The Unofficial Transformers Fanfic Review! (TOTFR)

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by cybertron2006, Oct 3, 2009.

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Should This Thread Be A Sticky?

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  2. Nah, it's not popular enough.

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  3. Ghost Rider (If you go to Allspark's Beast Mayhem, you should know what this is.)

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  1. cybertron2006

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    I've since retired from the lofty position of fanfic writer and now I'm the proud owner of TOTFR!

    Alright, first review:

    Name: Transformers 4: Legends of Cybertron
    Creator: Hiraga
    Started: September 27th, 2009
    Preceded by: Transformers 3: Doomsday

    Analysis: This fanfic is set in the G1/Movie (modern) continuity as proved by the Dinobots or Die-Bots, as they are referred to in the story. The plot was easily described in Chapter 1 Part 3 when Optimus Prime and Ultra Magnus discuss the plan to revive the Die-Bots. The chapters are divided into 3 parts. Each part correlates to the others in a numerical order. No mention of a Decepticon yet (unless you count Unicron as one).

    Pros: good plot; awesome variety of characters; Mikaela; Wheelie crashing; evil Dinobots

    Cons: Wheelie being mentioned at all; vague spelling errors; did I say Wheelie?; Ultra Magnus stealing Optimus' vehicle mode... again.

    RATING: 8.0/10.0

    I might do more if the audience likes it.
     
  2. cybertron2006

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    Way I do Stuff

    Here's how I rave and review:

    0.0/10.0: The number on the left is my rating of the fanfic. The number on the right is the maximum number, it being 10.0.

    1.0=
    2.0= Meh, needs LOTS of improvement.
    3.0= Still could do a lot better.
    4.0= Still needs a little bit of spellchecking.
    5.0= Fair in many ways.
    6.0= Showing a little bit of talent.
    7.0= The normal rating i.e. good
    8.0= A fanfic with this rating should be read.
    9.0= Just short of fanfic nirvana. Can't be missed
    10.0= You probably got laid a short time afterward.

    and rarely...
    11.0= YOU... ARE... GOD!!!
     
  3. Hiraga

    Hiraga BILL BILL BILL BILL BILL

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    Thanks a whole lot for rating Legends of Cybertron!
    Keep on going, I like this.
     
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    I'd rate Doomsday but I don't think the fans would wanna wait 2 years for me to read that. You're weclome though.

    Don't wory, I suport SpelFuk.
     
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    You know what would be cool? If this was a sticky thread. That way, if an interesting fanfic popped up, I wouldn't have to dig this up.

    Mods, you know what to do.
     
  6. Autobot_Wall-E

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    I'msorry but I don't think it is fair to rate and review a fanfic that isnt finished. Hiraga is a pwnage writer just give it time to prove that.

    Oh and I STRONGLY suggest reading Doomsday. Once you start you wont want to stop! It definitely deserves a 10, maybe 11 rating :p 
     
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    Hey, it was my first review and I wanted something short. BTW, I AM reading Doomsday.
     
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  9. Rhinox007

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    THis is actually interesting, certainly with all the new fan fics that are popping up, this might be a good thread to check before reading a story. Keep up the work Cybertron 2006 (can't wait untill you review mine:) )
    And please mods, make this a sticky
     
  10. Lock Cade

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    I agree, this should be stickied.

    Nice review. It's nice to have review threads for fanfics so that way I can be persuaded to read them more.
     
  11. Attacker_Prime

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    Awesome reviews! :thumb  Can you review my fan fic, "The Fallen's true Revenge"?
     
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    Alright, at least you're reading it and not blowing it off because it's long.

    This is a very good idea, I don't doubt that. Requesting sticky, mods :D 
     
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    Thanks for all the positive comments! Review coming tomorrow!
     
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    Actually, the Internet's not working at my house. If I can't fix it (and you'll know by my nonexistant posts that usually "plague" the boards), expect the review to be done tomorrow during extended homeroom.

    To Be Reviewed: Arrival
     
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    Good idea making a review thread , defiantly should be made into a sticky. Your review of Transformers 4: Legends of Cybertron was good, I went and read the story base on your recommendation, if you have time please review my Fanfic Darkness Has a Face. If not its cool.
     
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    I'll review Darkness Has A Face tomorrow during EH and Arrival today! ;) 
     
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    ummm... I have to cancel today's review... my Mom's being a bitch all because I said Elton John was gay. Sorry. :( 

    Good chance of Darkness Has A Face getting a review tomorrow! :) 
     
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    I don't know what to say, but I can't review Darkness Has A Face. It's just too... spelfuky.

    I can rate it however! 4.0/10.0

    Sorry for the REALLY short review. Next up is The Adventures of the Bacontronian/Dewbot Alliance (boy, will THIS be fun!)

    Also, any guest reviewers are welcome.
     
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    Alright, here's the review of The Adventures of the Bacontronian/Dewbot Alliance!

    Name: waddaya think? ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    Creator: deltaprime
    Created: September 11th, 2009
    Preceded by: none

    Analysis: Okay, this seems to be a TFW2005 fanfic; the meaning being that there are actual board members in the story itself. Such lucky people are: Crazymadman, Robticon, Sage, Autobot Girl, and of course, deltaprime. To me, this sounds like a great idea. Hell, I think I had an idea like this for Voltage but I scrapped it, going for tradition. Still, using boardmembers as characters is a great idea. But back to the plot: All of the characters are human, and they're having a party. Autobot Girl sneaks out with the spark of TFA Starscream (wtf?!) and implants it within a VOLTHOG (a.k.a. a Halo Warthog). The 'HOG transforms and threatens his resurrector. However, CMM tries to throw a slice of pie (of all things?!) at Screamo but Autobot Girl stops him. That's about how far I've read but I can still get a decent review and rating.

    Pros: pie, Starscream, boardmembers as characters, bacon

    Cons: me not having bacon or pie.

    RATING: 9.0/10.0

    Congratulations deltaprime!
     
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    I'm confused

    That review doesnt make me want to read 'The Adventures of what-cha-call-it...' AT ALL, but... the rating of 9.0 kinda makes me want to try it out. My head hurts.
     

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