The Toyniverse Plot

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  1. Bloodcat

    Bloodcat Well-Known Member

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    Updated with new comics December 2013!

    Hey all! Waaaay back in the day I did a very Kevin Smith ish comic (naughty language and disgustingish events) that has mostly been lost to time involving Tigatron and Airrazor. Well, its time to sort of continue that tale, except given the rules and because its more challenging, I get to try to refer to the messed up things without using foul language or actually SHOWING anything too messed up. This first set of pages was originally just done for fun and just has the bad words scrubbed out. Somehow I got inspired to not only continue the tale, but to make it the prelude to a serious epic story I probably won't ever get to. Because I am lazy.

    If anyone enjoys this I hope to get better at the program I am using, and improve the writing and layout as it progresses. Hopefully Ill actually find the funny sometime before page 12 or so!

    Edit: This will also be a clearinghouse for any other photocomics I make too. Lets me get away with less work yet covering more projects!

    On to Part 1 of the Toyniverse Plot!

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    Its funny how I got ideas and inspiration to continue this. Though it IS technically in the same universe as the few vastly more primitive (and dirtier!) strips I did back in the day.

    Yall will note the pages are on 2 seperate sites. Imagesocket has a tendency to be a giant pain sometimes and not want to take uploads for random reasons. I prefer it to Imageshack, but whatever works.

    I hope to actually make this amusing soon, hopefully with 2-5 pages a week if I can keep some sort of schedule!
     
  2. chubbzilla

    chubbzilla One shall stand...

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    love it nice one keep em coming that host is really slow though try using imageshack or photobucket.com
     
  3. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    :lol  :lol  It's certainly funny to me.

    I like the set up you have for your toys, and the motivations behind their animosity. Nice.

    I don't think it's absolutely necessary to censor them swear words, but then some also overdo it, so I'll leave that to your judgement.

    Looking forward to more of your comic goodness! :thumb 
     
  4. Sheba

    Sheba FF 1 Badman=Cyclonus

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  5. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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  6. Hoolagrin

    Hoolagrin Wheelie Rules! TFW2005 Supporter

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    I love your comic layout. It's like reading a real paper comic. Very slick! Looking forward to more!
     
  7. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    I like the layout. What program are you using to create the comics?
     
  8. Bloodcat

    Bloodcat Well-Known Member

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    This Mac Program called Comic Life Deluxe. Its nice and generally easy to use. I need to look for a music note symbol in it for Movie Bumblebee though. Im sure there is one in there someplace.
     
  9. Bloodcat

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    Expect a new installment before 6am tomorrow!
    Maybe before midnight if I decide to play videogames later rather than earlier.

    Spyshot gets to meet Cy Kill's band of outcasts in part 2 of my whenever series.
    Part 3 will either be meeting the Convoy Council, or more Spyshot antics. Part 4 will be the one I passed for later.
     
  10. Bloodcat

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    Good news everyone!
    Comic done and uploaded before midnight, meaning I hit my monday release schedule with at least 2 more pages, preferrably 3. In this case its another 5 pages. And again at Imageshack since Imagesocket hates me most of the time..

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  11. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    :lol  :lol  :lol  I liked the part about being sea creatures and D&D.
     
  12. The621

    The621 Fuck you, that's why!

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    This is insane.
     
  13. Bloodcat

    Bloodcat Well-Known Member

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    ^^^ Good insane or bad insane?
     
  14. Hoolagrin

    Hoolagrin Wheelie Rules! TFW2005 Supporter

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    I like it. So it must be the kind of good insane that keeps you out of jail but not insane enough to go to a mental hospital. Like ADD + Claustrophobia. ZING!
     
  15. Seawing

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    so far good stuff
    keep it up
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  16. Bloodcat

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    ^^ Thanks!

    But a question. I now have a Flickr account which means I can put the comics up full sized on the forums.

    Would folks want that, or should I keep up with the Imageshack thumbnail links for space purposes?
     
  17. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    Most of us here just post the comics full sized on the forums, but do whatever's most convenient for you.
     
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    I prefer the full sized ones.
     
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  20. Bloodcat

    Bloodcat Well-Known Member

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    Strip update: I just got done buying myself birthday presents (Forza Motorsport 2 and the Force Feedback Steering Wheel, a couple retrogame collections cheap, TF Risk, and a few other odds and ends. Minus Robo Vision Prime which isn't at my semilocal Target. WHY DIDN'T I BUY IT WHEN I FIRST SAW IT SO STUPID!!) and a friend called and wants to hang out.

    So I will probably be STARTING the strip around Midnight so itll be ready before my 6am deadline anyhow. I actually had a couple brainstorms.