Transdudes

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  1. Draeck

    Draeck Tanks can bounce

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    A while ago i started on "Brawls big day out" just for fun, but it wasnt really supposed to be a series, so I decided to begin a new one.

    This comic is supposed to be partially fun and partially serious business, the story doesnt begin until next episode though I believe.... I have fun reading the comics on this forum and I hope some of you guys will also like mine.

    Feedback is much appreciated, It's pretty hard to know if an episode is funny/exciting/good when you've seen it so many times :confused: 

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  2. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    :lol  not bad of a start.
     
  3. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    Y0u eat the cookie!!

    ROFL!! awe that's good stuff. Brings us some more now!
     
  4. Dremare

    Dremare Had an Epiphany

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    :lol 

    Great start so far!!
     
  5. Fez Findie

    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    Not bad at all :D  I could so feel Grimlock's anger here, especially in the "cookie" scene. Likin' how you handle the character :) 

    The part about Scorponok reminded me of Space Quest 5...
     
  6. NotAnAutobot

    NotAnAutobot Jus' makin' some comics..

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    Yay! A smart Grimlock! :lol  I love the "cookie" scenes. :thumb 
     
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    Anodythe Well-Known Member

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    :lol  Well done!!! :lolol  on the cookie part! can't wait for more!
     
  8. Omega Charge

    Omega Charge Prepare for trouble...

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    I loved Brawl's Big Day Out, and this is great too!
     
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    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    Katamari Prime Hassan Chop! TFW2005 Supporter

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  11. Draeck

    Draeck Tanks can bounce

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    Thanks for all the puns, hopefully I can hold your attention until the $#%$ hits the fan....(the story gets going) and of course keep it fun to read

    I am happy you liked both :D 

    I'm hopin' I can create sum fun characters, and I hope I can avoid having cliche characters as key characters......:wink: 
     
  12. puppylove

    puppylove mini ops caretaker

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    i liked it! :lol 
     
  13. Autobus Prime

    Autobus Prime Transit Former

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    :lol 

    Hey, I don't blame him. Scorpy doesn't want to be tracked!
     
  14. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    Ha brilliant you eat the cookies silly scoropy!
     
  15. Draeck

    Draeck Tanks can bounce

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    I was originally planning on releasing the next bit about now, but I haven't got everything right yet.

    Not completely sure about the serious/funny, story/character building, you know.. balancing issues....

    Anyhow.. I'll get to the point, I made this short bit for a "make a comic" thing on another forum, and I used a scrapped idea for transdudes...(the characters are dumped indefinitely becuz they weren't special in any way...)

    so here it is...

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    feel free to comment
     
  16. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    Lol thats histerical give it to him cliffjumper!
     
  17. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    :lolol 
    Just read your strips so far and they're fantastic. Grimlock is especially chuckleworthy (No no no you EAT the cookie!)
    Bring on more!
     
  18. Dropshot

    Dropshot Transform your destiny

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    :lolol  that was a very funny update.

    Really nice work with the camera :thumb 
     
  19. Draeck

    Draeck Tanks can bounce

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    Go Cliffjumper! :D 
    Thanx, It takes up quite some time actually
    Thank you, ask and you shall receive

    Oh, and before I forget.. I have a question for you guys:
    With the Transdudes episodes I don't bother to make it look like a comic page and stuff, but with "The Exchange" short strip I did. Now the reason I don't do this with Transdudes is because I spend time getting crispy shots and sometimes I think cramming it together in a "page" takes away the nice detail in some shots. However, the comic page thing does give a nice effect and feel to it... soo... I'm just curious if you guys think I made the wrong decision not adding the comic page stuff to this strip...

    And again, much feedback = win, so go ahead and give me your 2 cents:2c: 

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  20. Fez Findie

    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    This Grimlock's really hard to put one's finger on :lolol  He's bot dam smart and a no-good-thug :lolol 

    And not to mention Scorponok... :) 
     

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