thundercracker: Look outside, now
    Megatron: huh?
    *outside stands two towering robots*
    Starscream: Whats going.....on?
    Astrotrain: Help....me......Mega *he faints and falls to the floor creating a crash*
    Megatron: and you? *looks at the large Transformer who carried Astrotrain*
    Transformer: Megatron, my name is Soundblaster
    Megatron: Soundwave?
    Soundblaster: No, Soundwave is......dead
    *Megatron slowly walks back*
    Megatron: wha...what?
    *Sadness and Anger shows on Megatrons normally lifeless face*
    Megatron: WHO!
    *Soundblaster looks down at his feet*
    Megatron: I ASKED YOU A QUESTION SOLDIER!
    *Soundblaster looks up but above Megatron, a look of fear shimmers across his face*
    Megatron: SOUNDBLASTER?!
    *Three figures stand perched on the mountain top*
    *The Decepticons swivel round and look at them*
    F1: Hello Megatron, life treating you well?
    F2: *laughs* i think hes looking a bit old
    Megatron: WHO ARE YOU!
    *The Figures step through into the light*
    Dirge: Whats wrong Megatron?
    Thrust: Amazing, Soundblaster really is an Idiot
    Ramjet: Lets take care of him!
    *The three seekers Transform into jets and fly at the Decepticons*
    Megatron: ATTACK!
    *Thundercracker, Skywarp and Starsream Transform and hurtle towards the other Seekers*

    To Be Continued......
     
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    Interesting story so far. Especially the two groups of Seekers seeming to have a disslike for each other.
     
  5. knook

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    its more than that, much more ;) 
     
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    It almost reads out to hint that theConeheads killed Soundwave. This also sounds like a mixture of Classics and Movie (especially the leaked treatment).
     
  7. knook

    knook Let the Virus Consume You

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    my inspiration:
    Classics (duh :p )
    Infiltration
    TF2 Leak
    and my own imagination

    so its good so far?
     
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    cool story . keep it up:) 
     
  9. knook

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    thanks, i didn't get this much response for my first post :p 
    I'm working on more, but i have scrapped about 12 times because there is SO much potential for the Seekers battle, I'm watching DBZ to get good hand to hand combat ideas :D 
     
  10. Ravenxl7

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    Yes, it is definetly good so far.

    I didn't come into this thread till after your 2nd post :thumb . Hopefully you'll be able to settle on something for the battle. Keep up the great work.
     
  11. knook

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    exerts (maybe)
    Starscream: how, thats possible
    Soundblaster: NO!
    Thundercracker: MEGATRON!
    Megatron: Thrust!?
    *Starscream leaps into the air grabbing Dirge.......*

    thats obviously not a complete string of text, just random exerts but i edited it to mislead and confuse you, im confident that 3 will be up soon!
     
  12. knook

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    Sorry for the Double post :D 

    Transformers Classics: Dawn of Destruction Part 3: Seeking The Truth Part 1 of 2


    *Thundercracker, Skywarp and Starsream Transform and hurtle towards the other Seekers*
    Starscream: Seekers Formation 170YO
    Thrust: Counter Formation S.7
    *Skywarp transforms screeching to a halt*
    *Thundercracker transforms and speeds up*
    *Skywarp teleports*
    Starscream: Where did they go?
    Skywarp: I don't know!
    *Dirge appears in front of Skywarp sniggering*
    *Skywarp hits Dirge with the end of his blaster sending him hurtling towards the ground*
    Skywarp: Don't mess with the Seekers
    *a streak flys underneath Dirge swooping him up as he falls*
    Skywarp: what the fuck?
    Starscream: MEGATRON!
    *Ramjet is hovering above Megatron*
    Megatron: Impressive
    *Megatron thrusts his gun upwards to shoot at Ramjet, but Ramjet has disappeared*
    Megatron: Where is he?
    Ramjet: Over here Megatron *He's standing about 40 feet away from Megatron and sneering at Megatrons obvious confusion*
    Thrust: Hello, Megatron!
    *Thrust and Dirge are standing behind Megatron both pushing two twin mounted blasters into Megatron's back*
    Thundercracker: SKYWARP, do something!
    Skywarp: i can...
    *Skywarps sentence is cut short as Soundblaster jumps into the air*
    Soundblaster: AHHHHHHHHHH!
    *A giant hand (Soundblaster's) crushes Ramjet into the floor, Ramjet screeches as he shuts down*
    Thrust: RAMJET!
    *In anger Thrust and Dirge continually fire into Megatrons back*
    Dirge: we have to get out of here
    Thrust: i agree, get Ramjet
    Dirge: its too late
    Thrust: DO AS I SAY!
    *Dirge Disappears and Thrust Transforms and flys off so fast that he seems like a Bluur*
    *Dirge appears later next to Ramjets body, opens his chest and retrieves his Spark*
    Dirge: you will be okay soon my Brother
    *Dirge transforms and disappears once again*

