The Mechanics of Humor

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  1. Henshin

    Henshin Well-Known Member

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    I've decided to start my own comic. These first two aren't very funny, but it will get better. I just need to start thinking them out a little better. Also, I need to work on my picture taking skills.

    MOH 1: Curiosity Killed the Bee Pt 1
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    Was he...uh...

    Choking the chicken?

    Regardless...

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  3. Henshin

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    MOH2: Curiosity Killed the Bee Pt 2
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  4. Henshin

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    MOH2: Is Your Fridge Running?
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    It has a kind of random humor, but you need some stronger punchlines. Still, not bad. I enjoyed reading them, even if I got a chuckle instead of a good laugh. :thumb 
     
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    Yeah it is a bit random... Though "stick power" did make me laugh :lol 
     
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    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    :lolol  :lolol  :lolol 
     
  9. Henshin

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    I hope these are getting a little better. I know #4 will get a laugh outta someone when I post it.

    MOH3: Show Off
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    You win a slight LOL from me with that last one.
     
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    I don't understand the first couple at all.
     
  12. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    :lol  Zero your ego Prime...
     
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    :lolol :lolol :lolol 
     
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    Not every Prime has his own song. He shouldn't rub it in. :lol 
     
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    :lol  :lol 
     
  16. Henshin

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    I need more funnier-ness juice. And more updating.

    MOH 4: Lego Guys
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    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    The word "smoosh" itself made me chuckle. :lol 
     
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    Lawl. :lol  :lol  :lol  :lol  :lol 
     
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    Poseable bumblebee custom made from Bandai Rockman model kit parts! FTW!
     
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    He's made from an RX-78 Gundam action figure.
     

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