Transformers 3 - Screamer95's Story Summary Now Up

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Starscreamer95, Jul 7, 2009.

  1. Starscreamer95

    Starscreamer95 'Civil' Nintendo Fanboy

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    Well, me and AlphaOmegaBlurr are currently making a TF3 Story and Treatment and it's a long shot, but were hopeing that Bay will be interested.

    Now don't start on Crap saying "It'll never happen", we know it may not.
    And I wouldnt be supprised if it get brought as a Movie. But ya never know.

    So on the other side to this, we would like TFW members to think positive to this and share thoughts and give us ideas and well, name who you would like to see in a TF3.

    AlphaOmegaBlurr is currently thinking of Autobots for the Story, while I go off and think of Decepticons who would fit.

    Have we thought of how this Movie can be born with a Story? Yes. Hint: Triangle.
    Have we thought of how to introduce new Transformers? Yes. Hint: Triangle.
    Barricade? Yes. Hint: Traingle.

    And now, thinking of Transformers you would like to be in TF3, we have taken into account the following (AOB is currently chooseing Autobot vehicles):

    (Also, we would like feedback on the TF's Vehicle modes, from you, as fans)

    Autobots:
    Optimus Prime - 316 Peterbilt
    Ironhide - GMC Topkick (Alt Mode Will Most Likely Change Due To GMC Bankrupcey)
    Ratchet - Search & Rescue H2 Hummer (Alt Mode Will Most Likely Change Due To GMC Bankrupcey)
    Bumblebee - Chevy Camaro
    Skids - Chevy Beat
    Mudflap - Chevy Trax
    Ultra Magnus
    Sideswipe - Corvette Stingray
    Wheeljack
    Jetstrom - B-2 Spirit
    Hot Rod
    Blurr
    Jolt - Chevy Volt
    Prowl
    Hound
    Breakaway - F-35
    Springer - V-22 Osprey
    Arcee - Single Motorbike
    Omega Supreme - Cybertronian Space Shuttle
    Dinobots


    Decepticons:
    Megatron – Cybertonian Flying Tank
    Starscream – F-22 Raptor
    Soundwave – Cybertronian Satalite/Cybertronian Starship
    Laserbeak – Mechanical Condor
    Shockwave – Gun Turret/AH-64 Apache
    Thundercracker – F-15 Eagle
    Skywarp – F-115 Nighthawk
    Barricade – Ford Sallen Mustang Police Car
    Reflector - Camera
    Scalpel - Microscope
    Astrotrain - Alt Modes Been Finallized
    Blitzwing - Alt Modes Been Finallized
    Stunticons/Menasor:
    Motormaster – Black 316 Peterbilt
    Dead End - Porsche 928
    Drag Strip – Yellow Tyrrell P34 F-1 Racer
    Breakdown – Dark Red Lamborghini Countach
    Wildrider – Silver Ferrari 308 GTB
    Combaticons/Bruticus:
    Onslaught - Astros II MLRS
    Vortex - MH53 Pav Low Chopper
    Blast Off – A-10 Warthog
    Swindle - XR311 Combat Support Vehicle
    Repeator - LAV-C2 APC
    Lockdown - Leopard 1 Tank

    So, we'd really appreciate your help guys.

    Thanks.

    -Starscreamer95
     
  2. eagc7

    eagc7 TF Movies Fan/Supporter

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    Unicron, galvatron and hot rod plz
     
  3. Surge

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    You need Wheeljack in there. :thumb 
     
  4. Hiraga

    Hiraga BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL

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    Well, IMO, combiners should be left out for this movie. We had two in ROTF, so I think the whole combiner craze has gone down a fair bit. It just wouldn't be as spectacular visually.

    MY OPINION ON HOW TF3 SHOULD BE SET OUT
    PART1: THE AUTOBOTS

    Wheeljack (Somewhat of a Ratchet role, except he's more of an inventor. I'd like to see him as that one car he was rumored to be. Have him cook up a device to defeat the Decepticons before the climax)

    Seaspray (I think just as a small boat, with a jetski jetpack)

    Omega Supreme (Space shuttle)

    Cosmos (I really think Soundwave should stay in space again. It worked for ROTF, all he needs now is some robot on robot action. Have Cosmos fight him near the climax)

    Blaster (Turn into a sports car, voiced by Will Smith)

    And of course you still have Optimus, Bee, Ironhide, Ratchet, Jolt, Arcee, Skids, Mudflap, Sideswipe, and Wheelie which chalks up to...
    5 New Autobots (Keep in mind, one of them is Omega-freaking-Supreme)
    15 total
     
  5. 420bot

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    The dinobots would be super easy to write for unlike what the hack writers say. Just have there protoforms crash into a museum and scan the dino bones, also you can make them more like g1 by explaining how they were damaged in the crash and now talk like fourth graders who Kick Dino Butt!

    "ME GRIMLOCK SAY, BAY YOUR TOTALLY GAY, UNLESS I'M IN YOUR NEXT MOV-AY!"

