The last knight was shit, let’s make it better.

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  1. Digger

    Digger Gohan wa Okazu!

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    So basically continue off from age of extinction except make more sense and all the ideas are kept the same. Things like the knights and the creators. Also try to keep some of the characters from TLK like the decepticons introduced and maybe explain how galvatron became megatron but you don’t have to do that specifically though. I’ll post something here when I have the time.
     
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    TLK is Aoe Part 2 xd
     
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    It’s a reboot on top of another soft reboot. Not to mention that it ignores checkoff’s gun.
     
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    This movie gives me a head ache -_-
     
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    Optimus Prime should have come to Earth earlier in the movie while Cade and Bee were in London. Like, Hound, Grimlock, Drift, and Crosshairs go to greet their friend only for Prime to attack them. It would have been a really cool fight for the Autobots to take on Optimus, and having Drift's katana-like blades clash with Prime's broadsword along with the others probably having their asses kicked.
     
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    That would be cool, but we wouldn’t get that awesome car change chase with barricade.
     
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    Pacing is atrocious and makes a total mess of the timeline.
     
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    //Lights DVD on fire.
    There, fixed it for you.
     
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    *Burns every physical copy of TLK on the shelves* saved you the trouble.
     
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    Glad to see you kind of folks are here :D 
     
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    Decepticon part

    After the battle, galvatron and some clones (three traxes, a junk heap, a boss and a two head) retreat and find refuge in Russia(because of course). The smaller cast of decepticons allow for a bit more personality and time as seen here:
    • Galvatron- Finally succumbing to the classic insanity as he’s had enough of losing to prime.
    • Trayi(red)- The leader of the the traxes and always tries to make sure the whole group doesn’t fall apart, especially galvatron.
    • Traxer(white)- The ignorant lone wolf of the crew. He begrudgingly obeys orders and the others wonder why they still keep him around.
    • Traxsan(blue)- The calm and collected dude who won’t speak above others and gladly agree with their decisions. He can still kick ass though.
    • Junkheap- basically like reflector but fails to do the uniform talk. In general and they’re sort of like the junkions in their mannerisms.
    • Boss- Total barrister at the pub who likes to have a hardy laugh. The kind of character everyone likes. Also he keeps those cool whips.
    • Two Head- Boss’s weird pet creature/best bud. Nobody quite understands him and he doesn’t talk much. Also he probably transforms into a flame tank of some kind.
     
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    Optimus part

    Optimus is going into space to beat up his creators, except that there’s at least seven of them instead of just quintessa and they look really weird like that hand we saw on the snail ships. They fight by using some giant machine things instead of their weak bodies. They are able to turn him into nemesis prime by corrupting the matrix that he still has. And giving him the power to kill or something. The autobots save him by destroying the matrix. Stating that they never needed it anyway.
     
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    Story part

    The autobots are still here and they look the same as before and will hopefully have more time to interact and show more of themselves. Bumblebee and Crosshairs are leading as they try to wipe out any deceptions on the planet with Cade who continued to support there efforts. Bumblebee is showing off his classic responsibility and crosshairs is eager to take over instead. They’ll have to learn and live as they are flying around in the bit of Lockdown’s ship.

    The decepticons however are trying to take over by climbing up through the government and using that power to expand their forces. They are stationed around the world and continue to seek power and eventually take over. They focus on countries and continents that haven’t experienced transformers that much.

    The autobots are worrying if Optimus prime is ok as he’s been gone for a long time. In reality he’s guarding the quintessons who are continuing to cyberform more planets to recreate cybertron. The autobots are unsure and so they go to find the only bots who’d know here he could be. The dinobots.

    Lockdown had chips installed into the dinobots so he could track them and the autobots use them to locate them. They go and tell them that they need to find Optimus and they need their help. The dinobots are hesitant as Optimus said that they belonged to nobody. Bumblebee questions them that wouldn’t they respect the one that declared that freedom? They’re able to understand and decide to help the autobots.

    They find nemesis and question what is wrong with him as he tells them to leave. An amazing fight occurs as nemesis wrecks them all until they realise that they need to rip out the matrix and destroy it. They use their skill and teamwork to pin him down and break the spell. Optimus apologises and tells them that they need to destroy the creators so they can stop cyberforming planets.

    The overall theme is about family and the success of it. The decepticons are able to have a successful rise to power by having a good family. Optimus tries to beat the creators alone and fails. He tries to beat the autobots and fails.
     
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    That was sort of general in its ideas and I would love any questions or critiques about it.
     
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    The main villain should be nemesis prime. Also he deserves at least 29 mins screentime
     
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    Sure you would! Remember how Bee in Hot Rod were in London while the rest were left in that Ghost Town? You can have both.
     
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    You know, a lot of people are upset that Quintessa replaced "the Creators", but that's not necessarily true. Remember how she's called "The Great Deceiver"? Can't we assume she lied about being the Prime of life? I bet you that the weird guys from AOE are still out there.
     
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    God damn, I wrote this whole rewrite of TLK somewhere and do you think I could find it? Ech.
     
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    This, in a nutshell.
    Obviously there'd be some edits needed - like having Optimus "borrow" a ship from the planet he saves from the Creators (thus enabling the Minicons to stow away on it in the first place) and having Megatron scan Hound's alt mode rather than his robot mode - but there'd still be Stanley Tucci (as the same character from the previous film instead of a WTF days-of-yore cameo), there's still "Knights" (of a sort, that is, a sort that's NOT just more Ancient-Aliens dead-horse-beating), and there's still a human-sized Transformer (or rather, several) in supporting-character status.
     
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    this seems too much like fan fiction........
     
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