transformers 3 unicron riseing

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  1. AkatsukiFan

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    Transformers 3 unicron rising
    Part 1

    Cybertron year 3005 the First Great War was won by the autobots but at the great cost of their leader Optimus prime. The new leader of the autobots is Nova Prime last Descendent of the primes as the cosmic terror Unicron approaches Nova uses the space bridge go travel back in time to stop all this from happening.

    Present day earth: it has been four years since the destruction of the all spark and Megatron has sent many of his soldiers but even soundwave was killed by the autobots. And now many new autobots have joined the battle on earth. So far there have been 23 Decpticon attacks in the past 2 years. As optimus prime and his crew leaves the battle field a warp gate appears and Nova Prime appears

    Optimus: Who are you? Where did you come from?

    Nova: I am Nova prime and I come from the future.

    Optimus: The Future?

    Nova prime goes in stasis lock.

    Optimus: Ratchet!

    Ratchet: I’m on it prime
     
  2. Jimbojones

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    I wouldn't have killed off soundwave, thats just my opinion but everything else is fine.
     
  3. AkatsukiFan

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    part 2

    Transformers: unicron riseing
    Part 2

    Unicron: Galvatron i want you to go back to the past and destroy the matrix and optimus prime!

    Galvatron: Yes my leige and i shall take my troops

    A warp gate appears and galvatron and his troops crossed
    through and they were on earth so they scaned some forms to blend in

    Meanwhile an assault van pulled over in front of galvatron and transformed to soundblaster

    Soundblaster: Who are you?

    Galvatron: I am Galvatron

    Soundblaster: are you autobot or decpticons?

    Galvatron: we are Decpticons and we come to destroy the matrix

    Soundblaster: the Matrix is with Optimus Prime

    Galvatron: where is he?

    scene shifts to N.E.S.T. base

    Nova wakes up

    Optimus: so your awake

    Nova: Galvatron is here and he brought his troops

    Optimus: anything we can do to help

    Nova: No I must protect you

    Nova: you are the second last Prime

    Optimus: Second last?

    Nova: yes I am the last Prime
     
  4. AkatsukiFan

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    Transformers: unicron riseing
    Part 3

    a loud blast outside

    scene shifts outside of N.E.S.T. base

    Galvatron: Where is the matrix!!!!

    Nova: if you want the matrix your going to have to get through me

    Ironhide: all of us

    all autobots outside

    Galvatron: okay

    Megatron and the decpticons land on the base

    Megatron: DECPTICONS ATTACK!!!!!!!!

    Optimus comes out

    Optimus: this is my fight

    Optimus: ironhide i want you to take the matrix

    Ironhide: prime you wont be fighting alone

    Thunder strikes from above

    Unicron: enough!

    black lightning strkes nova prime and a dark figure appears

    Unicron: nova prime, optimus prime, meet NEMESIS PRIME !!!!

    the dark figure forms into a black nova prime

    Nemesis: Nemesis prime DESTROY!!!!!!!
     
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    batcam11 SHINIGAMI CHOP!!!

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    awesome
     
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    batcam11 SHINIGAMI CHOP!!!

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    you can news credit me by the button between the green block and triangle you see a kind of libra thats news credit
     
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    batcam11 SHINIGAMI CHOP!!!

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    i rally like the story and Nova prime does he exist or made up by you if hewas made up by you your awesome
     
  8. -Wreckage-

    -Wreckage- I'm Not An Architect

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    Nice fanfic!
     
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    OOOOHHH keep it coming
     
  10. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Pretty good concept, but there were some parts that made the story a little bit confusing, like a couple grammar mistakes. I'm not trying to rip on your story, in fact I think it's pretty good. I'm just offering my critiques.
     
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    @batcam11 thanks

    @deltaprime oh thanks
     
  12. AkatsukiFan

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    transformers 3: unicron riseing
    part 4

    Unicron:meet my new herald NEMESIS PRIME

    nemesis prime attacks nova prime

    Optimus: Nova

    Galvatron: nemesis come

    nemesis prime comes toard galvatron

    Ratchet: Nova ill fix you up in no time

    jolt, sideswipe, ironhide, and arcee attack the decpticons
    nemesis prime aims at ironhide but is saved by chromia and in the prosses cromia goes offline and a scream comes from the blaster

    Unicron: the blaster sucks in the the very spark from a transformer leaveing it a empty shell

    Nova: this ends now!!!!!

    Nova releses the matrix and nemesis prime fades out of existence
    and the light of the matrix destroys unicron and breaks unicron's grip over galvatron and his crew

    Galvatron: thank you

    a warp gate opens and two ships come out of the gate
    to bring nova, galvatron, and his crew back to the future and when they arrive to the future they see the third golden age of cybertron

    Nova: finally it is finished
     
  13. AkatsukiFan

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    Characters

    autobots:
    Optimus prime
    Nova prime
    ratchet
    ironhide
    jolt
    sideswipe
    arcee
    3rd female bike
    chromia
    skids
    mudflap

    decpticons:
    Unicron
    Galvatron
    Megatron
    Soundblaster
    and a lot decptidrones
     

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