    That and a nigh invulnerable Galvatron with big bad Unicron heading towards earth.

    Also I would'nt mind seeing Kup, Blur, Wreck-Gar, and some crazy Bay style sharkticons, think robot Jaws instead of the G1 movie guys.
     
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    I like these ideas b/c a Soundwave space fight might be the most visually daunting scene out of all the movie's.

    Yeah big slick willy should come do something, Bay should know that his kids love the films.
     
  7. tehCal

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    Hate to be a pessimist but it will never, ever, ever, EVER happen.

    The idea that Dreamworks would entrust a screenplay for a film (which is meant to make BIG money, but is at risk from the curse of threequels) to a couple of fans from a forum is about as likely as you being picked for a mission to the moon on the same credentials.

    Also, I hate to say this, but almost every person on this forum has terrible, unfilmable, fanwank ideas and (from what I've seen) none of you could write your way out of a hat.

    Oh, and feel free to correct me, but I'm guessing by your user name that you're... 14 or 15? I had those kind of idealistic ideas at that age, but you realise pretty quick that it's dumb. To even be considered for a writer on TF3, you'd most likely have to have written at least 3-4 scripts that had been turned into well-received Hollywood flicks already.

    Screenwriters have never just been hired off the street. And so you know, 0.3% of finished screenplays are ever made into films. :p 
     
  8. jonatron26

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    optimus feeling guilty for all the deaths and junk so he exiles himself into space...., but he returns
     
  9. Hiraga

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    MY OPINION ON HOW TF3 SHOULD BE SET OUT
    PART1: THE DECEPTICONS

    Shockwave (Railgun all the way)

    Astrotrain (A train transformer could look amazing on screen, and could fight Omega Supreme in the climax)

    Bludgeon (A ninja Transformer could look awesome too. Have him transform into something cool, I dunno)

    Swindle (An SUV, or jeep)

    Onslaught (Some huge giant-military-weapon-launching-thingymabob. Make him huge)

    Hook (We didn't get him as a Constructicon. I think a RG-33 would work nicely http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/RG-33)

    Reflector (A video camera spy, that splits into 3 mini-bots that eventually attack Leo or someone)

    And you still have Megatron, Starscream, and Scalpel.

    Total new Cons: 7
    Total Cons: 10

    Tomorrow, the plot!
     
  10. Starscreamer95

    Starscreamer95 'Civil' Nintendo Fanboy

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    Also good news, TFW`s ONE is letting us go by his design and Idea`s of the Combaticons.

    Thing is, were renameing Brawl as Lockdown to avoide all the confussion.
     
  11. spiritprime

    spiritprime Dudes, I'm a girl!

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    How about Rodimus or Hot Rod? Whichever you want to call him. And don't forget Sunstreaker!
     
  12. Starscreamer95

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    Hot Rod has been thought of, just not becoming Rodimus Prime.
     
  13. figsdad

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    I want to see Hound and Springer and let arcee have some chit chat with springer like in g1..
     
  14. Starscreamer95

    Starscreamer95 'Civil' Nintendo Fanboy

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    As much as a G1 fan OmegaAlphaBlurr is I'm sure you'll get it.
     
  15. Torque

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    possible funny idea that may make Bay take interest-make one of them a drunk who has had a bit too much energon-was thinking Hound, though it would may get fans mad.
     
  16. Starscreamer95

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    I acctrually had an Idea of Springer getting a bit tippsy on Energon and then running off to make out with Arcee.
     
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    Hotrod in there as long as he doesn't take over from Prime, like in the G1 movie.
    Maybe something along the lines of Megatron amassing all the remaining Decepticon forces and plotting to wipe out Earth in his own evil way. Upon catching wind of this, Prime awaits the arrival of the remaining Autobot forces and travel to Cybertron to quash the Deceptipunks once and for all.

    Was thinking of having Unicron in there, but am not sure if his sheer size would be an issue to get on film.
     
  18. Torque

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    lol, which Arcee? or is he with all 3 o.0



    wow, i think i just figured out why there are 3 bodies for one girl mind :lol 
     
  19. Starscreamer95

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    Here's a teaser of what we've thought of:

    Bumblebee, Prowl, Jolt and Wheelie go to Princeton, now guarding Sam. Wheelie hangs around Sam and Leo's Dorm.
    Another group of Decepticons is on Earth. Barricade has had contact with them.
    A total of four Combiners have been accounted for.
    NEST still exists, Galloway has been sacked.
    NEST still hunts down more rouge Decepticons coming to Earth. The Story will have a small Hunt and Destroy battle. Maybe 6 Con's against 8 Autobots.
    *WARNING FOR SKIDS AND MUDFLAP HATERS* They're back.
     
  20. Starscreamer95

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    Good Boy *Pats on Head*

    But, we havent decieded on how we'll present Arcee, the 3, or the Blue.
     

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