Transformers: Annihilation

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  1. Sideways77

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    Remember all those times I talked about writing my own series because Hasbro would never do it? Well, I'm getting off my ass and doing it now! Enjoy the first episode/chapter/whatever.

    EPISODE 1. WAR FOR CYBERTRON

    Cybertron.

    The battle was over. The outskirts of the Autobot capitol of Iacon were littered with the dead of Autotroopers, Vehicons, and other named combatinants not strong enough to survive. Medics and coroners walked through the carnage, looking for the living and piling up the dead. High above in the city itself, the capitol was in one piece. The building had three great spires, all overlooking the city. One tower contained the leader of Iacon and the Autobots, Sentinel Prime. He watched the medics desperatly try to save the dying and sighed. The warrior had been thrugh over a thousand years of war, but never before had he seen what happened here. The Decepticons nearly won, but thier leader, Megatron, called a retreat. It was puzzling, but it allowed Sentinel and his soldiers to breath easy. He turned to the inside of his tower, where the councel of Primes sat. Sentinel cleared his throat. "This was thier boldest attack yet." He stated. "The Decepticons nearly won Iacon, but they retreated. It is most likely thier battle strategy.". Zeta Prime stood. "But what would thier plan be if they retreat before they win and kill us all? It Doesn't make any sense!". Sentinel looked down. "I don't know, but I can guarentee this is there plan.". "And if your wrong?" Zeta continued. "What if they recieved word of something bad that'll destroy Cybertron? Unicron, The Fallen, it could be anything!". "Have order!" Alpha Prime ordered. "There is nothing to fear! Nothing apocolyptic, anyway! This is just thier strategy!". "You've been wrong before." Zeta remarked. Sentinel sighed and sat down as the two began to argue. He turned to his left. "Have you anything to say, Optimus?" The young Prime looked at Sentinel and thought. After one, he stood up. "Both of you have order!" He yelled at the arguing elder Primes. They stopped and stared, along with the rest of the Prime councel. "If the end of Cybertron's days are amung us, then we need to plan to rebuild. Hatchling growth has been slow, and if anything cataclysmic happens, we need to have a plan to regroup after the storm.". Sentinel nodded. "Wise words, Optimus. He is right. If our fears of Unicron or Megatronus are apon us, we need a plan to continue the Cybertronian race.". "How do you suggest we do so?". Zeta asked. From across the table, Nova Prime looked at Zeta. "I suggest we send a shipful of Hatchlings and a strike team to an alien planet. Then the Decepticons nor Unicron will find them.". Sentinel looked at the table. "Who shall go?". The entire table save Optimus and a second created an uproar. Sentinel couldn't believe his councel was acting like members of Arcee's school. "Everyone be quiet!" Sentinel ordered. Everyone did. "We need a younger Prime to go. Most of us are almost to deactivation. Even with our Matrixes. I suggest-" A small voice arose from Sentinel's right. "I'll go." Sentinel turned to see who spoke. It was Rodimus. He was a rather young Prime, but it was Sentinel's decisin to make him one. "I may not know a lot about Cybertron or combat, but I know what it takes to survive. Trust me, Seninel. You did before.". The entire councel muttered to eachother, and making dissaproving glances at Rodimus. But Sentinel stood. "I agree. Rodimus shall lead a team to an alien planet.". "Outragous!" Zeta yelled. He is too young. Send me or Optimus!". Sentinel looked at the old Prime. "One more trip to the med bay and your offline, Zeta. It is best if you remain. It is decided. Rodimus shall go!". Optimus slowly clapped. Rodimus looked at his friend, who gave him a thumbs up. For once in his life, Rodimus felt good.

    In another tower, Decepticon leader Megatron stood. He looked into Cybertron's dark sky and remained scilent. Behind him, his top leutenants spoke to eachother. "Why did he order a retreat?!" Starscream asked, annoyed. "He's been staring at the sky and muttering to himself for hours." SHockwave replied. He looked at his leader. "He hasn't been this way for some time.". Starscream turned to look at the scientist. "Since what?". "Unicron". The two turned to Soundwave, who was typing on a keyboard. "Unicron arrived when Megatron was still a Prime. He left for some reason, but I always knew he;d be back.". Starscream snorted. "Please. That old myth is a bunch of nonsense. Unicron doesn't exist. Never has.". Shockwave looked at Starscream, yellow eye crackling with energy. "I saw it.". Sarscream chuckled. "You saw an Autobot mirage. It wasn't real.". "All the people killed by him were.". Soundwave replied. Starscream shook his head. "You're al delusional. There is no Unicron. Our leader is simply losing it.". Nobody had the heart to tell Starscream that Megatron was right behind him. Using his fusion cannon, he knocked Starscream to the ground. "Imbecal." He replied. He turned to his leutenants. "The end is amung us, friends. Unicron is bound to return.". "And how do you know!?" Starscream replied, dusting his armor off. "When I went scounting in deep space, I saw him. He told me that he'd attack my planet. But I didn't believe him.". "Delusions." Starscream replied. "WHat shall we do?" Soundwave asked. Megatron looked back at the sky. "Nothing. We can't do anything but escape.". Cawing filled the room. Megatron urned to see Lazerbeak enter the room. "Our spy has arrived." Soundwave reported. Lazerbeak turned into a disc and entered the computer Soundwave was typing on. The video of Sentinel talking to the Primes played. Megatron growled at each word said by Sentinel and Rodimus. "Order an assult." Megatron replied. Nobody moved. "WELL?!" Megatron bellowed. "All our generals are dead." Shockwave reported. Megatron roared and punched the computer. Lazerbeak flew out and Soundwave caught him. "Then call out 'Hgh Lord Supreme'!". Megatron yelled. "The Dreads should have taken care of the councel. We need to make our move before the apocopyse comes!". Everyone nodded and dispursed. Starscream remained. "Delusions." He repeated. Megatron roared and grabbed Starscream. Snarling, he threw the Air Commander over his balcony.

