The Invasion

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  1. Lord Prime S.

    Lord Prime S. Well-Known Member

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    Lordie's Funnies

    Hi guys, I am kinda new here. Joined for sometime, but never posted. ^^
    Here's my first attempt at a 'serious' comic.

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    Comments please. ^^
     
  2. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    I'm interested...bring some more!
     
  3. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    It's an interesting start, mainly for the good clear photography and the typestyle, which I think I used to use (yes, I'm a graphic designer, as you can probably tell from my typestyle-geekiness). The story needs some more development before I can really comment on it, but I'm certainly interested. I'm with Otispq... let's see some more. :thumb 
     
  4. StarFire_MK2

    StarFire_MK2 'Till All are One! TFW2005 Supporter

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    Very interesting look to the comic; I like the dark atmosphere you've gone for. I take it you're photoshopping it to achieve that look?
    Great start!:popcorn 
     
  5. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    Lordie, you are here!! :D  :D  :D  :D  :D 
     
  6. Lord Prime S.

    Lord Prime S. Well-Known Member

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    Thanks!


    Nice to get some professional comments, hehe. I use a tripod to help with the pictures sometimes.


    I don't really know how to use photoshop that much. I just took that first strip under my computer table where its dark and lower the exposure on the camera slightly.

    hello, tcracker :D  Decided to post it here since its slow over there.

    Strip two coming soon.
     
  7. Seth Buzzard

    Seth Buzzard R.I.P. Buzzbeak Content Contributor

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    An intriguing start.
     
  8. Pun-3X

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    Need more! But nice so far. Clean start, clear pictures, promising premise. Have to watch where you take this one. :) 
     
  9. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    That's how I felt. feedbacks there are non-existent. If you know what I mean. We have excellent bunch of folks here. They rock and they are awesome.:rock 

    Oh don't fret it Pun-3X, he's good, trust me. :ev: 
     
  10. Lord Prime S.

    Lord Prime S. Well-Known Member

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    Ah, don't give people so much hope about my strips. I don't feel confident with them :p 


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    Unfortunately I suck at photoshop, but might be able to pull of some comical-looking lolbeams and lolblades.
     
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    That really nice start there! My one kinda turn people off in the first place :lol  You got quite intriguing start!
     
  12. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    Very crisp, clear photography, and nice work on the glow effects.:thumbs2:  I'll be interested to see how this develops.
     
  13. E. C. R. Former

    E. C. R. Former Is probably insane...

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    I can't really say much about plot since there really isn't one yet. Hopefully that will be rectified soon.

    But I LOVE your photography. The lighting and the focus is absolutely spectacular. And while you may thinking your photoshopping skills suck, I see nothing yet that says so. This has tremendous potential and I'd like to see where it goes. :D 
     
  14. Ripclaw

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    great start so far, cant wait for more :thumb 
     
  15. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    Rock on, Lordie! Bring us more!:rock 
     
  16. Lord Prime S.

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    I read yours, its humorous! I like it! Haha.

    Thanks for the comment. I like taking pictures of my toys a lot. :D 

    Thanks. I myself am not sure about the plot :p . It should somewhat follow the title (loosely). I can't do much battles effects with photoshop. :p 

    Thanks!! :D 

    :p  Awaiting for your update too, bro.


    Here's another update! Hehe...

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  17. Ripclaw

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    prowl is going to help not attack idiots XD

    nice use of clone troopers XD
     
  18. CryoPrime

    CryoPrime Cody A.

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    Clones, Bohrok and Transformers in one comic.... awesome!
     
  19. Orion_Prime48

    Orion_Prime48 Super Sentai Purist

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    good start im interested in where all this goes

    but add something a little funny in it everything serious has to have something funny happen at some point
     
  20. E. C. R. Former

    E. C. R. Former Is probably insane...

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    Ooooh. Attack of the Clones indeed. Does this mean that it's the Galactic Empire that's invading?
     

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