the scrumblebee comic

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  1. scrumblebee

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    well now look what happened. i'm in a comic thread. this is issue 1 of the scrumblebee comic.
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    Not bad, the little explosion effect was well done. It's a bit hard to read, the yellow blends into the background a bit. Is there a way to have the word bubbles a solid fill color behind the words?
     
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    DOTM Bumblebee I must be some kind of nut...

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    Interesting start. Ysbal's offering good advice. I know it's literally your first issue, but I would recommend developing the characters you want to focus on. Welcome to the Funnies, sir. :) 
     
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    here is comic number two.
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    :popcorn  Much easier to read! Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
     
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    hey look it's the third comic
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    This looks great so far. Good to see a bit more Decepticon focus there at the end.
     
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    :popcorn  Dinobots, cool! Things are getting even more interesting.
     
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    DOTM Bumblebee I must be some kind of nut...

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    This is shaping up to be an interesting story. I guess your Shockwave has more of a temper, then? :popcorn 
     
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    here is the fourth comic. thanks for the praise on the comic. i appreciate it. anyway, here's another issue.[​IMG][​IMG][​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG] [​IMG]
     
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    it's been a little while, so here's comic number 5, the beast planet finale!

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    :popcorn  I thought Shockwave went down too easily to stay down.
     
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    this isn't a new issue, but the first comic has been remastered with better speech bubbles and stuff. (no more yellow letters)
     
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    it took like a week, but season 2 is starting! here's issue 6.
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    i'm going on vacation, so there won't be any new issues for a while. sorry
     
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    my vacation is over so the scrumblebee thing is back and i think this is the seventh one.

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