    Optimus and Rodimus walked throught the halls of Omega Palace, the Prime's councel room. "What do you think about all this?" Rodimus asked. Optimus shook his head. "All of us are a little crazy. It's probably the startling move by Megatron.". Before Rodimus could speak, Ironhide ran up. The Wrecker Commando looked scared. "Optimus, come on! The Councel has been murdered!". Optimus and Rodimus couldn't believe what they heard. Frenzied, they ran with Ironhide.

    When they reached the councel room, puddles of Energon littered the floor. Dead Primes ere strewn about, in an animalistic manner. Sentinel stood at his balcony, a disgusted look on his face. "What happened!?" Optimus asked. Sentinel sighed. "Megatron's assassins. They're going to make thier move.". The security cameras all over the room were destroyed. Ironhide tapped on the computer on the far side of the room. "They destroyed the cameras. but we still got them.". A video played on the screen. The Primes were at a councel, then smoke pellets filled the room. Five black shapes entered the room, catching the Primes off-guard. Rodimus scowled. "Crankcase's hunters." He replied softly. Sentinel slammed his fist on the table. "Our councel dead... Thier Matrixes stolen... They've gone too far. I will stop them once and for all!". Ironhide pointed past Sentinel and out the balcony. "Nows your chance.". Sentinel, Optimus, and Rodimus turned. The sky was filled with Seekers and Jet Vehicons. The ground was covered with the three types of Vehicons, catching the Autotroopers and Medics off-guard. They massacured the few surviving Autotroopers and moved towards Iacon's main entrance. Sentinel looked past them to a squad of Tank Vehicons. Riding on the largest was Megatron. To his sides were Starscream and High Lord Supreme Straxus. Sentinel turned to his friends. "It begins today." He remarked.

    Well, what do you think? Is this going somewhere? Or is it lame?
     
  2. kaijuguy19

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    I like the premise. There are a few grammatical or spelling errors here and there, but otherwise it's pretty good. I'll be looking forward to more.
     
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    CHAPTER 2. WAR FOR CYBERTRON PART TWO

    Armies of Vehicons marched, perfect unison like they were trained to do. Behind them were the Tank Vehicons, the stronger of the four types. Behind them were the DEV units. They were odd four-legged walker, but were effective. As they marched, Megatron rode atop the largest Tank Vehicon, appropriately named the Colossus. Beside him, Starscream looked to the devastation ahead. "It seems we caught the Autobots off-guard, Megatron". Megatron growled scilently. "Don't be ignorant, Starscream. The Autobots have a plan. They always do." Straxus approached Megatron. "Lord Megatron, may I lead my elite soldiers into battle?" Megatron Nodded. "Very well. But remember one thing. Either me or Sentinel die today. And if it's me, you lead the Decepticons to victory." Starscream sputtered. "What?! What about me?!" Megatron chuckled. "You've been demoted, Starscream."

    In the winding halls of Omega palace, Sentinel quickly walked to the entrance, Optimus and Rodimus trailing. "If we are to win, we need to be smart. I shall take on Megatron by myself." "That doesn't sound too smart". Rodimus remarked. Sentinel sighed. "We all have different opinions. Rodimus, the crew for your mission is ready. Go to ANY planet in the far reaches of space. Optimus, you lead our commando forces. I'll find Megatron." Optimus nodded. "And if you fall?". Sentinel looked down. "Then we lose. And Rodimus is our only hope. Now go! We need to win to save all of us!". Everybody split up, running in thier different directions. Rodimus went underground to the ship launch, which was a good walk away. "Why does he trust me so much?" Rodimus asked himself. "Maybe this isn't a good idea..." He was about to turn around when he found he was in the hanger. Before him stood a not-so-fancy ship, but he knew it all to well. It was the Star Saber, named after the fallen warrior who disappears so many years ago. A small ship, but it was fast. Autotroopers lined up to be inserted into the ship, which was just in case the Decepticons followed. At the main entrance of the vessel, two fembots stood. One Rodimus recognized. She was Glyph, Cybertron's top scientist and not a born fighter. He figured she was the brains of the crew. The other one he didn't recognize. She wasn't an average female Cybertronian. She was more armored, and didn't have the heels alot of others did. A sword and shield rested on her back, which meant she was a gladiator. Rodimus approached, and caught Glyph's attention. "Hi Rodimus!" She said excitedly. Rodimus nodded. "Glyph. I take it you volunteered?" Glyph nodded vigorously. "Of course I did! I would miss out on an opportunity to check out new planet specimens!" The other turned around. "I take it your the captain." Rodimus shrugged. "I guess I am." She shook his hand. "Override. Sentinel said I could help you guys out. Provide security to the Hatchlings." Rodimus shook his head in agreement. "That is a goo idea." An Autotrooper captain approached. "Commander Override, we've successfully loaded all Hatchlings and soldiers on board. How shall we proceed?" Override pointed to the ship. "Get on. We'll blast off now." Rodimus clicked his wrist communicator. "Leg me check in with Sentinel first."

