Characters Decepticons Brawl- leader of the Decepticons on Leogelu Astrotrain- transport and ineffective warrior Overkill- all brawn and no brains Thundercracker- master of swordsmanship MG-1- mass produced drone in the shape of Megatron Spy Shot 6- spy for the Autobots Autobots Blaster- leader of the Autobots on Leogelu and communication officer Rewind- warrior with a cunning mind Blurr- talks a bluestreak Goldbug- scout with little to no actual combat experience Criticism is welcome
First recommendation I'd make is that the tails of the word balloons don't need to go all the way to touching the characters' mouths. As long as the tails are clearly pointed at the appropriate characters' heads, that's all you need to do. It gets intrusive otherwise. Second, why the name "Leogelu"? Third, Brawl is a general?!?
1. Will fix in later comics 2. It's latin for "ice planet" or something 3. Yes, his only strategy is just attacking with brute force