This is Cybertron.

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  1. JBerryFTW

    JBerryFTW The new kid on the block.

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    Ok guys here is my first comic. I hope you like it.

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  2. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    Wait...uhhh...hmm...
     
  3. GingaMagnus

    GingaMagnus Designated Toku Nerd

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    Not bad to start out with, infact i really like the serious and dark bits. Even the effects are good. But i think you should have used a different punchline at the end other then referencing G-13.
     
  4. Wars

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    Hmmm.

    I like the original premise, but that ending doesn't really work. But, I shall follow this never the less.
     
  5. kaijuguy19

    kaijuguy19 Keyblade Wielder

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    OH NO ARCEE! :eek: 
     
  6. Autobot Adam

    Autobot Adam Sub Leader

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    Wow... ???
     
  7. JBerryFTW

    JBerryFTW The new kid on the block.

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    What is that supposed to mean? :inquisiti 
    Hey somebody actually liked it!
    Yeah I know the ending was shit because I was rushed to make it coz I had to go to a guy's party. And I have work the next day.
    Yes, poor Arcee.....
    Yeah I know this is a weird comic.

    I might cancell this comic after the next strip, which would probably please you guys and I will kill off the G13 derps and make it more serious. I was just testing to see how it would go.
     
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    Poor Arcee and Bumblebee, two comrades dying together. :( 
     
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    I like the character deaths, but couldn't you kill the other Bumblebee instead?
     
  10. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    It means, that for once in my life, I didn't directly have any coherent words to say/use. I was flabbergasted...I'm not sure if I REALLY like that something had that effect on me or if I'm uncomfortable because it had that effect on me. Either way it left an impression, which is a very good thing. That part with the young'n was brutal, I love brutal.
     
  11. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher jerk to storytelling

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    Well... Um... Yeah. You're going down that serious but funny route my "playthings at war" comic followed after a while.

    Good luck... Judging by some comments, you'll probably need it.
     
  12. The Ender

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    madness, this is not madness... THIS IS CYBERTRON!!!!
     
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    The hell is grimlock 13?
     
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    interesting...

    looking forward to see where you go with this one :popcorn 
     
  16. The Ender

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    you should try reading more comics
     
  17. JBerryFTW

    JBerryFTW The new kid on the block.

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    Yeah, well they had to die sooner or later.
    My other bee's are in storage, that was the only one I had.
    K..
    Yeah I'll try doing better next time (thats if It see's the light of day.)
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    Thanks :thumb 
    I don't think i'll be staying around for too long though.
    I was reading one of his comics and it looked funny so I attempted to do one but it sucked...

    Guys i also deleted the last one because it wasn't good. Im thinking of making a second strip.
     

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