    Outside, the battle was bloody. Dead soldiers were strewn about. Either ripped apart by grenades, or stabbed with bayonets. The Vehicons had a slight advantage, but the Autotroopers managed to push them back to the entrance. Sentinel Prime stood behind them, overseeing the battle. His communicator clicked on, and he talked into it. "Sentinel here." Rodimus's voice came through. "We're about ready to blast off. How's it going up there?" Sentinel looked up again. "We're winning. I figure if we keep pushing them back, we have a chance to win." "Unlikely". A voice ame from behind. Before Sentinel could respond, a pickaxe tore through his head. His body dropped, revealing Straxus behind him. "You soon will lose your 'win'." He remarked. Vehicons swarmed in, ambushing the Autobots. They only had 30 yards to themselves before the Vehicons would overrun them and Iacon was lost. Optimus stood on archway overlooking the battle. He whitnessed Sentinel Prime's demise, and was about to go down there when he heard a familiar voice. "Ready to leave so soon Optimus?" He turned to see Megatron. His sword in hand, he glared down the Autobot. "It is all your fault we're at war." He remarked. If you would've given into my demands, all this death wouldn't've happened." Optimus glared. "Your a tyrant. A monster. It's time to end this." Megatron raised his weapon. "No matter who wins today, at least Cybertron would be spared this war." They charged, and clashed swords. After a minute of fighting, a dark shadow descended on the two warriors. Optimus's jaw dropped as he saw a massive orange shape descend onto Cybertron. Megatron talked under his breath. "Unicron"

    Writing was a bit poor this time around, guys.
     
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    I like it, good work. But may I advise, break up your paragraphs some more. It is a little daunting and difficult to follow when it is so condensed.
     
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    Interesting to say the least. I like how sudden Sentinel's death was, given that he was taken by surprise. It seemed realistic.
     
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    Ømnidrive I HAVE A MANE!!!

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    EPISODE 3. WAR FOR CYBERTRON PART 3

    The biggest fear of every Cybertronian descended from the sky. Unicron's orange playing glistened in the lights, revealing his spikey frame. Optimus and Megatron stood aghast at the form before them. Below, Straxus saw Unicron and turned to the Decepticons. "Everyone et back to Kaon. We're done here." Nearly all the Decepticons retreated, flying or driving back to thier base. The remaining Autobots stood, watching what would happen next. Unicron bellowed out an evil laugh. "You Cybertronians were warned. Now I'll make you regret not preparing!" He slammed a big white fist into Cybertron, ripping though the surface and tearing up underground bunkers. Using the other arm, he backhanded Omega Tower, sending Autotroopers hurling towards the ground. As the Autobots retreated, he kicked into the planets surface, tearing chunks of metal ground into space, along with the corpses of those who were on it. As the destruction reigned, Optimus looked at Megatron. "What do we do?" Megatron spat. "Nothing. I'm leaving to go back to my city. I hope you enjoy playing with the monster." Optimus glared. "But if I die, he'll focus his attention over to Kaon. And Tyger Pax. AND everywhere else. He wants us destroyed. That means YOU." Megatron looked to the side. "You are right." He looked back. "We need to kill this thing."

    Back at Kaon, many Cybertronians hurried through the city. Many moniters hung throughout, and all were playing Straxus's propaganda. His friend, Ratbat, played on them. "Don't be a fool! Join Straxus today! Now that the Autobot menace will be destroyed, we need YOUR help to track down the rest! Join today! It doesn't matter if your an Autobot or Decepticon. If you want our war to end, join us and help us kill the remaining rebels! Join today!" The moniters replayed the clip over and over again. Down below, Cybertronians hurried to join. They knew they'd become like the other Vehicons, but they wanted this war to end. Two friends, Smokescreen and Eject walked to the registration building. "You sure about this?" Eject asked. Smokescreen shrugged. "What choice do we have? Optimus failed us. We have to go somewhere." Eject looked to the looming tower ahead. "But he's still alive! He could make things better!" Smokescreen shook his head. "I doubt it. Plus I want this war to end so I can reopen my casino. Why don't you want to make the world how it was?" Eject loked at his friend. "Is this the right way?" The moniters began to play a new message. "Registration is minimal now." Ratbat reported. "If you want to join our crew, you must hurry! The slow will be turned away or shot. Join today!" It repeated again.

    In the main palace in Kaon Ratbat, Straxus, Shockwave, and Soundwave stood, watching all the new soldiers pile in. "I hope they're here to join and not sabotage us." Ratbat said hopefully. "They won't. They know what's good for them." Straxus said, looking the the screen saying about 567,097 Cybertronians joined so far. He turned to the back room where Shockwave and Soundwave stood. Next to Soundwave was Rumble and Frenzy, who looked out the window. "Are we going?" Rumble asked. "Negative." Soundwave reported. "We are needed on Cybertron, to ensure all Autobot rebels are prosecuted and destroyed". "But I wanna see the stars!" Frenzy whined. Straxus turned to the four. "Yes, you and Shockwave will remain on Cybertron. Same goes for your deployers, Soundwave." The two modified Hatchlings groaned and scampered off, while Straxus watched the numbers climb. "Who shall be on your squad?" Shockwave asked. Straxus looked at him. "Slipstream is hand-picking my lead troops. She's smart. She'll pick the right ones." Ratbat looked at Straxus. "I hope that doesn't mean me. I'm staying on my home." Straxus looked over his shoulder. "You will remain here. As ruler of Kaon." Ratbat perked up. "Ruler? Well, I- of course- thank you." Straxus opene the tower door. "It is time to blast off and catch Rodimus off-guard. Good luck to you three." The door slammed and the three were left alone.

