Transformers 3 A Bludgeon of A Tale

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  1. Bumblebee92

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    (Optimus narrating)
    Home.Our's was once a planet called Cybertron,intil war brought it's destruction and made exiles of us all. Our lown hope lie in the allspark but with its destruction only fragments remain. We have been throught this planet for many years to protect the species known as humans. With the defeat of the tyrant known as The Fallen we thought it was finally over. But we were wrong.

    For the last 5 months a new team of autobots have landed on Earth. We hunt for decepticons that remain hiding.

    Present day-Baltimore,Maryland
    (a police car drives as fast as it can from two corvettes)
    Barricade: Soundwave I need help. Send in reinforcements.
    (From space)
    Soundwave: Soundwave ecknowlages
    (with the defeat of his last allie ravage Soundwave was faithful this next one wouldn't.)
    Laserbeak eject!
    (meteorite shoot out of Soundwave's stomach)
    (As the meteorite landed on Earth it transformed into a large bird like machine with huge wings and rocket launchers on it's shoulders)
    Laerbeak: (snarls)
    End of Chapter 1
     
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    looks good so far man.Keep it up
     
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    Chapter 2 Nemesis Rising
    Optimus Prime Narrrating:Today things have been going my way.But i have this bad feeling.This darkness ive discovered.It has this power far greater then anything i could ever imagune.Its intoxicating.
    (opening titles)
    (cuts to a crashed ship on cybertron)
    ....2 figures walk out one is very samari like with two samari swords his name was Bludgeon.The other very dark and looked alot like Optimus Prime his name was Nemesis.
    Bludgeon:Master is gone
    Nemesis Prime:Megatron failed as always pathetic
    Bludgeon:Why do you hate Megatron?
    Nemesis Prime:He is weak andhis ways are pathetic just like his brother Optimus.He killed our master
    Bludgeon:Megatron isnt that bad
    Nemesis Prime: (Grabs Bludgeon by his skull and throughs across the ship)Bludgeon im going to track down Megatron and Optimus and like it or not Bludgeon your going to help.Things are going to change around here my way.
     
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    Chapter 3 Insturments of Destruction
    Sunstreaker:Bro you take the the ally ill distract bird brain
    Sideswipe:You got it bro
    Barricade:Atleast i wont find that bumblebee here
    Bumblebee:Ahem
    Barricade:Slag
    Bumblebee:We meet again Barricade where have you been cowarding for the past 3 years
    Barricade:Cowarding?Haf ive been stalking you autobots ever since you destroyed Megatron in Mission City
    Bumblebee:Well time to say goodnight
    Barricade:I didnt even come here to attack i came to warn you of Bludgeon and Nemesis
    Bumblebee:Who?
    Barrcade:Now you want to talk
    Bumblebee:Talk!
    Barricade:Okay okay The Fallen had 3 apprentices Megatron being one and the others named Bludgeon and Nemesis
    Bumblebee:And whatare they gonna do there master fallen is dead
    Barricade:Revenge they were trained longer then megatron was Nemesis is all darkness while Bludgeon is a samarai master
     
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    Not Bad,May i advise possibly longer chapters?
     
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    thank for the comment and sure ill try to make them longer
     
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    cool story man
     
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    Chapter 4 The Nemesis
    Starscream:Why do we hide like cowards Megatron?The autobots are growing stronger by the minute.
    Megatron: Patience Starscream its only a matter of time intil Soundwave returns.
    (Soundwave flys into the Nemesis and transforms)
    Soundwave:Lored Megatron
    Megatron:Welcome Soundwave unlike some of my other warriors you never fail me.
    Soundwave: Data from Barricade on Earth he knows something we don't.
    Megatron:What would that be?
    Soundwave:The two bots known as Bludgeon and Nemesis are coming for you and Optimus Prime.
    Starscream:Megatron who are these bots Soundwave speeks of
    Megatron:My old conrads who served The Fallen with me.
    Starscream:Why are they after you master?
    Megatron:Most likely because i failed The Fallen. Soundwave call some decepticons we are going to Earth.
     
