The Iyurn Guyz

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  1. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    This is my first attempt at a web comic. I have the first two comics also. Don't be afraid to tell me what you think.
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  2. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    I can't read the text, too blurry and can't figure out how to resize it to work. I wouldn't expect much response from people if your going to put the comics on another web page, as that kinda disrespects TFW. Redo the size and post it here and people will come looking and commenting. Fresh funnies are much appreciated!

    And on a side note, your sig is way too big and will get deleted by the mods, so check the board rules and resize before it's too late.
     
  3. Dremare

    Dremare Had an Epiphany

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    Pretty nice. But yea, like Otispq said, post your comics here if you want people to comment on them.
     
  4. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Okay, here's comic #1 part 1, titled, well, Pilot
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  5. UltimateOptimus

    UltimateOptimus Long-time Hungarian Truck

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    It's the first issue, and already things have got a turn for the weird...
     
  6. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Things will get much weirder UltimateOptimus, much weirder.
    Here's the end to "Pilot"
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  7. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    not bad, but you should really post it as an , not as a thumbnail.
    As for the strips, it could use more focus. Other than that, practice, practice, practice. Good luck :D 
     
  8. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Okay, I hope you all liked Pilot. I have plans that include Unicron, Grimlock, RID Megatron, and even Pikachu! I'll work to try to at least get one comic up a week. That's all for now.
     
  9. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Here's #2 featuring none other than Galac-erm, Unicron!
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    Can you see my thumb in two of the pics?
     
  10. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    Yes, we can see your thumb :D 
    Hah, Unicron got owned here :D 
     
  11. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Here's #3, starring Grimlock! BTW, I'm "challenging" the readers to find my thumb, which appears once a comic.
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    and to those of you who complain about my blurry pictures, it's not my fault...
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  12. Ripclaw

    Ripclaw DementedDino1

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    sure blame it on laserbeak lol

    hes a video camera, not a regular camera XD
     
  13. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    I haven't updated this in awhile, but here's my fist major story arc, Attack of the Spychangers!(pt1) Also, I decided to quit the stupid "thumb in the pic" running gag.
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  14. Seth Buzzard

    Seth Buzzard R.I.P. Buzzbeak Content Contributor

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    I would suggest to experiment with holding the camera at different distances to find how close you can get with it getting blurry. And also try to resize you’re images like to had done with some of them.
     
  15. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    This is "Attack of the Spychangers!" pt2. Please comment.
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    to be continued.......
    BTW, I apologize for the huge word bubble. I thought it kinda fit.
     
  16. UltimateOptimus

    UltimateOptimus Long-time Hungarian Truck

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    Oh, you may think his Sparta battlecry may be bad, but judging by Ani-Prime's axe, the worst's yet to come...
     
  17. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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  18. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Okay, guys, I'm sorry I've been so bad at regularly updating this, but I do have all the pictures for the next three comics. Soon, the Iyern Guys are going to cross over with my Fanfic characters in Transformers: Elseworlds. This means that everyone with get to see the fan character behind my username. Anyway, here's "Attack of the Spychangers!" part 3.
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    UltimateOptimus Long-time Hungarian Truck

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    GREAT! Just what I needed - a Minicon Revolt!
     
  20. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    REMEMBER: after seeing the comic, head over to my fanfic (the link is in my sig) and cast your vote for Convoy's fate. Since the fanfic and comic are going to crossover, whatever you decide could have repercussions in the Iyern Guyz world. Anyway, here's Attack of the Spychang-I mean- Attack of the Minicons!
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    And at that, I end my first story arc. That's all for now!
     

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