    Unicron smashed at the planet's mantle, trying to get to the core. "You blasphemers will pay for your wrong doings!" Unicron bellowed. Buildings fell, Cybertronians scattered. The nurses and guards were trying to evacuate hatchlings, but were mostly unlucky. Ironhide struggled to get the emergency guns online, but Soundwave jammed the access. "Can't you get these things working?!" Bumblebee asked frantically. "You try it!" Ironhide shot back. Above, Optimus came up with an idea. "Do you still have your Matrix?" He asked Megatron. He opened his chest. "Of course. I would never get rid of what made me a Prime." Optimus removed his. "If we want to beat Unicron, we need to combine our Mattixes with Sparks. Only then can we kill him." Unicron. Overheard and looked at the two. "You two think you can kill me!? HA!" He raised his hand and deployed a massive cannon. "Megatronus will praise me indefinatly for this!" Optimus looked to Megatron. "Now!" Sighing, Megatron removed his Matrix. The double-spiked relic glowed a purple. "For Cybertron." "For Cybertron." Optimus repeated. They united their Matrixes and sparks, and eventually touched shoulders to combine the power. "You two are FOOLS! YOU HEAR ME?! FOOLS! YOU STUPID CYB-" Unicron never finished his sentence when te bright white beam struck him in the face. The dark god screamed as the power of the Matrixes burned his brain and corrupted spark. The life force was drained from the two Primes, too. They used as much of thier power before they turned to dust. As the power amplified, Unicron's screaming stopped. A huge explosion rocked all of Cybertron as the dark god drifted into space, lifeless. Cybertron was saved. But it's Primes were now dead. Below, Cybertronian's cheered as Unicron drifted farther from Cybertron. It was won.

    In the hanger bay, Rodimus felt Optimus's spark die out. Override noticed him flinch. "You okay, cap?" Rodimus looked at her. "Kinda. We need to go. Cybertron will be safe, for now." The two pilots, a laborer named Hoist, and Glyph's assistant, Swerve fired up the engines and the ship hovered and slowly trudged over the planet. The devastation was extreme. Aside from casualties, Cybertron was torn to pieces. The orange core was exposed, and the halves of the planet began to separate. Rodimus radioed Ironhide. "Cybertron's falling apart! Get to an escape ship!" Ironhide's grim voice came through. "We'll be fine. You just get our future out of here. I'll watch over the survivors." The radio cut out and Rodimus couldn't get the signal back. "Guess we're ready." The ship raise and began to hit the atmosphere.

    Trailing them was Straxus's ship, The Harbinger the massive purple and green vehicle trailed, Straxus in the command bridge. "Are we locked-on?" He asked. One pilot nodded. "If we keep the altitude, we should catch th before they get past Moonbase 1." He said grimly. "That's not good enough." He radioed another ship. "Magnificus, is your fleet ready?" In space above Cybertron, an armada of Decepticon ships sat on wait. Abord the commanding ship, The Nemesis, Decepicon commander Magnificus sat. He radioed back. "Of course. We'll get them. And get them good."

    TBC
     
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    CHAPTER 4. WAR FOR CYBERTRON PART FOUR

    High above, Rodimus watched his home crumble. The core was revealed, making the planet glow like a star. The halves were slowly splitting, revealing the core to space's deathly grasp. To the left was Unicron's body, floating into the far reaches of space. As far as he was concerned, the warlord was dead. Suddenly, a rock broke his stare. "More Decepticon Air!" Hoist repeated, revealing a ship on the main montier. Rodimus stared in disbelief at the massive vessel trailing them, which was about three sizes larger than The Star Saber. "Evasive maneuvers! Glyph, get a readout of that ship." Glyph tapped on her tablet, and she saw the information. "The ship's name is The Harbinger. It was used in the creation of Project Sting, deactivated ten years ago." Override winced. "The specifications are unknown." Glyph continued. "And according to my scanners, approximately thirty thousand Vehicons are aboard, along with a regeneration device." The ship rocked again, shuddering under lazer fire. "Make a left!" Rodimus ordered. "If we get behind Moonbase three, we can escape!" The ship veered, and into the fire of the other Decepticon Warships. "Frag" Rodimus whispered.

    Behind them, Straxus stood in his bridge an viewed the battle. Chuckling, he looked to the pilots. "Good work." He said. "What are your names, soldiers?" One stood up. His blue and gold armor glistened in the distant sun's light. "Triggerhappy. Best shot in this universe." The second stood up. "Over-Run. Kaon's best torture expert." Straxus grinned. "So when we get them, dead or not, you'll make'em pay?" Barricade ejected a saw from his hand. "I like to do it slow." The pilots returned to thier posts and Staxus looked back out the window. "I doubt we'll get them. Hard to talk to a burnt corpse that was desperately clutching a Hatchling." "What?!" A voice cried from the back. Straxus turned to see Thunderwing. The old warrior was blind, only letting a small recon drone be his sight. "You think the complete genocide of Cybertron's youth is the answer?" Straxus stepped towards him. "It is necessary. Those hatchlings are corrupted. Sparks tainted with the filth of Autobot domination. Do you not see it? Oh wait. You probably don't." Thunderwing glared. "We were better off with Megatron. He was somewhat honorable." "Enough of your honor nonsense! We need to stop these Autobots!" Straxus turned back around. "All weapons deployed, and full speed ahead!"

    The Star Saber was getting hammered with opposing blasts pretty hard. The combined gunfire from the Trypticon and the Sharpshot took out one engine, leaving a smoking trail in their wake. "We can't last forever!" Override said, clutching a banister so she didn't get knocked down. "We'll have to try." Rodimus said. "The Autobots must survive." The ship trudged on in the hailstorm, despite the devastating blasts. The Harbinger stopped and waited. The gunfire was pointed at all the Star Saber's engines, it wouldn't be long. Suddenly, a blast knocked the Sharpshot out of the sky, and it began to fall towards Cybertron. More fire pounded the Trypticon and the Blazemaster, who were starting to retreat. Aboard the Nemesis, Magnificus grunted and looked to the right. Several Autobot frigates were entering, along side the main command ship, the Ark, which was once commanded by Optimus Prime. Now, Perceptor stood in for him. "Keep on it, lads!" He said to the Autotroopers working gun control. The lazer blasts pumped other Con ships, but some remained. Aboard the Harbinger, Straxus growled and looked behind him to a Vehicon. "Tell Slipstream to mobilize her squad and take those ships out NOW!"

