Transformers: Animus

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  1. jdrbrn

    jdrbrn Well-Known Member

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    I've been wanting to start a funny for a long time and now I am. Please provide comments and constructive criticism. Thanks and welcome to Transformers: Animus

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    Well, this is a start, and ya usin' outdoors for scenes can be counted as a plus. And the interaction seems to be evident too, like with the Mini-Con and Sideswipe :) 

    But what is also appreciated that you at least HAD a comic to post at the start of a thread unlike some people we've seen here and then. >_<
     
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    jdrbrn Well-Known Member

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    Thanks! Don't expect Outdoor scenes every update though, more outdoors will be coming in some updates(Only two more planned, one far in the future)
     
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    No worries, I did not mean I was expectin' that, but it was just a note at ya even doin' that at all. :) 
     
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    why are you looking at me? :confused2 
    nice start :thumbs2:  like your photography and can see that you have some photoshop (or whatever your using) skills. Looking forward to more!
     
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    @ biscuits

    I'm using photoshop, most of what I know comes from my dad and the tutorial thread.
     
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    Not a bad start.

    Just two complaints though... the pictures are of various sizes. You might want to keep them all in one size for consistency. Also, the speech bubble in the second panel -- "Well, let's get searching" -- is far larger than the speech bubbles used in the other panels and is square instead of the round ones that you've been using. Once more, try to keep speech bubbles consistent with one another.
     
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    The pictures are different sizes because I changed to 16:9 from 4:3 ratio on the camera, I did the large text bubble to stretch across the panel and give a sense of how large the area was.
     

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