The Toys of Pedro's Room

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  1. NotAnAutobot

    NotAnAutobot Jus' makin' some comics..

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    Hey! I've been reading around on the boards for a while, and I've finally decided that I should try my own hand at these comics. First off, I'll be taking some time to introduce the characters, so bear with me for a while! I hope you like it!

    1. Introducing: Optimus Prime

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    Sorry about the graininess of the pics, I don't have a digital camera and have therefore been forced to work with my phone's camera.

    Enjoy!
     
  2. Armorhide

    Armorhide Damn kids

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    :lolol  nice start!
     
  3. Katamari Prime

    Katamari Prime Hassan Chop! TFW2005 Supporter

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    Short but sweet.
     
  4. Dropshot

    Dropshot Transform your destiny

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    Mucha suerte, que bueno ver otro mexicano por estos lares!
     
  5. transmetal2dinobot

    transmetal2dinobot Sub-Commander

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    nice intro strip
     
  6. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    :lol  Yep, still as funny as the first time I read it.

    Now waiting for your next strips. :) 
     
  7. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    :noob :lol 
     
  8. NotAnAutobot

    NotAnAutobot Jus' makin' some comics..

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    Gracias! Espero que mis chistes no se pongan viejos rapidamente!

    jajaja

    Thanks for the encouragement everybody! I'll have the second one up later today!

    EDIT: In fact, I'll have it up right now!

    2. Introducing: Optimal Optimus

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    A new twist on "Prime's a dick." :lol 

    Comments? Criticisms? Tacos?
     
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    Dropshot Transform your destiny

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    Just an encouraging post.
     
  10. Lord Megatron

    Lord Megatron FFFF

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    Put speech in text bubbles. Makes it much easier to read.
     
  11. NotAnAutobot

    NotAnAutobot Jus' makin' some comics..

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    Yeah, I know, but I'd done these two strips before I was given the tip-off that it was hard to read. The next one has text bubbles, though! That one will be up tomorrow.
    Up Next: Ultra Magnus!
     
  12. Grimlock_13

    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    :lol  Keep it up!
     
  13. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    I like these strips alot, bring in more! :D 
     
  14. NotAnAutobot

    NotAnAutobot Jus' makin' some comics..

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    Haha thanks for the encouragement! Like I said, the next one will be up tomorrow. (I'm in US Central Time, so I don't know how that will affect you guys' times.) I don't want to use up all the strips I have now so quickly.
     
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    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    Red text against pictures never wins.
     
  16. NotAnAutobot

    NotAnAutobot Jus' makin' some comics..

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    3. Introducing: Ultra Magnus

    As I promised, here's the third strip, complete with text bubbles, so the red text is visible against the pic!

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    Tell me how much of an improvement this is, Cataclizm1. Is the red text easier to read?
     
  17. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    :lol  :lol  :lol  You totally caught me off guard with Magnus flying off without his lower half! Hysterical!

    Magnus being somewhat mentally less able is a nice new take. At least it's not another "I can't deal with that now" Magnus.
     
  18. NotAnAutobot

    NotAnAutobot Jus' makin' some comics..

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    Thanks! I decided to change up the Magnus idea because "I can't deal with that now" was getting really old (to me, at least.).
     
  19. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    Bwahahahahahahahaha!!! A slow Magnus, NOW that's something new! :D  :D  :D 
     
  20. Katamari Prime

    Katamari Prime Hassan Chop! TFW2005 Supporter

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    Of course he's not not to bright, just look at him, not all his wheels have tires, if you know what I mean. :lol 
     

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