    Part 2 will be up soon (thats the fighting and history of the three :D )
    Tell me what you think, and i wonder whats up with the Seekers, they sure are doing strange things ;) 

    i realized that it will take AGES so i have put up this small part, okay?

    oh and spot the two referrals to G1 and the Movie :
     
  13. Ravenxl7

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    Cool. Sounds like the Coneheads got their hands on something that has given them some new powers, and makes them fast (or something along those lines). I'm not sure about the G1 reference, but, I'm thinking the Counter Formation S.7 is the reference to the Movie, specifically Sector 7, though I could be wrong.
     
  14. knook

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    Very good, the other one is a mis-spelling for a word that happens to be the name of a G1 character, oh and your on the right line for the seekers :p 
     
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    Ok, I'm pretty sure I now know the G1 reference. Is it the Bluur part? The proper spelling of the characters name would be Blurr. This is getting really interesting. Keep up the great work.
     
  16. knook

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    Sorry this sucks but:

    Transformers Classics: Dawn of Destruction Part 3: Seeking The Truth Part 2 of 2

    Decpeticon Base, Nervada, America:
    Thundercracker: Megatron?
    Starscream: how is this possible?
    Skywarp: There out of my range, gone for good
    *Soundblaster walks up to the Decepticons*
    Soundblaster: Astrotrain wil...
    Starscream: SHUT UP!, this is all your fault
    Soundblaster: my fault?
    Starscream: You had to attack before you processed!
    Sounblaster: Im sorry, i can fix him
    Megatron: *Wearily as if dieing* Starscream *cough* help.......meeee *he shuts down, leaving Starscream staring at his fallen leader*
    *Soundblaster sits down drawing closer to the Decpeticons height*
    Soundblaster: you should know the story
    Starscream: the story of what?
    Soundblaster: the invasion of our planet
    Starscream: Invasion?
    Soundblaster: yes, on the 2nd of January 2007 a fleet of Ships called the "Ghost Squad" came to our planet, They attacked, using technology far beyond Earth technology, they had powers on the ships that can only be described as "mystical", we were over-run, they took many of our warriors, i kept my memory in an encoded file, that used all of my power, when i awoke i was in a cold docking facility, i saw our Planet burning, i felt the pain and suffering of our kind, soon we all reached Earth i was shut-down but distinctly remember three warriors: Thrust, Ramjet and Dirge, then i went into Stasis-Lock awaking only when i was in London, i hastily transformed and destroyed the city rescuing my fellow Decepticon (Astrotrain). Then i reached South America, i decided to rest for a while and even managed to repair Astrotrain.

