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    A THOUGHT THAT APPEARED TO ME we have all hail megatron, how about all hail autobots? Anyone want to do art? Updates about weekly. Anyone want me to return to animated season 4 just say.

    Tf3: Shadows rising

    2 years after Rotf
    Deluge stands, frozen to the corner, scanning the room. A small grasshopper makes a squeak. Deluge jumps, and then curses himself.

    Deluge: Stupid Stupid Dumb Idiot it’s just a....

    He jumps again this time because another bug crawls up His arm.

    Deluge: You’re just getting paranoid; you’re fine, nothing to worry...

    He screams as a loud audio frequency rips through his head.

    Audio: This is a message to any Decepticons out there; this is Springer, of the wreckers, your leader and second in command are no longer operational. If you give yourself up, then you will be transported to Garrus 9, trailed, and probably given the mercy of spark extraction. However, anyone who does not comply will share the same fate as your leader, stuck either in a cell or put in cryogenic stasis to be experimented on. Now to you, this may not sound like a bad option, but no1. You will be fully aware during the tests, and no.2 they will be carried out by our chief scientist, who has recently been shot through the chest with a flak cannon, and I can’t hold him responsible for his actions. Now, transmit on code 33.99 channel 3.79 your surrender and we will pick you up.

    Deluge starts to raise his middle finger to his internal communicator knob when suddenly the 2 bugs infront of him leap. In mid air they mass change into 2 robots and pin him down. The grasshopper removes a small gun from his back and holds it up to Deluge’s forehead.

    Deluge: Please, I was just about to contact you, Please don’t take me to the Autobot lab, Like Springer said...

    Kickback: Oh, we’re not Autobots, (He notices Deluge staring at the gun barrel) don’t worry, it’s on stun, after all, we don’t want Autobots swarming the place.
    He squeezes the trigger and for Deluge, Everything goes black...
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    Bombshell: Now all we need to do is wait...
     
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    (Autobot City, Springer is prepping his troops)
    Springer: Right men, we got three for pick up, cross referencing the code to Megatron’s data tracks reveals the Names, Twin Twist, you’ve got the Decepticons Motormaster, Dead end and wild rider. Guzzle, you’ve got the remaining Stunticons, remember, keep the stasis cuffs on at all times, we don’t want another Abominus incident, New York is still under repairs. Lastly, Roadbuster, you have Deluge. All done, good, the Autotroopers are prepped and ready to go, the arielbots are ready for takeoff, Prowl is here Looking after operations, Wreckers ... Wreck and Rule.
    Roadbuster: Wreck and Rule!!!!!
    (The wreckers go their separate ways and enter the ships, which take off)
    (A worried looking white robot runs in the room holding a holo-sheet)
    Searchlight: Springer, sir, the Brestmasters animals have snuck in and freed them, they are now charging up one by one before they combine, all air strikes by wing blade and his team have been fought off by the animals and the others
    Springer: Oh no.... increase the security at the combiner technology clinic and get Perceptors team to hurry up removing the combining parts from the Decepticons. Increase the air strike, get the Arielbots to return to base as soon as they drop off the pickup squads, call in all other wreckers from the field. Status on the other combiners, Autobot or Decepticon?
    Searchlight: the Terrocons has finished treatment and Perceptor is moving on the Predacons, the build team is still in the field, repairing New York.
    Springer: Put them on alert, if Liokaiser enters the city; tell them to blast him out the sky.
    Searchlight: the Protectobots are on alert ready for rescue operations in Tokyo, that’s where we predict he’ll strike after New York. The technobots are ready for attack; the Dinobots are on standby in case the combiners fail. The trainbots are stilling seeking repairs, team bullet train have finished modifications to stand in. The brainmasters and multiforce are dealing with a Dinoking incident on Cybertron.

    Springer: Ok, prep all Autotroopers and put all combiners on red alert. Get the medics on the field now, I have a feeling we’re going to have a whole load of casualty’s, alert Ultra Magnus.

    Searchlight: Sir yes sir!
     
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    Come on guys, im dying from anticipation of what commentswilll be made
     
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    nice all haul other people here to
     
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    Pretty nice so far, but I'd say give your characters more characterization. The story is good in and of itself, but I think it could benefit from a little bit more detail.
     
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    (The scene switches to a hangar bay in Ark-15, all sorts of ships are taking off, fuelling and transforming, all other robots are running around and jumping on and off of ships, soldiers are grabbing weapons off racks and Autotroopers are charging in the corner, Broadside strolls in)
    Broadside: Right, everybody, ready for takeoff, get to your seats, we should reach the location within 1 earth minute, remember, we’re the first line, just defend the humans and hit and run, do not engage, Springer has prepared a surprise for them in Tokyo, as soon as they combine keep them distracted while the extraction team deals with the animals who will then be flown to Tokyo and hopefully Liokaiser will follow.
    (A red ship flies into the hangar and 4 robots jump out, everyone jumps to attention)
    Ultra Magnus: At ease, Perceptor, get down to the lower levels to help Prowl, Arcee, Hot Rod, with me, Broadside...
    Broadside: Sir!!!
    Ultra Magnus: E.T.A.
    Broadside: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 AND go. Go, go.
    (The hatch opens and Autroopers grab parachutes and jump out the back. The ships engines power up and take off.)
     
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    (The scene switches to the ground where the Brestmasters are firing their weapons at the ships and Autotroopers)
    Liozack: Drillhorn, you’re up.
    (Drillhorn transforms and burrows down, he reappears under a squad of Autotroopers)
    Drillhorn: Die Autobot Scum (He guns down every single one of the squad)
    (A voice screams at him from behind)
    Grimlock: Us Dinobots kick butt.(He blasts Drillhorn from behind)
    Liozack: Hellbat, Gaihawk go help Drill horn, Jaguar, Killbison, continue to shoot down the ships. (Hellbat and Gaihawk transform and their Brest master partners jump into their cockpits, Killbison and Jaguar throw their armour at the nearest ship and they transform in midair ripping through the ships)
    Broadside: Keep at them.
    Scattershot: Keep at them Technobots.
    Swoop: Grimlock leader. He need help, Slag, Sludge, snarl lets go help leader (They transform to dino mode and jump out the nearest ship falling ontop of Gaihawk, Swoop bombards Hellbat who’s cockpit opens and his Bat screams at Swoop who loses balance)
    Liozack: Everyone fall back combine into Liokaiser (The combine and smash the nearest ships)
    Strafe: Bam Bam, Scattershot, let’s take this sucker.
    Afterburner: Agreed (They combine in midair and slam into Liokaiser who shoots him on the arm who in turn shoots him at the knee joint)
    Ark-15: Computron need help, I AM OMEGA SURPREME!!!!
     

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