Tracks And 'Jack's Fun Time Adventures

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  1. Ikkstakk

    Ikkstakk Well-Known Member

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    Hoo boy. Be kind.

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  2. Fez Findie

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    :lol  Promising start when the seeds of a catastrophe are bein' planted right off, huh... WHOAH! You actually got that signature!? o_O  Cool! ^^
     
  3. LegoTFGuy

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    :lolol  Great start. Can't wait to see more! :thumb 

    I'm jelly of your autographed Grimlock. :lol 
     
  4. The621

    The621 Fuck you, that's why!

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    I'm starting to like this! :lol 
     
  5. Megatron_91

    Megatron_91 Minion of Trixie

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    As a comic with two of my all time favorite autobots as the apparent stars, I'm already hooked:lol 
     
  6. kaijuguy19

    kaijuguy19 Keyblade Wielder

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    Good start so far!:lol 
     
  7. TFfanmaiku

    TFfanmaiku The robot and brony guy!

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    Way to go!
     
  8. Mr. Chaos

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    Good start indeed. You have already hit several key factors for me: You are using voice bubbles (to make it easy to read), you are establishing 2 main characters first, then developing a supporting cast), and you understand comic flow pretty well.

    I would suggest, as I do every new comic writer, that you select a max number of panels and stick to it (for example, my comic goes with 4 panels, as I feel that gives you the maximum payout of quick jokes with detailed story telling). Also, when in doubt, ask for help. I for one am always willing to hear out joke ideas (and as several writers will tell you, I give out jokes for use as well) and giving out pointers, so feel free to hit me up if you need help, and I am sure there are other people who would be willing to lend you an ear.

    Again, good start.
     
  9. Thunder_Cracker

    Thunder_Cracker Friendship is Evil!!

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    Wheeljack and Tracks as the main characters of a comic :) 

    Now that's something new and refreshing :D  And you're off to a good start :thumb 
     
  10. Screamingjet

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    I foresee Dino-Pope putting in an appearance.

    Good stuff!
     
  11. Wars

    Wars Regular At Swerve's™

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  12. Rattrap Primal

    Rattrap Primal Geek Overlord

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    this won't end well
     
  13. Autobus Prime

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    Welcome to comicland, Ikkstakk. :thumb 

    Don't listen to the Vette, Wheeljack,he's just sore 'cause your idea is so awesome. Giant robot dinosaurs; nothing could ever go wrong! Again.

    I think you just need to build them bigger. With more guns.

    :popcorn 
     
  14. Saberfrost01

    Saberfrost01 元ロボ ダイユーシャ

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    Good Start. Word of warning. You may spend far more time comic making than you think. Once you're on roll. it becomes pretty hard to stop oneself.
     
  15. LegoTFGuy

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    Saber speaks the truth. Almost all of my free computer time anymore has to do with comic-making. You have been warned. :D 
     
  16. Grimlock_13

    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    :lolol  Great start!

    (I'm also extremely jealous of your autographed Grimlock :) )
     
  17. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Nice new comic you got here! :lol  :lolol  :popcorn 

    Also congrats on autographed Grimlock. :thumb 
     
  18. Starfire22

    Starfire22 I am dirty dan!

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    :lolol  nice start so far! Love the autographed grimlock.
     
  19. Barrett Sturge

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    This is great! Now I want a RTS Tracks more than ever...
     
  20. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    Love it!
     

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