Transformers 4: Revalations

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  1. rodimus62609

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    Okay, this story takes place two years after DOTM. Not very experienced so here it goes. Enjoy!!!

    Voice Over by Optimus:
    Optimus: Earth. Our permanent home. With the destruction of our planet Cybertron, we have no choice but to stay here. Most humans have welcomed us back after the battle of Chicago. some however, still disapprove of us. With the Decepticons gone, and their leader Megatron dead, we finally have peace. However, I fear it may not last a lifetime.

    Flashback to DOTM when Cybertron begins to appear next to Earth. A Cybertronian, tall with spiky features and green lights glowing on his chest, arms, and head lruns frantic through the deserted streets of Cybertron. As he looks up, he sees Earth. Sensing Cybertron may be on the brink of destruction, he flees toward the planet. As his homeworld is destroyed behind him he enters Earths atmosphere and crash lands in the Amazonian rainforests in Brazil. Climbing out of the crater he discovers a village of natives. He examines them for a moment, then his green lights begin glowing bright. He lets out a powerful blast from his body that instantly eradicates the village and its inhabitants. He looks towards the north and yells

    ???: Thunderwing has arrived!!

    I know it's short, just whetting your appetites!!! More soon!
     
  2. rodimus62609

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    Present day. Nest Base.

    Optimus: How is the cleanup looking Ratchet?

    Ratchet: The rebuilding of Chicago is well underway. With luck. The city wil be back to normal in a matter of years.

    Optimus: That is good to hear. Sideswipe. How are the new troops doing?

    Sideswipe: They're adjusting to their new forms and surroundings well Prime. Prowl! Rodimus! Hound! front and center! Meet Optimus Prime.

    Prowl, a 2011 Dodge Charger Police Edition, Rodimus, a 2011 Dodge Challenger, and Hound, a 2011 Jeep Wrangler look up to the kind battle hardened leader.

    Prowl: It's an honor for myself and my team to serve under you Optimus.

    Rodimus: I just wish there was more action on this planet. I think these energon detectors are malfunctioning. There hasnt been anything around the globe Decepticon wise since we arrived!

    Hound: Calm down. Maybe we have finally gotten rid of the rest of the stragglers off this planet.

    Dino: I wouldn't count on it being over so easily. There seems to be a blip on the radar.

    Lennox and Epps enter the main room, followed by the Wreckers.

    Lennox: Just got a hit. There seems to be detectors going off in South America.

    Topspin: Brazil to be exact. In the Amazonian rain forest.

    Epps: What are we waiting for? It's been awhile since iv'e whooped some Alien ass.

    Roadbuster: That's the spirit! Lets hunt down some Decepticon scum!

    Optimus: Sideswipe, Roadbuster, Prowl, and Bumblebee will come with me to South America along with Captain Lennox and his team. The rest of you. Stay sharp. be ready to deploy for backup.

    Bumblebee, who was quiet during most of the converstaion speaks up with his newly repaired voice.

    Bumblebee: If the Decepticons are still lurking around this planet there has to be something they need, what if they're looking to revive Megatron with the Matrix?

    Leadfoot: Impossible. We made damn sure the dead Decepticons were smelted down. There's no way in hell thats happening.

    General Morshower arrives in the hanger, along with more Nest troops.

    Morshower: Captain Lennox, More blips are appearing in Brazil. They're converging on one blip.

    Dino: Optimus with that many Decepticons in one area you may need more help. I will go.

    Optimus: Thank you Dino. Hound.

    Hound: Yes Prime?

    Optimus: I understand that back on Cybertron you were a tracker who searched for escapees from the Maximus Prison?

    Hound: Yes Sir. I was the best of the best until Sentinel shut the place down.

    Optimus saddened when hearing Sentinels name. He betrayed himself, Prime, and the Autobot cause, plus killed his bestfriend Ironhide, along with Skids and Mudflap, who were beginning to become good soldiers.

    Optimus: I'll need you to come with us. If the Decepticons realize we're coming, they may try to mask their energon signals, so we may need you to track them. Using your holgram projecting and Dinos invisibility in tandem could provide us with a stealthy way to see what they're up to when we locate them.

    Hound: Sounds dangerous. I like it.

    Epps: We need to get going. We dont know how long they'll stay in one place.

    Graham, who took a leave of absence to be with his family during the events of DOTM pulls up on a NEST Hummer.

    Graham: C-17's are fueled and ready for takeoff.

    Optimus: Alright Autobots! Roll out!

