Not bad, the little explosion effect was well done. It's a bit hard to read, the yellow blends into the background a bit. Is there a way to have the word bubbles a solid fill color behind the words?
Interesting start. Ysbal's offering good advice. I know it's literally your first issue, but I would recommend developing the characters you want to focus on. Welcome to the Funnies, sir.
here is the fourth comic. thanks for the praise on the comic. i appreciate it. anyway, here's another issue.
this isn't a new issue, but the first comic has been remastered with better speech bubbles and stuff. (no more yellow letters)