The (mis)adventures of Optimus Prime!!!!!!

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  1. Pepsiman98

    Pepsiman98 Consulting Criminal

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    hey all! ive been lurking here for quite a while and i thought id try my luck at tf funnies. couldnt think of a better fitting name for this since optimus falls off something about every comic. i dont know how good this will be but here you go!
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    hope you likes!:D 
     
  2. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    The pics could be a LOT less blurrier, and that repaint is nice!

    Otherwise, gooooooood.
     
  3. Pepsiman98

    Pepsiman98 Consulting Criminal

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    those are just my crudy close-ups that i will fix hopefully in the next comic. my camera does that thing with far-off focusing so yeah...:redface2: 
    thanks for the comment!
     
  4. Turbojak

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    Good so far. A little less blurry but you said you are working on that. Only other thing is maybe indicators as to who belngs to the word balloons. Pretty easy to tell now but when you get more than 2 characters can get complicated. Otherwise great job and keep them coming!
     
  5. Omega Charge

    Omega Charge Prepare for trouble...

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    Try and find a macro, or close-up, setting on the camera. it would help a lot.
     
  6. megatronkicksas

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    Cool just work on the blurryness.
     
  7. Pepsiman98

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    i think mine has one, i just didnt know what macro means so i havent used it yet. now we have to wait for the 3rd story arc:lol 
     
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    doomboy536 Universe Onslaught fanboy

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    Another new comic writer! Keep up the good work :thumbs2: 
     
  9. Pepsiman98

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    2nd part almost done!
     
  10. Pepsiman98

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    part 2!:
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    doomboy536 Universe Onslaught fanboy

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    Can I give you some advice, as one budding comic author to another? Go off and take a shedload of pictures, at least a hundred but preferably more. Take them of anything and everything, from close-ups to distance shots. It will help you get to know your camera. I'm saying this because the blurring on your pictures really makes it hard to enjoy the story.

    Having said that, I want to see more of this. What happened to Soundwave?
     
  12. Pepsiman98

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    i have been working with my camera lately and i think i fixed my blurring problem, i found the macro switch so future comics should be better. (just wait for my ghostbusters tf parody!)
    as for soundwave, you will have to wait and see!:lol 
     
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    wow, second double post to put up a new strip!
    real srry about blurry pics but i took these pics in advance before i knew what that little flower button did. ok here's part 3!
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    :lol 
     
  15. The621

    The621 Fuck you, that's why!

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    Smooth, Energon Prime! :lol 
     

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