Transformers: Brave New World

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  1. Facemeat

    Facemeat Give me your Face(meat)!

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    Hello all,
    The last time I tried to do fan fiction... it basically went nowhere, so I decided to do something a little different this time around. This new comic serial is also home to a brand new continuity, that will mix new elements with past and present Transformers lore, as well as a healthy dose of Star Trek influence. Please note that this is not meant to be humorous, but rather a dramatic comic.
    Oh, and since there's no indication in the comic, here's a rough translation of the time measurements used in the series:
    Micro-Cycle = 1 Minute : Mini-Cycle = 1 Hour : Cycle = 1 Day : Mega-Cycle = 1 Month : Macro-Cycle = 1 Year

    Hope you all enjoy it. As always, comments and critiques are welcome. (BTW, don't worry, more characters will be seen in the second strip. :wink: )

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  2. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher Well-Known Member

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    Wow, good start! I'm keeping my eye on this :D 
     
  3. Rumble02

    Rumble02 Radicon of Obliticons

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    nice start. maybe a little more action rather than basic same shot but great start.
     
  4. GingaMagnus

    GingaMagnus Civilized Enforcer

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    Excellent. this comic has fair quality, And it does already look promising.... Keep up the good work.
     
  5. Plastic_nomer

    Plastic_nomer Doing the unmentionables

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    I dont mind repetitive shots, but those chairs look comfy.
     
  6. Hype1

    Hype1 D Witwicky biographer

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    Nice look to this, off to a good start!
     
  7. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    I really like how you've started this out.
     
  8. Ripclaw

    Ripclaw DementedDino1

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    like everyone else said, great start :thumb 
     
  9. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    Very interesting...
     
  10. Rattrap Primal

    Rattrap Primal Geek Overlord

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    interesting, I wonder where this is going
     
  11. Facemeat

    Facemeat Give me your Face(meat)!

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    Thanks for all the kind words, guys. :thumb 
    I'm currently working on part 2. The pictures are done, the story is done, now I'm just working on the most tedious part: putting in all the speech bubbles.
    Should be up later today. :) 
     
  12. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Nice new comic here.

    :thumb  :popcorn 
     
  13. Facemeat

    Facemeat Give me your Face(meat)!

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    And Part 2 is finished. :D 
    Here it is, enjoy!

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  14. Lock Cade

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    Oh my, definitely this is a very interesting comic. *Commences making :popcorn *
     
  15. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    Nice. I love the dialogue you've set up!
     
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    Hikaru IchijoSL ヤマト2202

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    Very good start I will keep reading.
     
  17. doomboy536

    doomboy536 Universe Onslaught fanboy

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    Who cares about repetitive shots? We never complained that 90% of the action in Star Trek TOS or TNG took place in either the bridge or engineering. Have you got your figures posed in front of a computer or a TV screen, because that's a pretty clever way of getting a background. Loving the classic TF logo that you're putting at the start of each panel. Keep up the good work :D 
     
  18. Facemeat

    Facemeat Give me your Face(meat)!

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    Yes, I posed my figures in front of my HDTV. With no photoshop skills, I racked my brain trying to come up with a way to get some nice backgrounds for the comic. I can't believe I didn't think of it sooner, actually, it's a very quick and easy way to get a nice shot (despite the fact that my camera's not too great). Glad you all are enjoying it, hopefully I'll get the next comic done sometime this week.
     
  19. Hype1

    Hype1 D Witwicky biographer

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    Ya gotta love when there's both bad news AND worse news, lol.

    And no doubt the "company" is Megs and crew on their warship. :popcorn 
     
  20. ARCTrooperAlpha

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    LOVE THE BACKGROUND !!!! Interesting story thus far !
     

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