    In the ship's hanger bay, the two large doors opened. They revealed an army of teal and purple Jet Vehicons. Who stood before them was Slipstream. She looked generally harmless, but those who survived Shockwave's Run knew how dangerous she was. As the battle unfolded in front of them, Slipstream raised her clawed hand. "Disperse!" She ordered.

    The Star Saber was all most put of the frey when the Elites attacked. The Jet Vehicons whipped in front of the screen, blasting the frigate's main guns. "We need to stop those flyers!" Hoist said, looking at the ship's energy levels. "We'll do it." Rodimus turned to see the small group of Arielbots. There were hundreds, but a devastating attack narrowed the ranks to five. Scorch lead them, and she was a wildchild. Jetfire stood before Rodimus. Weak in the knees, he was still an acceptional fighter and pilot. "You sure, old friend?" Rodimus asked. "Since the ambush at Darkmount pass..." Jetfire stood straight. "We Arielbots are trained to serve and protect. And that's what we'll do today." Scorched leapt forward. "Yeah! So let's kick some Con tailpipe!" She proudly walked off the bridge, the others slowly followed. "Who elected her leader?" Fireflight asked Breakaway. The Arialbot simply shrugged.

    Slipstream stood on the Shockblast's hull and watched her soldiers shoot down smaller Autobot frigates, which made her smile. Suddenly, three flaming Elites crashed into the bridge of the ship, throwing her off balance. She hit the now with a grunt, and looked at what hit her. Even as the veteran vessel began to go down, she snarled at the sight of the Arielbots. She thought about which one to hit first. It was either thier leader, or Fireflight, who was larger and slower than the rest. Shrugging, she went after Scorch. Firing her light machine guns, she got the commander's attention. "Oh look. The Decepticon's flight wench. I'll go after her." Scroch did a vertical dive and came up, transformed into robot mode "Let's see who the real mistress of the skies is!" She cried triumphantly. Slipstream transformed and readied herself. Scorch flew at her, axe drawn. Slipstream jetted forward, unarmed. "Come on, you no-winged harp-" Slipstream struck first, tearing out Scorch's throat. Without even a squeal, the Leader gave in and died. Throwing the Energon-bleeding corpse aside, Slipstream targeted Fireflight next. He was navigating between the close combat of the Defensor and the Trypticon. Casually aimin her arm rockets, she fires on the transporter, destroying his engines. "Base I'm hit!" He cried. "I'm not going to make it- AAAAA-" gunfire from both ships tore through Fireflight, leaving him as a pile of scrap. Feeling satisfied, Slipstream turned, but only to see Jetfire heading towards her. He swung at her with his hammer, missing her. But he tackles her and pinned her to the hull of the Defensor he held a gun to her head, and got ready to pull the trigger. "Arielbots, retreat." Breakaway ordered. "But I have the killer! I'm going to kill her!" "Jetfire, come on. Too many lives have been lost today." Jetfire looked at Slipstream, who grinned. Jetfire growled and transformed, flying back to the ship.

    Straxus stood aboard the Harbinger's bridge, Slipstream behind him. "Two of them are dead. All my doings!" TW two Elites behind her exchanged looks, but went along. "Congratulations, Slipstream." He said. "Commander Slipstream." Slipstream beamed a triumphant grin as Thunderwing glared at both of them.

    Aboard the Star Saber, Rodimus addressed the survivors. "You did all you could. You were warned about Slipstream on flight training. You should've kn-" "We were caught off-guard! We couldn't have reacted!" Skydive protested, standing at Jetfire's left. "It was all our doings. We should've been alert, and Scroch and Fireflight would still be here." Breakaway grimaced. "But tis another battle lost. We are on our way to death." Rodimus looked at them. "Not quite. We're out of the fighting. The way I see it, Perceptor's armada should ward off the other Con ships, and we shall escape our solar system. We're still alive, and we lost Straxus." The other Autobots seemed to lighten up, as the ship flew into a space bridge, created by hidden Autobots.

    But behind them was the Harbinger, ready to strike. Before the Autobots could close it, the ship gunned the control towers down, killing many Autotroopers. Before the bridge closed, the last spire of the Decepticon warship went through the bridge.

    TBC.
     
  10. Meta777

    Meta777 Dr Pepper Fan

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    I'm liking your plotlines so far, as well as the inclusions of other Primes, UNICRON HOLY MOTHER OF META and Straxus. Sentinel's sudden death was surprising, and the poor Primes sacrificing themselves to kill Unicron was pretty neat and the Harbinger getting through the bridge is a cliffhanger, cool :D 

    My only problem, however, is that it's not spaced out very well. Sometimes I get confused who's talking, who's doing what and all that. Space it out more and it'll be even better :D 

    Good work nevertheless :) 
     
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    Ømnidrive I HAVE A MANE!!!

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    Straxus..........you will die killing a sparkling is NOT OKAY that's just cowardice and a watse of hope!!!!
     
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    Sideways77 smash mouth has consumed the world

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    Chapter 5. CRASH COURSE

    A lone portal opened, and the Autobot vessel slowly crept out, engines still a blaze. Aboard the bridge, everyone calmed. All were quiet, like it was a funeral. Finally, Rodimus had the heart to speak. "So... We made it." A few nodded. Rodimus scowled. "What's wrong? We made it out, and we're fine. The hatchlings are safe, and we have our soldiers. What's wrong?" Override looked up. "We lost our home." Rodimus raised a brow. "Uh?" Hoist looked up from his console. "The Decepticons are in full control of Cybertron. We abandoned our home, our friends, and Their hope." Rodimus stood straight. "Our mission was to find a planet and regroup. We have hundreds of Hatchlings. And if we had a Formulation device, we could continue to repopulate." Glyph looked up. "Only Sentinel knew how to work one of those." Rodimus looked down. "Well, we could figure it out. I'm sure of it." Swerve looked behind. "We got some planets coming up. We have to land. Our engines are almost done for." Rodimus looked out the windshield. A great red planet loomed overhead. "Do what you must." He replied.