    The strike team board the massive planes and head for Brazil, not knowing the danger waiting there. Meanwhile, Thunderwing has sent out a signal undetected by NEST Satellites, ordering Decepticons who value their lives to report to his location

    Thunderwing stands alone in a large clearing he made in the rainforest

    Thunderwing: I'm growing impatient.

    An crimson and black 2011 Chevy Impala swerves into the clearing. Behind it is a black 2011 Nissan 370 Z

    Thunderwing: Ahh I was expecting a larger turnout. State your names!

    The Impala transforms and speaks first.

    ???: I am Dead End. I am a stealth expert and assassin.

    The 370 Z transforms and slams it's fist into the ground.

    ???: I'm called Wildrider. A scout and assassins like my brother here

    A Military Stryker pulls up and transforms, along with a Humvee, Apache Helicopter, and an M1 Abrams Tank. Many Decepticon Protoforms appear too.

    The Stryker speaks first.

    ???: Onslaught is my name. Weapons Specialist and Commander of the Combaticon Shock Team.

    The Humvee speaks next

    ???: Names Swindle. I'm weapons designer and scout for the Combaticons.

    The tank steps forward

    ???: I'm Obsidian. Combat expert for the team.

    The Apache perches on whats left of a small building.

    ???: Call me Vortex. I deal with the interrogation of prisoners for my team.

    Suddenly, an F-35 Lightning flies overhead and transformers in mid air. It lands hard.

    ???: They call me Blast-Off. I'm the infiltrator and spy for the Combaticons.

    Thunderwing: You Combaticons seem like excellent candidates for an experiment I started back on Cybertron. It's called a Spark Merging System. It Combines your spark into a single personality, and with it. Your bodies. The subjects back on Cybertron didnt have enough Energon, and couldnt survive the process.

    Onslaught: Why should we trust that it won't kill us then?

    Vortex: We're not exactly at peak performance.

    Blast-Off: Plus, if we undergo the process, we'll cease to exist.

    Thunderwing: That's where you're wrong. It will be integrated into all five of you. You can separate or join at will. However it will put stress on your frames if you join and separate to quickly.

    Swindle: What if we refuse your offer?

    Thunderwing: Then this will be your fate! Thunderwing grabs two protoforms, one in each hand, and releases raw power from the green spots on his arms. The protoforms instantly disintegrate. The Decepticons stand there, shocked.

    Thunderwing: An experiment gone wrong left me with a mutated spark. I can release raw lethal energy out of my body through the ports on my body. Now. What will it be?

    Onslaught: We accept your offer.

    Thunderwing: Excellent choice. Let's get starte-

    Dead End: Not to interrupt but i'm detecting energon readings coming from the north, and i dont think they're Decepticons

    Thunderwing: Then we better hurry to greet our friends. Combaticons. Get ready for installation. You may feel intense pain..well, no. You will definitely feel intense pain.
     
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    Very nice, You are a good writer! I cant wait for the next part!
     
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    The Autobots airdrop into a clear area in the rainforest stripped of its trees by humans. The NEST team consisting of Epps, Lennox, Graham, Hardcore Eddie, and other soldiers parachute in as well.

    Epps: Not getting any readings of Decepticons.

    Eddie: Must have packed their shit and left.

    Epps: Don't get excited just yet. They can mask their energon levels.

    Hound: They're still around. I can track their radiation levels we leave behind. Dino, if you turn invisible I'll direct you on the right path.

    Dino: I'm on it. Where do I start?

    Hound: Northeast through the jungle.

    As Dino leaves, the other Autobots start patrolling the surrounding area.

    Prowl: Optimus! look at this!

    Optimus walks towards Prowl and finds a large crater and the remains of a village.

    Optimus: By Primus. Hound has Dino found anything yet?

    Hound: I'm still directing him on the trail Prime. It's relatively fresh.

    Sideswipe: If we don't find them and take action soon, this we'll be the fate of many other civilizations.

    Roadbuster: I agree we need to act fast! Tell Dino to get his ass in gear!

    Lennox: We don't know where to start yet. Not until Dino disc-

    Dino over comlink: Dino to Autobots. Found the Decepticons. They're in a large clearing, and I count eight of them not counting about ten generics. I'm sending coordinates now.

    Optimus: Excellent work Dino. Stay stealty we're on our way.

    Bumblebee: Let's hurry! if they discover Dino they'll tear him apart.

    The Autobots head to Dino's location. Meanwhile, Dino looks on as Thunderwing installs the SMS into the Combaticons

    Thunderwing: Hold still! Dead End! Wildrider! Get over here and prove you're not as useless as you're proving to be!

    Dead End Quietly to Wildrider: I'm beginning to think we should have stayed in Guatemala.