    Amazonia rainforest, 48 hours ago:
    Astrotrain: What, im alive?
    Soundblaster: yes, i saved you, my name is Soundblaster
    Astrotrain: Thank you Soundblaster, my name is Astrotrain
    Soundblast: i know but we NEED to get out of here
    *The robots stand up their heads showing above the Tree-tops*
    ???: hello, my freind *cackles*
    Soundblaster: Who is there?
    *Three Bugs reveal themselves from the trees transforming into their robot forms*
    Soundblaster: YOU!
    Kickback: ATTACK!
    *thousands of Bug drones fly at the two Transformers*
    Astrotrain: what do....we do?
    Soundblaster: Follow me!
    *Soundblaster flys into the air with a trail of Bugs following him*
    Soundblaster: EAT MY BLASTER!
    *He fires a massive beam destroying all of the bugs that where following him and Astrotrain*
    *Soundblaster falls to the floor exhausted*
    Astrotrain: Are you okay?
    Soundblaster: *getting up* im fine, just a shock to the system *laughs*
    Kickback: you forgot about...
    Bombshell: ...us, why...
    Shrapnel: ...did you forget?
    *Kickback flies at soundblaster kicking him in the chest sending him surprisingly far considering the size ratio*
    Bombshell: *laughs* You cant win!
    Astrotrain: im up here!
    *Shrapnel transforms into his bug form and scurries away*
    *Astrotrain fires a rocket hitting Bombshell directly*
    Astrotrain: Soundblaster! get Shrapnel!
    *Soundblaster fights off Kickback but to no effect because Kickbacks strength is far to strong*
    Soundblaster: i cant, you have to get him!
    *Soundblaster continues fighting Kickback*
    *Astrotrain Transforms into a Suttle and swoops down, plowing the trees down in his path*
    Astrotrain: GET READY TO DIE!
    *Shrapnel jumps up and latches onto Astrotrain*
    Shrapnel: Oh im sorry, was i supposed to die *Laughs evily*
    *Shrapnel bites into Astrotrain and then jumps off*
    *an electrical surge pules throught Astrotrain bringing him down to the ground, creating a large crater*
    *Soundblaster is still fighting Kickback and still getting beaten*
    Soundblaster: take this *he rips out his battery and plugs it straight into Kickback taking all his Battery (Batteries where incerted by Sector 7 to keep them under their control*
    *Kickback lifelessly falls to the floor*
    Soundblaster: Thanks, i needed some more battery *smirks at Kickbacks corpse*
    *Soundblaster picks up Astrotrains body, flying into the skies above, heading for Nervada*

    Decpeticon Base, Earth:
    Starscream: so its more than just the Coneheads that are attacking us
    Soundblaster: Correct
    Starscream: and the Autobots?
    Sounblaster: their location is unknown to Sector 7, so they are focusing all their power on us.
    Skywarp: Then were screwed, not even any reinfocements to call on
    *Thundercracker emerges from the Shadows*
    Thundercracker: Except the Autobots
    Starscream: for all we know there in on this plan, they have always being Human-Lovers
    Soundblaster: No, the Autbots know nothing about this
    Starscream: get astrotrain operation, as fast as you can
    Soundblaster: why?
    Starscream: were making a trip to South America

    Amazonian Rainforest:
    Shapnel: Hear that? There coming
    Bombshell: dont worry, they are weak, they have already proven this
    Kickback: Yes, they will lose their lives

    Sector Seven base, England:
    ???: Hmmm, the Decepticons are a dissapointment to me
    Sergent: but lord only one was defeated, surely there power is great?
    ???: But the one that fell was the master, our fighters could easily of killed the others
    Sergent: But Ramjet still failed
    ???: and he was punished for his mistakes, time to use the powerful ones

    To be continued....

    its not very good, but it explains alot and introduces a few new Character
     
  17. knook

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    new update, I did this late a night so sorry for any problems :p 

    Transformers Classics: Dawn Of Destruction: Destruction and Construction

    Amazonian Rainforest, South America:
    Starscream: So this is where you were attacked?
    Soundblaster: Yes, but be careful they are powerful
    Starscream: Astrotrain and I will scout to the South-West. Soundblaster and the others will scout North-East
    All: yes sir
    *They all fly off in their Alternate Forms (except Soundblaster)*

    10 Minuites later, Sounblaster's team:
    Skywarp: Look, Humans!
    Soundblaster: Yes, they destroy this area for fuel and other resources
    Thundrcracker: Save the history lesson
    Soundblaster: Geography
    Thundercracker: what?
    Soundblaster: Geography Lesson
    Skywarp: *groans* wanna cause some Havoc?
    Thundercracker: yeah, I’m getting bored
    *as they land in the demolition site the Humans run*
    *Skywarp picks up a Construction vehicle and throws it at a Human*
    *But it Transforms in mid-air and sprints towards Skywarp*
    *Skywarp teleports into the air*
    Skywarp: YOU TWO, UP HERE!
    *Soundblaster and Thundercracker are fighting 5 other robots but fly up following Skywarps orders*
    Long Haul: Damnit,*Sarcastic* i wish we could reach them
    *The all sneer at the robots*
    ALL: Constructicons form to create...
    Skywarp: ...Devastator, i have heard it so many times
    Soundblaster: we should...
    Thundercracker: no, we fight *smiles*
    *Devastator swishes a hand at Thundercracker but he dodges it, Transforms and flys under Deavstator*