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    Chapter 5 New Autobots
    Bumblebee:Well thanks for the information Barricade but before i go (charges up cannon)goodbye
    Barricade:NO!
    Bumblebee: (cannon shoots and Barricade's head is destroyed)
    Sideswipe: Damn you are good Bumblebee
    Bumblebee:Thanks Sideswipe.Lets transform and report to Optimus
    (Sideswipe,Bumblebee,and Sunstreaker transform and report to Optimus near the shipyard)
    Bumblebee: (Transforms)Prime!
    Optimus Prime:Hello Bumblebee did you find Barricade?
    Bumblebee: Destroyed him to but before i destroyed him he was talking about two bot named Nemesis and Bludgeon.
    Optimus Prime:Oh dear.
    Bumblebee:What is it Prime?
    Optimus Prime:Those bots are nothing but trouble.They hung around The Fallen stelercycles ago.
    Bumblebee:You defeated The Fallen
    Optimus Prime:Yes indeed I did.Anyway Bumblebee there are new bots that have just landed on Earth downtown Ironhide,Ratchet,and Jolt are there already why dont you meet up with them.Sideswipe and Sunstreaker why dont you come with me to base to report to Magnus
    Sideswipe and Sunstreaker:Yes sir (both transform)
    Bumblebee:Meet up with you guys later (transforms)
    ..later
    Bumblebee: (transforms)Ironhide,Ratchet,Jolt
    Ironhide:Hey Bumblebee I want to you to meet the new autobot team.
    (A tall bulky figure walked out)this is Bulkhead
    Bulkhead:Hey little buddy you remember me?
    Bumblebee:Bulkhead how are you? Its been a long time.
    (The next was a shorter bot with a battle mask over his face and a utility wrench his name was Wheeljack)
    Wheeljack:Hello names Wheeljack
    (The next figure was a tall figure he was a flying bot his name was Powerglide)
    Powerglide:Hey Bumblebee
    Bumblebee:Hello Powerglide
    (The last figure was a younger bot he was a police cruiser his name was Prowl)
    Prowl:Nice to meet you
    Ratchet:Alright autobot transform and lets get back to base.
    Jolt:Hey Ratchet whats that in the sky
    Ratchet (looks) Its Megatron and the decepticons autobot brace yourselfs.
     
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    Not bad so far, but maybe you can add more description? It's a little difficult to tell where this is taking place and sometimes what exactly is going on.

    Also, will the humans appear in this story?
     
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    Im debating weather i should or shouldnt the reason is that i hate the human characters in the movie and i want a movie about robots not a kid trying to get layed lol.
     
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    Okay before I continue i am going to update the story 2 times on weekends school has me kind of busy.Now back to the story.
    Megatron:Autobots bring me to Prime!
    Ironhide:Why should we decepticon
    Megatron:I mean no harm, i am here to warn you of what is coming and together we can stop what is coming
    Jolt:Ironhide should we believe him i mean he is megatron
    Megatron:To prove that i mean no harm i will bring back two of your fallen conrades
    RatcheT:Okay then but no funny buisness Megatron
    Megatron:You have my word autobot,Decepticons follow the autobots
    (all transform)

    10 minutes later autobot base
    Bumblebee:Optimus you have a guest
    Optimus Prime:Send him in Bumblebee
    Bumblebee:Yes sir
    Megatrom: Prime!
    Optimus Prime:Megatron (blades pop out)
    Megatron: Prime im not here to fight you im here to warn you of Bludgeon and Nemesis
    Optimus Prime:I knew this day would come
    Megatron:My thoughts exactly now my plan is for my decepticons and autobots work together to stop them.What od you say
    Optimus Prime:Alright then
    Megatron:But to prove im not all that bad i brought bck some old bots of yours
    (Jazz and Jetfire walk in)
    Jazz: Prime im back
    Jetfire:As am I
     
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    Nemesis:Bludgeon lets go
    Bludgeon:Whatever you say
    ????? ?????:You're not going anywhere
    Nemesis:Really you and what army (Turns)
    Bludgeon:Ultra Magnus crap
    Nemesis:Well buddy got somthin for ya (throws smoke gernade)
    Ultra Magnus:Slag!
    (Ship starts to take off)
    Nemesis:Vengence is ours
    Bludgeon: (Pulls out Samarai Sword and looks at Nemesis) Soon.....
    Ultra Manus:Ultra Magnus to Optimus Prime do you read me
    Optimus:Yes Magnus what is it
    Ultra Magnus:Got two cons heading for earth
    Megatron: Prime im prepared my decepticons are ready and i can finally strip the very circuits from their body
    Optimus:Megatron I think that exacactly what they want us to do
     

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