Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Takeout, Aug 15, 2010.
Episode One: The First Episode
cool not to nitpick but can you try to make it make more sense (where the bubbles go)
Not bad for a first start. "Your standing on my face!!!!"
Skywarp, don't try edging in on the face thing! Optimus won't like it. D:
The speech bubbles are a wee bit confusing, but I want to see what happens next! =]
I would suggest making the text a lot bigger. When TFW resizes it, its very hard to read.
Kinda Hard to see, maybe tone down on the lighting
Yeah, it's a bit of a mess when it comes to the speech bubbles.
Watch this space.....
That's what I get for taking pics in full daylight, with the blinds down and the flash on.
Episode Two: Fun with Fan Modes (Alternate Titles: Rampage the Headmaster, The Revenge of Rampage, The One with Readable Text)
LOL at Headmaster reference^^
Digging the comic so far, dude.
You're not a headmaster, buddy!
Episode Three: The One Outside
error!error! iseeskywarpinthelastpicturebutiknowhefelltotheground! error!error!
Okay, quick, I gotta figure out an explanation.....
Yes! I know!
That wasn't Skywarp, that was his identical twin, Airwarp, who just happened to be there at the time! Yeah. That's right.
You know.....just call it a blooper and be done with it.
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