The Escape

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  1. onesock

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    I wanted to take a break from doing funnies all of the time, so I decided to make a serious comic.

    Hey, if Cobalt and Shane can do it, so can I....right?

    So I present to you.....

    The Escape

    Episode 1 - Prologue

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  2. Cobalt Agent

    Cobalt Agent My dick kills dinosaurs

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    Escape? COWARD! Justice Prime would throttle him for that!
     
  3. onesock

    onesock Banned

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    This aint no cross-over! :lol 
     
  4. Predaking

    Predaking Well-Known Member

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    Looking good. I look forward to reading your serious stuff. :thumb 
     
  5. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    This is an instance where the silence of comics works against the project. You need the theme from "The Great Escape" playing behind Prime's monologue, and a cameo by Steve McQueen. :D 

    Keep it up! Need more story!!
     
  6. Eric

    Eric Per sempre marciamo.

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    Nice start so far! :thumb 
     
  7. onesock

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  8. GladiatorPrime

    GladiatorPrime working on Rampage P2-V2

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    Okay...I'm Interested!
     
  9. Kid_Convoy

    Kid_Convoy Femme Killa

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    Honestly, I don't know about this one. The beginning seemed okay, but then the last panel with Prime screamed out of character. I guess my opinion might change as the story develops.

    (If my opinion matters at all...)
     
  10. Sheba

    Sheba FF 1 Badman=Cyclonus

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    :D  :D  :D  :D  cool!
     
  11. Eric

    Eric Per sempre marciamo.

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    Nice. :thumb 
     
  12. CdnShockwave

    CdnShockwave The Prince of Poses TFW2005 Supporter

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    :cry  Opy! Nooo!!!
     
  13. soundwave47

    soundwave47 Remember Me?

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    looking good so far!!:thumb 
    justice prime would do what he does best,blow s#!@ up !!!!
     
  14. Leemon

    Leemon Yar, spare sum fuel mate?

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    Needs some work, there, Onesock.
     
  15. Gears

    Gears buh-buh-body ya Veteran

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    Prime.........cried?
     
  16. UltimateOptimus

    UltimateOptimus Long-time Hungarian Truck

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    Yeah, it'd be all like "COWARD! There is no need to escape! If you do, risk losing YOUR title and YOUR life!"
     
  17. onesock

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    I guess this needs a little explaining.

    Prime has been leader for so long, he has built a father/son bond with his soldiers. Seeing them die equals tons of stress for him, therefore, he's having a breakdown and can't fight anymore.
     
  18. Cobalt Agent

    Cobalt Agent My dick kills dinosaurs

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    What a wimp. Only Omega Supreme can cry. And it's ok because he's a badass.
     
  19. onesock

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    Justice Prime is more of the drunk uncle compared to my Prime. :lol 
     
  20. Cobalt Agent

    Cobalt Agent My dick kills dinosaurs

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    He might be a drunk uncle, but at least he doesn't the feelings for his troops that your non-drunk uncle Prime does for his. ^_^
     

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