Toys @ War

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Autobot1000, Dec 21, 2009.

  1. Autobot1000

    Autobot1000 Well-Known Member

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  2. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    :lolol 

    Nice start! :D 
     
  3. Thunder_Cracker

    Thunder_Cracker Friendship is Evil!!

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    That was a great first battle between bots and cons :) 
    Just what you'd expect, lots of transforming, laser beams, different fights breaking out, and ofcourse the jokes fit in hilariously :lol :lol 

    I'd like to see more please :thumb 

    Though I'd recommend that you work on the lighting and blurriness cuz some of the pics are dark and kinda hard to make up what's going on
    Other than that, great start :D 
     
  4. Dremare

    Dremare Had an Epiphany

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    Nice job on the effects and pictures. But the script can use a little work. Not saying that it's bad, though, I'm just saying that it could use a little work.
     
  5. Megatronwp38

    Megatronwp38 Megatron? Is that you!?!?

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    good stuff. only thing is it's Constructicons, not Constructacons.
     
  6. saberconvoy

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    Wow
    good start can't wait for more
     
  7. Autobot1000

    Autobot1000 Well-Known Member

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    Thanks everyone.

    yes, my spelling is awful, but thanks for pointing that one out

    Appologise for the light. the problem has been sorted, though not til part 3(ish)
     
  8. biscuits

    biscuits Sin from Genesis

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    cool! try taking more in focus pics, it helps! Nice lightning effects when devastator was combining! cant wait for more!
     
  9. Autobot1000

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    unfortunatly my camera is only 3.2 mega pixels....which is rubbish. Just got a new one at 10.2 so should be able to take some better shots
     
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    biscuits Sin from Genesis

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    cool, and welcome to tfw2005.
     
  11. Fez Findie

    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    This wasn't too bad a start at all :D  Starscream and Megs gettin' the usual and resultin' to a big-ass battle with lotsa funny jokes thrown in the mix. :D 

    The line about RID and Constructicons... :lolol 
     
  12. Autobus Prime

    Autobus Prime Transit Former

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    A1000: Hey, no problem. Got to use what you've got, right? I made the first 6 eps of mine with a crummy 320 x 200 webcam. :D 

    All you really need is more light, as you already noted. Actually, the 3.2MP camera should be able to do pretty well.

    Meanwhile, you've got a pretty classic G1 cartoon plot here, up to the first commercial where the Autobots retreat. 'Cons collect energy, 'Bots come a-calling, 'Bots get spanked while a few choice remarks are dropped (I particularly like Hot Rod's impromptu Christmas caroling), and somebody gets left behind to keep the plot rolling. It's clear what happened, and it works, and you even get to hang a lampshade on the RID-style combination sequence. :D 
     
  13. Autobot1000

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    part two

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    :lolol  :lolol 

    You being a little 'tard sure can be some use, Wheelie. ^^
     
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    :lolol 

    and thats all he is good for
     
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  17. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    Niiiiiiiiiiiiiceeeeeeeeeeee!!! Love the story, can't wait to see how this unfolds! :bay 
     
  18. saberconvoy

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    that was interesting

    but man :lol  Wheelie sure was under attack
     
  19. Autobus Prime

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    :popcorn 

    Ah, good, I enjoy a good car vs. jet fight. :D 
     
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