The Last one of The 13th.

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  1. Spiderus Prime

    Spiderus Prime TFW Spongebob since 2007

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    The Last one of The 13th.

    In a cold dark galaxy of north of the Milky Way Galaxy a ship appears out of know were the ship is going to a planet the is huge,full of metal & they call it Cybertron one of them saw the ship to go somewhere to there planet to see, and the ship has land on a launching patch on a city called Iacon the ship's doors were open and inside was a old rusting robot and he say,”Hello Autobots I'm Undertake and I am Last of the Thirteen Transformers on Cybertron!” Long long time ago Primus and Unicron were fighting Undertake was Gold,Black & Red and his brothers and sisters are ready to fight the giant planet eating monster that called Unicron.Undertake talk to Vector Prime,Maximus Prime,Fallmus Prime & A3 about Unicron's attacks to Cybertron so they defeat Unicron untit Fallmus Prime hit Undertake and become THE FALLEN so Primus say, “You Have become a living breathing nightmaine to The ALL the Primes of the Matrix of Friendship with be stipe for you and him will go to the place the all fallen ones go to the Dead Universe that all of you come from and never see Cybertron again.”
    The Past is of true how the Fallen never gets out of the Dead Universe of Primus' Promis to come them hinting to all Autobots,Decepticons,Maximals & Predacons to see The Fallen you can saw The Unicron.

    update:did like the storY?
    update: Please someone posed!
     
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    Spiderus Prime TFW Spongebob since 2007

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    why!
     
  3. Jazzy Zx

    Jazzy Zx Wants too be called Jz :P

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    It's okay...A little short but it's okay. Do you think you could continue it? Some parts need to be edited because some parts just don't make sense.:poke 
     
  4. herugrim

    herugrim Defiler of Energon

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    I'm guessing English isn't your primary language.

    It sounds good, but in heavy need of editing and revision. It's very difficult to follow. The more you write, the better you will get.
     

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