Transformers 3: The End?

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  1. tfan123

    tfan123 Well-Known Member

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    Okay here's my version of TF3:
    Scene opens in space, on the Nemesis
    Prime: The Nemesis, home to one of our most evil enemy, The Fallen. 2 years ago, The Fallen came to earth and luckily, we stopped him. It's a current home to the DEcepticons Starscream and Megatron. Our fear is that they will soon return.
    Title screen turns into a ball of energon that turns into the Transformers logo. Scene then changes to Sam's college room. He and Leo are packing up getting ready to leave.
    Leo:So, you think your mom would be cool with me staying with you guys?
    Sam: Oh yeah but if your bad, your sleeping with Bumblebee.
    Leo:Ha, very funny. But he's definetly better then Skids
    Sam: Yeah, if he's got a good mood.
    Sam's phone rings andit's Mikaela
    Mikaela: Hey handsome, I herd you two are coming back today.
    Sam: Yep
    Leo:Tell her I said hi
    Sam: Leo says hi
    Mikayla: Oh ask him if his testicles are better
    Leo: I heard that!
     
  2. tfan123

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    Chapter Two:
    Scene opens to reveal Megatron and Starscream, who abandonded his alien tatoos, at the Nemesis
    Megs: Starscream, I cant believe you talked me into retreating, when I could have killed Optimus, and his pathetic little pet!
    SS: Well, Master, even though you escaped, you arent a coward. Yet.
    Soundwave comes flying in
    Soundwave: Master, I have listened in, and the humans are keeping the Matrix at the Air Force base in a place called, Diego Garcia.
    Megs: Well done, Soundwave. Now, dispatch Lazerbeak and Ratbat to steal it and distract the Autobots.
    SW's chest opens in two, and Ratbat and Lazerbeak fly out of the Nemesis towards Earth.

    Thats all I got. Help me out here guys!:drunk 
     
  3. bumblebot98

    bumblebot98 Banned

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    honestly dude.....you need bigger chapters!
     
  4. tfan123

    tfan123 Well-Known Member

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    Oh shut up I would like to see what you can come up with
     
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    If you cannot handle some constructive criticism then do not post.
     
  6. ironarm

    ironarm SHALL RETURN IN NOVEMBER

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    i sure can
     
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    WAY bigger chapters
     
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    tfan123 Well-Known Member

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    Sorry, thats all i could think of. So if someone could PM me, that would be apprieciated.
     
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    Chapter 3
    (Scene opens in NEST Ops. where Lennox and Prime are talking)
    Lennox: Well, Optimus, what do you think about asking Sam and Mikaela to join the team
    Prime: I dont know, CAptain. It would be risky.
    (Lennox frowns as Epps and Simmons walk in.)
    Simmons: Oh, are you gonna ask the kids to join NEST.
    Lennox: Not Leo. Just Sam and Mikaela. But, Optimus, you do have a point.
    Epps: It would give Megatron the idea we think it's safe for Sam to get into the war.
    (A Boeing 747 lands, and out roll Arcee, Ratchet, Ironhide and Sideswipe. The Boeing thens transforms into Stratosphere.)
    Simmons: Any news about Megatron?
    Arcee: No, but he could strike at any time.
    Stratosphere:So, we need to get to Sam to protect him.
    (He transforms as the rest of them pile into him. Scene changes to the college campus. Sam talks with Mikaela and Leo. They are surrounded by Bumblebee, Skids, and Mudflap in vehicle mode.)
    Sam: Hey,Leo, sorry for getting you involved in the war.
    Leo: THink nothing of it, dude. I love it. Althought, the comments from Skids get alittle hurtful.
    (Hearing this, Skids, Mudflap and Bee transform.)
    Skids: U got that right, pixie!
    Mudflap: Oh yeah he burned yo ugly ass face.
    (Bee then smashes the two together. Then they hear a plane engine. It's Stratosphere.)
    Mikaela: NEST!
    (When the plane lands, the teens and Autobots hurry into the plane.)
    Leo: What's going on?
    Epps: We're putting you on NEST protection.
    Mikaela: WHAT!
    Lennox: With Megatron able to come back at any time, we cant be too careful. You'll be able to return to civilazation when we defeat him. For good.
    Epps: Untill then, you'll be in NEST HQ. Sam, Mikaela, your folks have been picked up also.
    Chapter 3 to be continued​
     
  10. tfan123

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    Chpter 3 cont.​
    they arrive at NEST HQ at Diego Garcia
    Sam: Optimus, whats going on?
    Optimus: Look, Sam, we wanted to protect you three, in case Megatron comes back to kill you.
    A dune buggy comes in and transforms into Armorhide.
    Optimus: Armorhide, did u find the body?
    Arcee:The Fallen's body?
    Armorhide: No, it wasnt there!
     
  11. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    No offense in any way possible, but if you didn't have a legit story in mind and are relying on your audience to write the story, why did you bother posting one.
     

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