    Starscream's team:
    *Astrotrain transforms and lands*
    Astrotrain: I’m sensing something big
    Starscream: Devastator?
    Astrotrain: Yeah, I think so
    Starscream: Lets go!
    Astrotrain: Also a patch of pure heat
    Starscream: Energon?
    Astrotrain: Could be
    Starscream: Lets go

    Soundblaster's Team:
    *Deavstator roars and swings at Soundblaster sending him hurtling to the ground and causing a huge impact*
    Skywarp: im here!
    *Teleports*
    Skywarp: or am i here!
    *Teleports*
    Skywarp: not to clever are you?
    *Thundercracker floats up to eye level with Deavstator, he roars and stumbles back*
    Skywarp: Easy!
    *a Blur shoots into Skywarp, sending him flying*
    *Ramjet appears behind Skywarp and shoots him to the ground*
    *Skywarp flys down vertically*
    *The blur flies into Skywarps back following him down to the ground creating a gigantic crator*
    Thundercracker: Oh shit! *Both Skywarp and Soundblaster are on the floor*
    *Dirge, Thrust and a newly revived Ramjet fly onto Devastators shoulder*
    Thundercracker: Damn, we’ve lost, all hope is lost

    Starscream's Team:
    Starscream: Its only a fire *sighs*
    Astrotrain: there’s something about those vehicles
    Starscream: Stop being paranoid
    *They turn around to fly off but a large shadow looms over them*
    *They both turn round*
    Starscream: DEFENSOR!
    *Three warriors are also perched on Defensors shoulder*
    Kickback: and the Insecticons!
    *Defesor runs at the warriors but Astrotrain dodges him*
    Astrotrain: Starscream?
    *Starscream is high up in the air*
    Shrapnel: imma get him!
    *Shrapnel jumps and latches onto Astrotrain and brings him down with an Electro-magnetic shock*
    *Astrotrain hurtles towards the ground landing with a explosive noise*
    Starscream: NO!
    *Defensor jumps up and swipes Starscream, sending him flying*
    AHHH!
    *Starscram recovers but Defensor steps on him, crushing him*

    Thundercracker:
    Dirge: join us, Thundercracker
    Thundercracker: NO! *he fires at the four but to no effect*
    Thrust: dont be so futile *He blurs into Thundercracker sending him flying*
    *Ramjet appears behind him and sends him towards the ground*
    Thundercracker: *he hits the ground* *wearily* How?
    *Dirge appears in front of Thundercracker*
    Dirge: because we have become powerful
    *Thrust flies down whereas Ramjet teleports down*
    Thrust: We have acquired powers from the Allspark and the Humans
    Thundercracker: but your decepticons, why betray us?
    Dirge: you have been out of contact with Cybertron for thousands of human years
    Ramjet: Lord Shockblast brought us our freedom, WE won the war, so there was no need for factions, then the Humans invaded and made us powerful
    Thundercracker: powers?
    Thrust: well I can travel so i appear as a Blur, Ramjet can teleport and Dirge can become invisible
    Thundercracker: but these are all accomplishable with technology
    Thrust: Yes, but not at our level
    *Devastator bends down and picks up Thundercracker*
    Ramjet: we have no need for him get rid of him
    *Devastator throws Thundecracker behind his back*
    Thrust: we will leave him be
    *But Thundercracker hurtles towards the ground*
    Ramjet: *laughs* he honestly thought we would leave him.

    To be Continued...
     
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    Quite an interesting story, knooks. Let's see more... when you get to it, that is. :wink: 
     
  19. knook

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    This is deffinety getting more interesting. I was wandering if the Allspark would be involved in this or not. It's cool that Shockblast is involved in this. Personaly, I would have gone with Shockwave instead of Shockblast, as I prefer the name, that is, unless I would make them seperate characters. Can't wait to read some more.
     

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