Transformers 5: Worlds at War

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  1. Hiraga

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    So, to the fans of TF 3 and 4, welcome! This is being put up early due to me being with my friends tomorrow.
    Thanks! And enjoy what I hope to be another succesfull fan fic!

    PROLOGUE

    *A man in a lab is working with other scientists. Today is a special day, in the year of 2018. Eleven years after the Autobots had landed on Earth, the scientist and his team had finished the cure for cancer.*

    Optimus: Our relationship with the humans is dwindling severly after Unicron’s defeat last year. We may have defeated countless foes for them, but now Earth’s people are beginning to wonder why they should need to be saved in the first place. If we had never come to this planet, would the Decepticons have?

    *Cut to four weeks later, where the cure is revealed to be a failure. The scientist is standing before his boss, where he is being fired for wasting millions on the supposed cure. Over the next few days the man goes insane, and is once again trying to figure out how to get the people to love him again.*

    Optimus: We knew they were angry…but none of us expected what one of Earth’s most brilliant men was about to unleash against us.

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    *In the jungles of Africa, the people of a quiet peaceful village were running and screaming. All in the same direction. This was not just any wild animal attack. They were running from something very unexpected. It was a BM-21 Grad, and it was firing in every direction the humans were in. It’s colors were made for jungle camoflouge, and it seemed to have strange symbols all over it. The Grad was a soviet truck, contrary to the usual Valkiri’s that South Africans were used to seeing. A fire raged over the village, and many bodies were everywhere. A child was screaming for his mother. The vehicle aimed it’s rocket launchers at the child. But before it could fire, a rocket hit it in the side. The rocket came from General Sam Witwicky of NEST. Behind him stood at least a dozen soldiers in jungle camo.*

    Sam: Spitz, Taylor! Help me take out this things wheels! The rest of you help the civilians out of here!

    *As the eight soldiers went to help the village people, Sam’s best friends Leo Spitz and Miles Taylor took out their weapons and started to shoot at the tough tires of the Grad. More soldiers appeared from all over, and their commanders gave them their own orders. Even a NEST armored truck drove in to drop off six more soldiers. Soon Sam, Leo, and Miles had fourteen others helping them with the tires.*

    Miles: What do we do when this thing decides to take out the really big guns?

    Sam: Then he’ll have to get past ours!

    *After some more shooting, one of the tires was taken out. A missle was fired and killed three soldiers. Just then, the Grad shifted and changed into the gigantic humanoid Decepticon known as Onslaught. His rocket launchers split and attached themselves to the sides of his clawed arms. Four gatling guns appeared at the top of him, while two more missle launchers appeared at Onslaughts legs. The heavily armed Decepticon started firing and killed many village people and soldiers. Sam, Miles, and Leo all did a barrel roll and took cover behind a rock.*

    Sam: Brawn! You’re go!

    *The NEST armored truck transformed, and shifted into the small but bulky Autobot Brawn. He revealed his two cannons and started firing at Onslaught with the soldiers. Onslaught’s own armor protected him and he shot away Brawn and a soldier.*

    Sam: Hound, Bee! Give Brawn som backup!

    Leo: Give that soldier some medical help!

    *As Brawn pulled himself back up, a dirty army jeep and a bright yellow and black Camaro drove around a corner and transformed in Hound and Bumblebee.*

    Leo: Ratchet's on his way.

    Sam: Someone get that soldier out of enemy range!

    *Onslaught got shot away by the Autobots, but retaliated by firing six missles back at them. Hound was blown off his feet. Brawn managed to hold his own but Bumblebee was shot back, with a missle blowing half of his left arm off.*

    Sam: Bee!

    Bumblebee: I'm fine, just a mech wound!

    *A green hummer came speeding around a corner and quickly transformed into Ratchet. Ratchet rushed out of enemy fire, and went to help the soldier.*

    Ratchet: He's broken almost all of his ribcage! I'll have to evacuate him!

    Sam: Whatever just get him out of here!

    *Ratchet transformed back into vehicle mode, while two soldiers helped the wounded soldier into the back. As Ratchet drove off, Onslaught took this oppurtunity to shoot and kill three village people. Sam and Miles got out of their cover and started firing at Onslaught.*

    Sam: Miles, Rodson, Filins, cover Bumblebee! Brawn, get something heavy! We need to take out it's cannons!

