The First Lesson

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  1. ReaprPrime28

    ReaprPrime28 The Forgotten Prime

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    I'm trying to see if I can start a photocomic of my own.Alot of you have inspired me to try it so I took a look at some tutorials for GIMP and gave it a shot,lemme know what you think before I delve too far into it.:D [​IMG]
    And yes I know it needs a few tweeks,but hey it's a start.lol.
     
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    Drift Banned

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    That looks fine just the way it is, if you want to outline the speech bubble with black then press shft+0, select the bubble by clicking on it, then got to edit and got to stroke selection. There are a whole load of tutorails in the funnies, go check them out
     
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    ReaprPrime28 The Forgotten Prime

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    Ty,I'll def have to try it out.
     
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    ReaprPrime28 The Forgotten Prime

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    Ok,first post going up.Hopefully I get the name change.As said in my other thread I'm not sure how often I'll be able to do this,but I'll try my best.[​IMG][​IMG][​IMG][​IMG][​IMG][​IMG][​IMG][​IMG][​IMG]I hope you enjoy the first one.
     
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    Autobot Burnout SANTARN IS COMING AGAIN TFW2005 Supporter

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    You got the eye glows and the speech bubbles down, so you're off to a good start.

    However, I'd recomend looking over your panels to catch and correct any spelling mistakes. For instance; you're missing the (') in "we're" in the first two panels.
     
  6. Im No Hero

    Im No Hero ze best reader

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    red vs blue reference, yes?
     
  7. ReaprPrime28

    ReaprPrime28 The Forgotten Prime

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    Thank You,had a funny feeling I got something wrong.lol.
     
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    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    Honestly, at first I was worried about the title of this comic, and I went "Oh no no no no nooo, not another "OMG look at me I'm gonna be doin' a TF Funny so I'm makin' a threat without anything in it to show off! =D"

    I am glad that's not the case ^^

    :lol  Makin' the little guy pick his idols "better"...
     
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    ReaprPrime28 The Forgotten Prime

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    Yes,yes it was.
     
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    tfmad2010 Oh Hai Internet!

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    Anyways. Besides what I said in the other thread, good job. Tracks is quite sneaky :D .
     
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    ReaprPrime28 The Forgotten Prime

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    Yeah,i pretty much followed the tutorials that were on the forums.Only got GIMP to work with so thank primus for them.lol.Also keep your eye on Breacher.I see a bright future for him.
     
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    ReaprPrime28 The Forgotten Prime

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    Thank you to everyone for the responses I've gotten so far.I'm going to try to make this a weekly thing,if not the bi-weekly.It'll probably be Mondays when I put up the new ones.
     
  13. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    The only condition I'd make is that you cut the image size down so that readers don't have to scroll sideways to read them.
     
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    ReaprPrime28 The Forgotten Prime

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    Tell me how and I definetly will.Kinda new to the whole editing thing.lol.
     
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    ReaprPrime28 The Forgotten Prime

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    Nevermind that last post,I think I got it to work.I"m gonna post a test pic.If it works ok,if not I'll keep trying.[​IMG]
     
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    ReaprPrime28 The Forgotten Prime

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    Let me know if that's good.I kinda want to do 800x600,but I don't want to break any rules.
     
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    Yeah, pick size was all right, the comic was even better! If you go to the private message section then to change options on your account, you can tell TFW what size you want it to resize your pictures to every time. :thumb s:
     
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    biscuits Sin from Genesis

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    Starting of with a Red VS Blue reference is always cool :D 

    Nice comic so far.
     
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    Rattrap Primal Geek Overlord

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    your the first one to use the new Tracks as a lead, congrats
     
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    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    That looks like a great size. You could probably go a little larger if you want though. :thumb 
     

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