    Thunderwing turns around, throws Dead End to the ground, and charges his arm ports.

    Thunderwing: Something you care to share?

    Dead End: Uh no!

    Thunderwing: You will address me as master now!

    Dead End: No...master. nothing to say.

    Thunderwing: That's more like it! I am the new Commander of you all! where Megatron apparently failed i will not! Now lets finish the installation. Swindle! you're the last one. Get over here.

    Swindle hesitantly walks past his team, who are reeling in pain on the ground.

    Swindle: Let's get this over with.

    Dead End and Wildrider hold Swindle in place.

    Thunderwing: Open your spark chamber!

    Panels shift and Swindles spark emerges

    Thunderwing: Excellent. Now brace yourself.

    Thunderwing reveals a small square housing with hoses attached to both sides. he places it in front of Swindles spark, and sharp nodes pop out of the front. As the hoses connect to Swindles insides the nodes pierce Swindles spark. He instantly starts screaming and falls to the ground.

    Swindle: AGGHHHH!!! Make it stop!!!! AGHHHH!!!!

    Thunderwing: Congratulations. You've all survived the conversion process.

    Dino: By the Allspark. I've got to tell Optimus!

    As Dino turns to leave, his shoulder hits a tree, which deactivates his cloaking. Wildrider, with his heightened senses picks up on the noise and sees Dino fleeing.

    Wilrider: Autobot intruder!

    Dino: Damn!

    Thunderwing: How glorious. It's been much to long since I've had Autobot energon on my hands. Dead End! Wildrider! Hunt him down and bring him back to me!

    The two assassins hurry off to retrieve Dino. As the red Autobot frantically makes his way towards his team, the assassins come up fast behind him. He unfurls his cannon and shoots at the two. He manages to knock Dead End down, but he gets up fast. As Dino continues shooting the brothers seemingly retreat. Dino continues running.

    Dino: Almost there!

    Wildrider: Guess you weren't fast enough Autobot!

    Suddenly, Dino is blindsided by both brothers and wrestled to the ground.

    Dino: Decepticon scum. What is it you want?

    Dino silently turns his comlink on to alert the other Autobots.

    Dead End: Oh it's not what we want. It's what Thunderwing wants!

    Bumblebee: Dinos been captured!

    Sideswipe: Who's Thunderwing?

    Optimus: Thunderwing was a scientist back on Cybertron. We discovered he was capturing innocent citizens and testing his experiments on them. He also modified his body and when an experiment went awry, he was left with the dangerous ability to channel his sparks energy out of his body in lethal amounts. We finally captured him after he destroyed many Autobots. We locked him in the deepest catacombs of the Maximus prison.

    Prowl: He must have escaped when Cybertron was beginning to teleport here. It destroyed many buildings before eventually crumbling in on itself. Thats when Hound, Rodimus, and myself left and arived here.

    Optimus: Thunderwing is not to be taken lightly. I fear Dino may be short on time. We need to hurry!

    As the Autobots rush to save their comrade, the assassins arrive back to Thunderwing. Dino tries to fight them off with his blades, but with no success,

    Thunderwing: Ahh you've done well. Bring him to me!

    The brothers hold Dinos arms. Dino looks at Thunderwing with disgust.

    Dino: What are you? Some sort of freak accident?

    Thunderwing knees Dino in the stomach hard. He slumps over.

    Thunderwing: My name is Thunderwing. New commander of the Decepticons, and you will treat me with respect!!!

    Dino: Pfft. It looks like you couldn't command androids to a picnic, much less a ragtag group of Decepticons.

    Wildrider: You want me to take care of him master?

    Thunderwing: No. You two tend to the Combaticons. I'll deal with our new friend.

    Dino: What is it you want here?

    Thunderwing: I want what Megatron strived for, but failed. An empire! This is merely the first stop. Once we eradicate the native filth from this planet, it will be our new home planet. Eventually I'll restore the Cybertronian Empire to it's former glory with my new..weapon. Sadly you won't be around to see it.

    Thunderwing punches through Dinos chest, right below the spark. Dino looks up at Thunderwing and spits in his face.

    Dino: Long..live..the Auto..bots.

    Thunderwing charges his arm ports up, with his arm still in Dinos stomach.

    Thunderwing: You'll be the example to the rest of your brethren that I will not let anyone stand in my way. Now DIE!!!

    Thunderwing unleashes his energy, and Dino immediately explodes. Small pieces scatter through the clearing. A piece of Dino with the Autobot insignia still intact falls next to Thunderwing. He crushes it with his foot.