    Through the Space Bridge, Straxus read the schematics of the Autobot's vessel. "Primitive." He replied. "Take out its engines and main body and it's doomed." Thunderwing's eyes glowed in the shadows. "And what we do once we destroy them?" Straxus turned to his soldiers on board. "Return home and conquer the rest of them. Cybertron will remain under Decepticon control, and we shall be heroes. "I still do not agree with your choice." Thunderwing replied. "Want us to see you out there without your drone?" Straxus shot back. "And what if we lose the rest of our's? Their hatchling could be of use to us. Or just let them escape." Straxus chuckled. "Allowing a squad of Autobots to escape is like letting a space slug escape. Once it returns to it's home, it regroups and strikes back." Beeping filled the room. "Incoming transmission." A Vehicon reported. A staticky image appeared in screen. Starscream. Shockwave behind him. "What are you doing outside our solar system?" He asked. Straxus growled. "Leading us to victory." Starscream chuckled. "I order you to return to Cybertron and let those Autobots leave. They are of no use to us." Straxus grinned. "I believe you are no longer in control of the Decepticons. Shockwave, if you would please." Starscream raised a brow. "What are you-". A cannon shot range and Starscream hit the floor. Shockwave stood behind him, cannon smoking. "I believe he will no longer e of use to us." He reported. Straxus nodded. "Ensure Ratbat leads Cybertron well." Shockwave nodded and the transmission cut. "We're approaching the end o the space bridge." Triggerhappy reported.

    The Star Saber flew slowly past the red planet. "False alarm." Hoist replied. "The ship could maintain its flight, as long as we go slow." Rodimus nodded. "Good. The sooner we get out of here the be-" an explosion rocked the ship. Rodimus sighed. "Are you kidding me?!" Glyph looked at her tablet. "The Harbinger is back!" Rodimus looked at the pilots. "Get rear shields up. And make sur-" another explosion. "Left side engines are gone!" Hoist reported frantically. Rodimus pointed. "Get those shields up now!" Glyph gasped. "Oh noooo". Rodimus looked at her. "What now?" Glyph looked up. We have a missile ring approaching." And it hit. The ship jerked, sending all standing members into the left wall. "All engines are gone!" Swerve said. "We're going down!" Hoist screamed. The big blue planet before them suddenly came closer and closer. "Brace for impact!" Rodimus yelled.

    On the Decepticon ship, Straxus laughed. "We got them!" Slipstream looked at her master. "What next? Let them crash?" Staxus nodded. "Of course. They'll fall, and we can go home." A Decepticon bruiser, Breakdown, looked up from his post "what if dey survive?" He asked. Straxus froze. All eyes were on him as he thought. "Follow them down." He replied.

    On the big blue marble, a small town resided. It's name not important, it did have an important thing that was given to it. An Earth industry called Gould corporations was going to build a massive powerplant in this little town in a green state of Washington. Near the site was a heavily wooded area. In it was the mansion of the company's owner, Dylan Gould. He and his daughter lived there, and she wasn't happy. "Why did we have to come here?" She asked. Dylan sighed and put a box into a cupboard. "We went over this. My company is expanding. We're helping to win all the United States's wars, and well be even richer! I could buy you anything you wanted, Lindsey!" Lindsey looked at her dad. "Can we go back to California?" Before Dylan could reply, a loud and massive boom shook the house. The lights flickered and went out. "Earthquake!" Dylan screamed. He dove under a table, but Lindsey stood. "Come on, honey, get under the table!" But she was fixated on a light glowing in the woods. "Hurry up, get under!" Dylan ordered. But she ran towards the door, opened it, and ran into the dark forest.

    The Autobot vessel lay in two pieces. The nursery was missed, thankfully, but it hit the troop shelters. Dead Autotroopers lay, Energon freshly leaking from them. The command door busted open and Rodimus leapt out, Override and the others behind them. "Is everyone alright?" He asked. Override held a wounded arm. "None of the main crew are dead." She reported. Glyph took a reading. "Only ten percent of our troops are dead. That's good! I guess." Swerve leapt out and stood next to Glyph. "New world." He replied. Glyph squeed with happyness. "It's beautiful!" She said, staring at the dark trees. She suddenly felt a drop of liquid on her head. "And it drops liquid from the sky! I could live here." Rodimus typed on his wrist device. "The planet is livable. Believe it or not, there's few Energon reserves here. And it says some Cybertronians were ere before." Override limped over. "So we could find some friends." She said. Rodimus closed it up. "Parhaps. We just need to keep low." Glyph bent over and picked something up. "Swerve look!" She reported. Swerve walked over as Glyph held something up. "Look!" Swerve took it. "It's a rock." He said. "An ALIEN rock!" She corrected. Who know what we'll fi-" She paused. Rodimus also looked up. A local stood there, staring in disbelief. Another voice came. "Lindsey, where are you go-" a second one joined her. Rodimus chuckled nervously. "Uh... hi."

    TBC.
     
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    I like where it's leading up to so far.
     
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    I admit I chuckled when Glyph took the troop stats and mused that only 10% of the troop was dead, which is good, kinda.

    And what's this, discovered by humans already? Oh noes! :lol 
     
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    Ømnidrive I HAVE A MANE!!!

