Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by JBerryFTW, Apr 15, 2012.
Ok guys here is my first comic. I hope you like it.
Not bad to start out with, infact i really like the serious and dark bits. Even the effects are good. But i think you should have used a different punchline at the end other then referencing G-13.
I like the original premise, but that ending doesn't really work. But, I shall follow this never the less.
OH NO ARCEE!
What is that supposed to mean?
Hey somebody actually liked it!
Yeah I know the ending was shit because I was rushed to make it coz I had to go to a guy's party. And I have work the next day.
Yes, poor Arcee.....
Yeah I know this is a weird comic.
I might cancell this comic after the next strip, which would probably please you guys and I will kill off the G13 derps and make it more serious. I was just testing to see how it would go.
Poor Arcee and Bumblebee, two comrades dying together.
I like the character deaths, but couldn't you kill the other Bumblebee instead?
It means, that for once in my life, I didn't directly have any coherent words to say/use. I was flabbergasted...I'm not sure if I REALLY like that something had that effect on me or if I'm uncomfortable because it had that effect on me. Either way it left an impression, which is a very good thing. That part with the young'n was brutal, I love brutal.
Well... Um... Yeah. You're going down that serious but funny route my "playthings at war" comic followed after a while.
Good luck... Judging by some comments, you'll probably need it.
madness, this is not madness... THIS IS CYBERTRON!!!!
The hell is grimlock 13?
looking forward to see where you go with this one
you should try reading more comics
Yeah, well they had to die sooner or later.
My other bee's are in storage, that was the only one I had.
Yeah I'll try doing better next time (thats if It see's the light of day.)
I don't think i'll be staying around for too long though.
I was reading one of his comics and it looked funny so I attempted to do one but it sucked...
Guys i also deleted the last one because it wasn't good. Im thinking of making a second strip.
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