    Thunderwing: One more step to their extinction. Decepticons mobilize! I predict we don't have much time before the rest of the Autobots appear, and I grow bored of this scenery.
     
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    Awesome, now im really intrested!
     
  6. rodimus62609

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    Sorry I had writers block, but I'm back!

    The Autobots arrive in the clearing

    Optimus: Hound, any sign of them?

    Hound: They're long gone Prime. I've lost the trail.

    Bumblebee: Where's Dino?

    They walk farther into the clearing, until they start finding pieces of their comrade. Sideswipe finds whats left of his head.

    Sideswipe: NOOO!! Damn Decepticons!

    Prowl approaches Optimus, who looks solemnly to the ground.

    Prowl: Optimus, what are we dealing with here?

    Optimus: I do not know what Thunderwings intentions are on this planet. We lost a brave soldier today. Let's return to base and locate the Decepticons."

    Sideswipe: What about Dino? We're just gonna leave him here in pieces?

    Lennox: I've arranged a team to retrieve his remains. He'll have a proper burial next to his other comrades.

    Epps: Not just comrades. They were all our friends.

    Graham: This war has taken so much from all of us. I'm beginning to wonder if it'll ever end.

    Optimus: Team, while the peace we have all cherised is over, we must keep moving forward. I will not allow this worlds citizens to experience death at the hands of our race again. We will stop them, no matter the cost.

    Roadbuster: Well said Prime! Let's get back to base and find these punks!

    The team heads back to the planes. Hours later, in Mexico, The Decepticons arrive. Thunderwing, who took the form of an F-117 Nighthawk, lands in a desert on the outskirts of Mexico City. The Combaticons and assassins follow behind him.

    Thunderwing: Take in this scenery! It's glorious wouldn't you agree? This is what the entire planet will look like eventually! Then we can rebuild it to our liking!

    Onslaught: Where do we begin master?

    Thunderwing: I want you and your team to continue to Mexico City.

    Obsidian: And what is our objective there exactly?

    Thunderwing: Simple. Kill. Destroy. Strike fear into this world like your brothers did not so long ago!

    Onslaught: As you command. Combaticons! Let's get moving!

    The Combaticons charge towards the city. Dead End and Wildrider pull up to give their master intel.

    Thunderwing: What do you two have for me?

    Wildrider: The Autobots have left to North America. Exact destination Unknown.

    Dead End: What are your orders Lord Thunderwing?

    Thunderwing: You two will continue North with me towards the Autobots. If we find them and catch them by surprise, we could wipe them off the map in one sweep. Let's go.

    The remaining three Decepticons transform and head towards North America. The Autobots have just arrived back at a NEST headquarters in Denver, Colorado.

    Optimus: Have Ratchet and the others arrived yet with General Morshower?

    Epps: ETA 1 hour. Why did we transfer here?

    Prowl: We fear that staying in one place for to long could put us all in danger.

    Optimus: Thunderwing is unstable, but not dimwitted. He would eventually find us. This could buy us more time.

    Lennox: While we're waiting for the others let's start drawing a battleplan.

    Sideswipe: We need to start on what we know about Thunderwing.

    Bumblebee: We don't even know which other Decepticons are with them or how dangerous they are.

    Optimus: Any Decepticon is a dangerous one Bumblebee. You do have a point though. We need to find out who Thunderwing is working with before we can draw up an effective battle plan.

    Graham: I say some R+R is in order then!

    Roadbuster: A good idea. Gives us time to cool down before all hell breaks loose.

    As the Autobots wait for the other half of their forces, the Combaticons advance towards Mexico City, and Thunderwing along with his team begins to search for the Autobots.


    Hope that was good! Next chapter we'll find out where Sam and Carly have been hiding, along with a couple of surprise characters. Expect a big...and I mean BIG fight scene next chapter too :D 
     
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    SavageThunder 11th Doctor's Huntress

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    youre pretty good! and i like it!
     
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    rodimus62609 Well-Known Member

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    Hey thanks friend! You just gave me the push I needed to continue! :)  expect a new chapter soon, and I'm deeply sorry for the long wait everybody :) 
     
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    gulp. Thunderwing's as crazy as ever.....
     
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    You nailed the alt modes perfectly.
     
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    rodimus62609 Well-Known Member

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    Im glad my story is getting some recognition now! Now that I have motivation back, I can't wait to show you the next chapter. Just trying to find an epic way to introduce the ultimate weapon:) 
     
  12. tfparcee

    tfparcee Arcee, Knockout fangirl

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    that´s...WOOOW, so cool :)  Now i at least now I´m not the only one who is writting
    Like it very much
     

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