    Bumblebee: I'm fine!

    *Miles led three soldiers into battle. They started firing their weapons at Onslaught, who was starting to become overwhelmed by the forces against him. Brawn fired two more times and ran off. Hound had gotten up and fired his rocket launcher at Onslaught. Bumblebee fired his cannon and managed to shoot off Onslaught's leg missle launchers.*

    Leo: Hound! Help the soldiers evacuate civilians!

    *Hound transformed and drove past Onslaught. Just then, the Decepticon was knocked off his feet and fell down when a gigantic tree hit him. The tree came from Brawn, who used his enormous strength to uproot it. Bumbleee took this oppurtunity to re-attach his arm and jump on top of Onslaught. Bumblebee fired his cannon into one of Onslaught's rocket launchers. The rocket launcher exploded, sending Bumblebee flying. He did a barrel roll into some trees.*

    Bumblebee: I think we got him!

    Brawn: Don't be too sure!

    *Just then, Onslaught got up. His arm was gone and almost half of his face was gone as well. But so was a good portion of his body, which provided a weak spot for the soldiers.*

    Sam: The enemy's spark is visible! Take aim and fire!

    *Onlaught tried to transform, but was stopped when a barrage of missles were fired at his abdomen. Pieces were blown off, and Onslaught went to his knees. Bumblebee fired the final blast, which tore right through Onslaught's chest. The Decepticon was torn in half by the blast, and fell down, dead. Soldiers went up to inspect the body, and Sam congratulated his team. Almost no soldiers were hurt, but they were too late to save some of the village people.*

    Sam: Nice one Bee. Great job everyone!

    Miles: I talked to Optimus, and he's sending some copters to dispose of the body.

    Sam: Why is it just now the Decepticons are coming back?

    Bumblebee: The death of Unicron probably attracted them here, probably just searching for whatever killed him so they could become all powerful.

    Leo: After doing some radar, it doesn't look like any other Decepticons are in the area.

    Sam: How are the village people?

    *Jack Rodson, a good soldier walked up.*

    Rodson: Despite the eight deaths, everyone was brought to a safe area where the some of the African sector is waiting.

    Sam: Alright well it looks like we're good to go, let's go guys! C-17's waiting for us where we left them!

    *The soldiers walked away, with some getting in Hound, Bumblebee, and Brawn. Ratchet also came driving down. Ready to head back home.*
     
  2. SkyfiRe71

    SkyfiRe71 Precursor

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    i must say this a pretty intense beginning...i like it!
     
  3. cybertron2006

    cybertron2006 Fly By Clockwork Pictures

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    Woohoo! Great job, Hiraga!
     
  4. Khan-Gar

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    Yesss!!!! This along with my "best female friend" :wink:  Brenda's return is making today a great indeed!!!
    Yessssss!!! :bay :bay :bay :bay :bay 

    Keep it up, Hiraga! :thumbs2: :popcorn 
     
  5. bumblebot98

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    GENERAL Witwicky?
     
  6. ChrisAutobot

    ChrisAutobot Autobot Warrior

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    Hell yeah
     
  7. JetRaid

    JetRaid Jhet Rheyd

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    There are only 2 problems, How did Sam get ranked up to General that easy? I thought it would be Lennox. And that should have been Bludgeon :) , other than that, that was freaking intense! Bumblebee sure took a beating but made up for it with that final blow.
     
  8. Hiraga

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    1. Considering that Sam has been through about as much Lennox had, I wouldn't be too suprised. Sam pretty much has survival and fighting style down, all he needs is the proper weapon and he could make a fine soldier. And Optimus is leader of NEST now remember, so I think he'd know if letting Sam be general was a good idea or not.
    2. Oh, you'll see Bludgeon soon. ;) 

    And for people wondering, Brawn looks just like his toy model.
     
  9. Autobot_Wall-E

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    First page comment :) 

    Niiice opening scene. Starting off with a fight is a great way to catch peoples attention. Its weird seeing Miles again after 3 movies but here he is.

    Does Onslaught look like the ROTF video game version because the description matches. And is Starscream still alive (I dont remember)
     
  10. Hiraga

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    1. Yes, but bulkier. I'm trying to make things easier for Jazz_00 this time around.
    2. Yes.
     
