The Origen Of Grimlockams Prime

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  1. grimlockams prime

    grimlockams prime Check you feet

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    me dont no if this count as fanfic but hear seams like agood place for it.so me give you



    grimlockams prime's origen p.1
    the transformation

    well it all started in a battle I(grimlock)was beating some serios tailgate.we won but prime was seriverly wonded and pased on the matrix to me I then gained a masive new sword a powerfull blaster. in beast mode i had horns, spikes and plates on my back.


    NOTE:I will do this in parts.depending on how people like it is how i diced to ad more parts
     
  2. KA

    KA PENIS GOES WHERE?!!

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    a good way to get your fanfic taken seriously is proper spelling/grammar.

    even when you use yoda/grimlock type syntax.

    what i want to know is...where the heck'djoo get grimlockams? o_O 
     
  3. grimlockams prime

    grimlockams prime Check you feet

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    what on earth you mean
     
  4. Windturf

    Windturf Insane Ratchet Fan

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    I think he's talking about the name. Why not Grimlockomus Prime?
     
  5. KA

    KA PENIS GOES WHERE?!!

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    or grimgrams prime?
     
  6. RHansen

    RHansen Sir. Ranbotnic Veteran

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    guys if you dont have anything constructive to add besides mocking his chosen screen name, leave the thread.
     
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    Ops_was_a_truck JOOOLIE ANDREWWWWWS!!!!!!

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    I think you could have some fun with this idea. If you want others to enjoy your idea, though, I'd suggest adding even more to the story. Think of different ways to describe Grimlock's battle, think of different ways to describe how Optimus Prime was wounded, stuff like that.

    If you beef up your story so that it's larger - like one or two paragraphs - I think you'll get other people interested in reading it.

    Good luck! :thumb 
     
  8. grimlockams prime

    grimlockams prime Check you feet

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    me might do that it good idea. and stop making fun of my screen name or we will have a proplem. got that you two!!!!!!!that means you ka and windturf!(said with glowing red eyes starting at and)
     
  9. grimlockams prime

    grimlockams prime Check you feet

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    ok part 1 and a half.it just stuf forgot that went in part 1

    1.prime's wound. it came from a hit by megatron's canon.

    2.third mode. i also had a tank mode and a whired tralier.
     
  10. Chaos Incarnate

    Chaos Incarnate Not just a name.

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    Omega Knight! Welcome back! We missed you!!
     
  11. grimlockams prime

    grimlockams prime Check you feet

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    thear no omega knight hear. what wrong with you?
     
  12. Draven

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    1. Guys, he's 11 and trying to talk like Grimlock. Give him a break. You were all new here once too.
    2. I like your idea, Grimlockams. What I'd do would be go into more detail about the character; missions he's done in the past for example. Flesh out the character, so to speak. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with.
     
  13. grimlockams prime

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    than you Draven! yet i do not think thay will listen.
     
  14. Ziero

    Ziero TFW2005 Supporter

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    This seems more like a diary written through Grimlock then an actul fanfic 'story'. As such, it's a rather original idea and has the potential to be very entertaining. Grimlock being a bot of few words, i can see why you'd want to keep the 'parts' short, but as a story a bit more description couldn't hurt. Plus it might be interesting to get a tale told through Grimlock's unique perspective.
     
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    I have to say I like the diary idea too.
     
  16. grimlockams prime

    grimlockams prime Check you feet

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    i am sorry but no new parts for awile. i have writers block.
     
  17. Ravenxl7

    Ravenxl7 W.A.F.F.L.E.O.

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    Hmm....sounds like a really cool idea. Grimlock isn't the first bot that I would trust with the Matrix and being leader of the Autobots, but, I could see it happening.
     
  18. Alpha Prime

    Alpha Prime Ten Years Strong

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    GOOD LORD CHILD, PROOF READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Your fan fic would go over better if it was written with correct spelling and grammer. Neat little story you have going. Try typing your story in Microsoft Word, spell & grammer check, and then copy and paste it on to the site here. It really works wonders for people. And if you do not have Word, you can PM it to me and i'll fix it.

    (if i spelt anything wrong, i'm sorry, i've been up way too long.)

    & Welcome to the Boards.

    -Charlie
     
  19. surak777

    surak777 Autobot Musician TFW2005 Supporter

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    dude it's a good Idea, sounds like grimlock.. doubt grimlock spells well of proof reads so these guys will get over it lol
     
  20. Poho

    Poho That's MISTER Poho to you

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    i guess. and it is a good idea, but its just so difficult to follow.
     

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