Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Autobot1000, Dec 21, 2009.
That was a great first battle between bots and cons
Just what you'd expect, lots of transforming, laser beams, different fights breaking out, and ofcourse the jokes fit in hilariously
I'd like to see more please
Though I'd recommend that you work on the lighting and blurriness cuz some of the pics are dark and kinda hard to make up what's going on
Other than that, great start
Nice job on the effects and pictures. But the script can use a little work. Not saying that it's bad, though, I'm just saying that it could use a little work.
good stuff. only thing is it's Constructicons, not Constructacons.
good start can't wait for more
yes, my spelling is awful, but thanks for pointing that one out
Appologise for the light. the problem has been sorted, though not til part 3(ish)
cool! try taking more in focus pics, it helps! Nice lightning effects when devastator was combining! cant wait for more!
unfortunatly my camera is only 3.2 mega pixels....which is rubbish. Just got a new one at 10.2 so should be able to take some better shots
cool, and welcome to tfw2005.
This wasn't too bad a start at all Starscream and Megs gettin' the usual and resultin' to a big-ass battle with lotsa funny jokes thrown in the mix.
The line about RID and Constructicons...
A1000: Hey, no problem. Got to use what you've got, right? I made the first 6 eps of mine with a crummy 320 x 200 webcam.
All you really need is more light, as you already noted. Actually, the 3.2MP camera should be able to do pretty well.
Meanwhile, you've got a pretty classic G1 cartoon plot here, up to the first commercial where the Autobots retreat. 'Cons collect energy, 'Bots come a-calling, 'Bots get spanked while a few choice remarks are dropped (I particularly like Hot Rod's impromptu Christmas caroling), and somebody gets left behind to keep the plot rolling. It's clear what happened, and it works, and you even get to hang a lampshade on the RID-style combination sequence.
You being a little 'tard sure can be some use, Wheelie. ^^
and thats all he is good for
Niiiiiiiiiiiiiceeeeeeeeeeee!!! Love the story, can't wait to see how this unfolds!
that was interesting
but man Wheelie sure was under attack
Ah, good, I enjoy a good car vs. jet fight.
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