Transformers 3:Rise of Metroplex

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  1. ironarm

    ironarm SHALL RETURN IN NOVEMBER

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    Hi I'm ironarm. this is the new script for transformers 3. Here are pics for my script:
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    New Autobots
    saturday transformers 3: rise of mertoplex part 1
     
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    Transformers 3:rise of mertoplex part 1

    The movie starts with Sideswipe,Ironhide, and Lennox at Cario,Egypt. You see Devastator's head being carried away by a tow truck.
    Sideswipe: Its over.
    Ironhide:Not quite, Megatron is still alive.
    Sideswipe:Well at least The Fallen's dead.
    Lennox: Hey guys...
    Both Sideswipe and Ironhide: WHAT!?
    Lennox: look...
    Ironhide: oh shit
    Soundwave: I AM SOUNDWAVE!!!

    Part 2 coming soon
     
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    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    lol at "I am SOundwave"

    Ironhide - aww sh**
     
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    Transformers 3 :Rise of Metroplex

    Note: supposed to be transformers 3 :Rise of Metroplex instead of Mertoplex

    Soundwave: scanning...scanning...scanning
    sees an armored SUV
    Soundwave: scanning complete
    Sideswipe: man, ur ugly...
    Soundwave humm... Payload give them a show they'll never forget.
    Payload: ok... DRONES, ATTACK!!!!!!!!!
    Ironhide: Oprimus Prime, come in!!!!!
    Optimus: i copy, whats going on?
    Ironhide: Soundwave and Payload are attacking with drones..*$
    Optimus: what?
    Ratchet: we have to get over there now!
    Optimus; all right, AUTOBOTS, TRANSFORM AND ROLL OUT!
    Skids: Finally, a chance to kick ass!!
    Soundwave: ATTACK THEM ALL!! Rumble, eject.
    *plop*
    Rumble: ugh, it burns!! the light ,UGH...
    Soundwave: great...
    Sideswipe: step off, Soundjerk
    Payload; i got him, i... huh?!
    * chk-chk-bzzt-clang-pop*
    Unknown: ow!!!
    All: what the hell??!!

    Transformers 3:Rise of Metroplex Part 3 coming soon...
     
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    people, check this out!
     
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    ironarm SHALL RETURN IN NOVEMBER

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    people read this!!!!!!
     
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    Biotoakid I've never been wrong

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    You sound kinda' desperate :p 

    It's got some crappy parts to your script but it's pretty good...
     
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    u need longer chapters. Other than that it's a good script
     
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    sneak peview of next chapter:

    Ironhide: who the hell u r?
    Unknown: the name's Hoist.
     

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