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    Great job
     
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    Sideways77 smash mouth has consumed the world

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    EPISODE 6- HUMAN RESEARCH

    The Decepticon cruiser hovered in Earth's atmosphere. Aboard the bridge, Vehicons typed on thier moniters, trying to get a lock on the Autobot vessel. "No sign so far." A jet reported. Straxus stared out the window. "Keep looking. They may still be alive". The same Vehicon looked at Straxus. "We've swept about seven times. We got no lock on any Autobot signals." Straxus growled. "Never trust technology. Set a course for the planet's surface. We'll find them down there." The ship unset its lock and drifted towards the planet.

    Silence was kept between the humans and Cybertronians. Rodimus looked to his crew, who were as shocked as the humans were. Dylan didn't appear suprised. "What are you?" He asked. Swere stepped forward. "Bah-wee-granna-nini" Rodimus looked at him. "What are you doing?" Swerve shrugged. "I don't know. I heard it once." Rodimus looked at the humans. "We are Cybertronians. We come from the planet Cybertron. And you are?" Lindsey approached. "Human. I'm Lindsey and this is my dad." Rodimus got and one knee and stuck a giant hand out. "Rodimus. I lead this crew." Lindsey giggled and shook the oversized hand, and Rodimus withdrew. "What do you call this liquid falling from the sky?" Dylan looked at the being with suspicion. "Rain. Don't you have it?" Rodimus looked up. "Kinda. The stuff we have on Cybertron is corrosive. It'd melt the skin right off you fleshlings." Glyph jumped forward and started firing off questions. Rodimus walked back to the ship, where Hoist was assessing the damages. "How's it looking?" He asked. Hoist shook his head. Damaged. She won't fly again. Most internal systems still work. Space bridge, communications, defenses, all operational." Rodimus scowled. "So we'll be here for a while." Hoist looked at him. "Unless we get a hold of Cybertron." Rodimus sighed. "Surely we are too far away. So I guess we'll be here a while." He walked back to the humans, during Glyph's questionnaire. He interrupted her question about how thier reproductive system works, which made her kinda upset. "It looks like we are here for a while." He reported. "Will your town keep out secret?" Dylan nodded. "They won't know your here because well have to keep you a secret. If the government finds out, you'll be dissected and shipped into space." Rodimus nodded. "Understood". Suddenly, revving got everyone's attention. A red pickup approached. Dylan looked at his daughter. "Who's driving the truck?" The truck suddenly transformed, and Swerve stretched. "This place has great vehicles. You guys should choose one." Rodimus looked at his crew. "Swerve has the right idea. If we're going to be here, we need disguises." Override laughed. "Serve being right is new." Rodimus looked at Hoist. "The space bridge is active?" He nodded. "Yes. But it'll only take us anywhere on this planet." Rodimus nodded. "Good. Because I'm going elsewhere to scan a vehicle mode. Between us, these vehicles are kinda... hillbilly." "We heard that!" Lindsey yelled. Rodimus looked behind him. "Sorry!" Back to Hoist. "Fire up te bridge." Override stepped forward. "I'm going to." Rodimus looked at her. "Why?" She smirked. "Girls gotta look her best."

    A portal opened into a desert. Rodimus stepped out, Override behind him. "What's this place?" She asked. Rodimus looked at the monitor he was carrying. "They call it Las Vegas. Sounds fancy enough." Override looked to the left. "Well, I'm going to go scan something fancy. Good luck to you." Rodimus looked at her oddly. "Fourty minutes. Then we leave." Override smirked. "Deal."

    About twenty minutes passed when Override found something fancy enough. A sleek sports car, two door, lightening patterns on the side. As she admired her new ride, she transformed and got her radio out. "Hope you didn't scan the same thing I did." She said. But only static filled her radio. "Odd." She said. She looked to the right and didn't see her teammate. Shrugging, she began to walk in his direction when something struck her leg. She looked down and saw a sharp needle-looking thing. She pulled it out, and looked around. The roads were dead. She tried to walk, but her leg felt numb. The circuits in her leg began to burn, and she knew it was an ambush. She tried to run, but more needles struck her, more painful than the last. She was breathing hard, trying to regain her footing, when she was near shutdown. She hit the sand with a grunt, falling unconscious.

    Hidden around her were humans, all in tan camo. The radioed eachother details, when two Helicopters arrived. The humans latched the Autobot up and flew her away. One Human went to the other. "Another one for MECH" he said.

    TBC.
     
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    LegoShokwave123 YOU CLOD!!!

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    MECH. Okay, this story just got more interesting.
     
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    Ømnidrive I HAVE A MANE!!!

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    MECH......this early................better be good!!! :popcorn 
     
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    Sideways77 smash mouth has consumed the world

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    Now it is? Hm. :[

    EPISODE 7- LOST

    Vision was blurred as Override awoke from her slumber. Several humans stood around her, typing on monitors and studying schematics of her. Several frightening tools were next to her, such as a saw, drills, and other sharp blades. She wanted to move, but she found herself bolted down to a wall. Suddenly, a human approached her. He had several scars on his face, and appeared to have a fake eye. "Hello." He said softly. "Does it speak English?" Another asked. The scarred human looked into Override's eyes. "Can you understand me?" "How did you get Mech Venom?" She asked softly. The scarred human smiled. "So she does." Override glared. "Answer my question." The scarred human smiled. "We got it from a friend. And he's the one who told us where you and your friend would be." Override continued to glare. "That's ancient Cybertronian poison. What human could have it?" The scarred human turned his back to her. "All in good time." He replied. "Who are you?" She asked. He turned. "Silas. I am the leader of MECH. I take it you are one of those Autobots?" Override didn't have time for it. "Why am I here? What do you want from me?" Silas grinned scarily. "We are on a mission to enhance humans. By studying your anatomy and learning to control your bodies, we will fight our enemies, which includes your evil selves. Autobot or Decepticon, we will eliminate the evil force that plagues our planet." Override cringed as a saw began cutting on her right arm. "We've only had deceased examples come through here. But now that we have a live example, we'll use you well."