  11. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    One more thing, are Sam and Mikaela married now? I dont remember if this was said in LoC
     
  12. Vulpinix999

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    Nice Fan Fic! Though, will you post the ending for LoC?
     
  13. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    He did. Its that part where Jetfire is talking to Optimus.
     
  14. Attacker_Prime

    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Awesome beggining! Onslaught was awesome, so was the new Autobots' fighting style. :thumb 
     
  15. Hiraga

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    Yes, they are married.

    CHAPTER 1 PART 1

    *In San Fracnisco, there were riots almost everywhere in the city. The riots were against the Autobots. The people of the Earth thought that the Autobots were responsible for all of the destruction in Mission City, Egypt, Manhattan, and the almost total destruction of Las Vegas. Leading these protests was none other then Theodore Galloway. Galloway and his protesters stood before United States president Chap Archer, otherwise known as president 'Chip', Optimus Prime, Sideswipe, and Ironhide.*

    Galloway: Mr. President, the Autobots have stated many times before that they would leave this planet as soon as you told them to. Now, we both know of the countless deaths that happened due to the Unicron attacks a couple months back. Why is it that even after this, you say they can stay?

    Chip: Why Galloway I think we both know that those deaths were due to Unicron. How is it the Autobot's fault?

    Galloway: The attacks in Mission City, resulting in at least twenty deaths. Egypt, seventeen deaths and one of the Great Pyramids ruined! Or the John F. Kennedy, four thousand dead! Manhattan, seventy-three! We all know that none of those are Unicron's fault.

    Chip: And yet I think we all know that those attacks were of the Decepticons doing, not the Autobots. We should be thanking them!

    *This caused the protesters to scream in rage.*

    Chip: If it weren't for the Autobots there would be millions dead!

    Galloway: If it weren't for the Autobots the Decepticons might have never come to Earth in the first place!

    *This caused Optimus to speak up.*

    Optimus: I must speak up on that sir. Me and my team have positive proof that the Decepticons were here before we were. Maybe before your kind.

    Galloway: Tell that to the families of the soldiers killed at sea thanks to your species!

    Ironhide: Why you little runt!

    *Ironhide was going to pull out his cannons, but Optimus signaled for him to cease.*

    Chip: Galloway, unless you can give me good reason, I'm afraid you're demands will not be met.

    Galloway: Not just my demands Mr. President, but the demands of almost all of America. The demands of almost all the world.

    *Chip was silent.*

    Optimus: Unicron would have come here anyway. He didn't care about us. Of course I feel grief over the thousands lost in Vegas, but at the same time it's better then the billions that could have been lost.

    Galloway: So you just look at would could have been? Not what really 'has been'?

    Sideswipe: Of course we don't. Like Optimus said, there isn't a day that goes by when we don't think about those that have died.

    Galloway: And now Decepticons are coming back to Earth, causing NEST to be reactivated.

    Chip: This speech is over.

    Galloway: Psh...like it ever began...

    *Secret service ecorted the President away. Optimus and Sideswipe both glared at Galloway and left. Ironhide glared and made a motion towards Galloway, but was once again stopped by Optimus.*

    Ironhide: Hm...Not worth my time anyway.
     
  16. Attacker_Prime

    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Awesome chapter! :thumb  Nice character development for Ironhide.
     
  17. Vulpinix999

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    Well..ya know, I think Jazz_00 should rest for a while.
    I think he's too tired of the previous artworks
     
  18. cybertron2006

    cybertron2006 Fly By Clockwork Pictures

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    I agree.

    That and I'd like to thank Hiraga for inspiring the current way I tell the Voyage stories.

    Now if there was a rivalry between my Voyage and Hiraga's TF5: Worlds at War, that'd be zawsome!
     
  19. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Well, the Decepticons were looking for the AllSpark to take over the universe. The Autobots came after them to stop them from doing so. Since then, it has been a battle to preserve the lives of humans and prevent the Cons from doing more damage to Earth.

    Wow Galloway is an idiot. And apparently so is America.
     
  20. jonatron26

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    wow, great first chapters. love the action in ch. 1
    will there be more new characters?
     

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