    Rodimus crept under the cover of darkness. Few cars drove past, somehow not seeing him. He tried to radio Override, but he got only static. Finally, he radioed base. "Hoist, do you have Override's signal?" He asked through his communicator. "Negative. She's disappeared from the radars." Rodimus frowned. "How is that?" Hoist spoke. "Decepticon blocking? That's really the only way." Rodimus sighed. "I'll keep looking." He clicked the communicator off, and transformed into his new alt-mode. A sleek, flame-patterned sports car with a giant spoiler. Revving the engine, he drove down the road.

    Claws removed pieces of Override's armor. She remained quiet, and stared down Silas, hoping he'd get intimidated and release her. But he kept the stare, not showing sign of retreating. Finally, he spoke. "Lovely weapons." He said, turning to the sword and shield that say on the ground. "Fond of melee, I see. It shows you have the strength and bravery to go head-on with your enemy." Override stared at him. "Somewhat." She replied. Silas turned to her. "I see the shield has the same design of the sigil on your chest. And it looks like your more dinged up than your shield is." Override's eyes widened. "What... what are you doing?" Silas chuckled. "Perhaps you made your shield after something happened. Something you regret? Something that was beyond your control?" Override shook her head. "Stop it!" Silas looked at her. "Did I touch a raw nerve?" Override glared at him. "What are you doing?!" She yelled. Silas smiled. "Do you know what a zoo is? It is a park filled with caged animals. Before they bring the animals in, they have to break them. In order to take them." He chuckled and turned around, walking through an open doorway.

    Elsewhere, Breakdown and Slipstream wandered through a military base. "I don see why we gotta scan one of these Earth modes." Breakdown complained. Slipstream looked at him. "Straxus knows what is best. The rest of them scanned Their own. Even all the Vehicons. They all scanned that low-riding car." Breakdown spat. "All dese vehicles look ugly. I don't see why we gotta scan here." Slipstream got done scanning a jet. "This military base is the closet thing to our ship. Plus you didn't want to choose one on the screen, so I had to accompany you so you don't get lost or screw something up." Breakdown glared. "What? Do you think I'm stupid?" Slipstream grinned. "Just a little." Breakdown shoved Slipstream playfully. He looked to the right and stopped. "Ooh. Look at dat." He was staring at a boxy, mean-looking armored truck. "Dere's my vehicle." He said, getting ready to scan. Humans stood around it, which made Slipstream cautious. "Watch out." She said. "There's fleshlings around it." Breakdown transformed into his new vehicle. It matched his deep blue, and he drove In Circles. "Calm down. I got my new vehicle, so lets get outta here." He drove away, and Slipstream followed him.

    Override was left to think as the MECH humans were busy cutting at her. They cut one of her Energon tubes and hooked it into a glass jar, as it was nearly full. Two humans were screwing around at her feet. "Hey, take a picture!" One said, tossing him his phone. The other shrugged. "Whatever." The first poses next to Override's foot, doing a piece sign. The second took the picture. The first walked up to see what the picture looked like, and Override saw that as an escape. Using as much freedoms as she could, she kicked the human, and he hit the control panel. Alarms sounded as the system started to go out of control. Drills and saws went out of control as humans ran away from the uncontrolled machinery. One saw came close to Override, cutting her left arm's restraint. Free, she used her strength and ripped the other arm cover off. She tore the leg restraints off, and walked towards the cowering humans in front of her. She grabbed her shield and stared them down. "Just an ANIMAL, huh?!" She cried, swinging her shield. Humans were thrown about as she rampaged through the base. Armed humans came in, with their dart guns. They shot Mech Venom darts at her, most of which she blocked. Some injected themselves into her system, but she refused to go down. She looked to her left and saw Silas, who was glaring. Feeling the rage boil inside of her, she picked up a cowering human and chucked him as Silas. He dodged, but when he turned back, he saw her driving away, leaving a puff of smoke. "Let her go!" He yelled. He walked up to a monitor. "But why?" A soldier asked. Silas chuckled. "We have enough information about their species for now." A diagram appeared, showing a 360 model of Override, with the basic details about her. He looked to the floor, past all the wounded MECH soldiers, to puddles of blue liquid on the floor. He knelt down and dipped his finger in it. "We have an unlimited example of their blood. We shall attempt to fuse our DNA with theirs." A MECH operative approached him. "How shall we proceed?" Silas grinned. "Get this blood contained and freeze it. We'll figure it out." He looked at the puddles leading out through the tunnel. "We'll meet again." He mummered.

    Out of the tunnel, Override slowed as her Energon level lowered. She Transformed and looked behind her. She was leading a trail of Energon behind her, which was coming from the opened tube in her arm. She felt dizzy as she limped forward, holding the tube to stop the bleeding. She felt good escaping, but felt uncomfortable when she thought of Silas. He was dangerous, and could break anyone down. But she refused to let what he brought out effect her. Her vision blurred as she tried to make it out of the desert. Suddenly, she heard Rodimus. She looked to her right and saw him running towards her. The moon reflected off his shiny armor. "Where have you been?" He asked. She was too tired to talk. He understood that. He put his arm around her to hold her up and got is radio. "Rodimus here. I Found her. Open the bridge." Within seconds, the blue/green portal opened, and he helped her though. He was quite shocked with her condition, and wondered about what happened. He had too many questions.

    TBC
     
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    Well Override's one tough femme.
     

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