the birth of rejection

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  1. firebapx

    firebapx Starscream

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    rather than following the typical pattern of repainting an optimus prime black and calling it nemisis pirme
    i decied to change his head give him a completely diffferent paint job and creat a custom characther.

    suprisingly i had a really good time making him and coming up with his backround. this is my first time making my own
    characther so here it goes lol

    rejection was born in the early days of the war. it was a dark night rain was pouring down it was heavey almost blanking
    the view ahead. within the great deceptiocon city stands a proform production ficility.at first the air is silent no movement
    a distant battle can be head the autobots are pressing an attack. suddenly there is a whistle in the distance it gets closer
    and louder increasing and increasing then suddenly the dark wet streets are drowned out by a huge flash and a deafening bang.

    the autobots have attacked the protoform facility. the facility starts to fall apart at the seems roofs colaps walls fall into
    the streets and many decpticons sciantist die. hundreads of protoforms have been destroyed. this was a great victory for the
    autobots the decepticons will berecovering from this attack for megacycles.

    as the smoke clears there is no longer silance instead the battle has moved forward the autobots used the distraction
    of the attack to push forward and at the head of the battle the mighty optimus faced of againes megatron. they two mighty
    leaders fought wildely each one seem to take turnes at having the upper hand. nvever for more than a few minuits was
    one on top. as the battle continued megatron call in his troops to aid the attack as did optimus. optiums produced his axe
    and ran for megatron his sheer force and size managed to smash through some of megatrons smaller troops.
    as he ran he his simpley stared at megatron this time he was sure he would end it. megatron simply responded by producing
    his sword he stared optimus down waiting on the the attack. not even the call of his troops distraced him he waited for
    optimus as he got closer he clutched his sword tighter and at last he meet optimus head on. the clash of there two mightey
    wepons created a shock wave that stunned some of the many smaller troops knocking them back.megatron knew this would not be
    his day of victory the battle would continue to be even on booth sides and he had already lost to many troops today. he
    called in a retreat. as his troops retreated he was able to admit to him self the optimus was going to be a problem weather
    he liked it or not.

    optimus left satasfied that the all the protoforms where destroyed and that the remaining decepticons shared that fate.
    he was rong! one protoform was still left it was buried under the rubble it eyes just able to see out of the ruble. it had
    witnessed the whole battle between optimus and megatron. it was activated by the explosion and took in all that it had witnessed
    learning from optimus and megatrons actions watching ever move they made. it was able to see how the leaders behaved. but thats
    not all it saw in the background it could see autobot medics and how they worked it could see the decepticons soldiers and how
    rutheslessly they fought. it had learned everything its empty shell quickly filled with information learning everything.
    including death it could see the hundreads fall he was sourounded by his dead brothers in the rubble. during the explosion
    he had absorbed the sparkes of many other protoforms. allowing him to acumulate much more knolage than any protoform before him.

    as the battle ended the protoform scanned the last robot to leave the battle optimus. he was able to slowely force his way from
    the rubble making his way to the surface his new form was very poweful filled with the energy of many protoforms and the
    abilities of many autobots and decepticons. he was quickley able to teach him self to transform. beleaving him self to be an autobot
    he made his way towards them. as he aproached the nearist autobot patrol he thaught he was safe but to his suprise he was attacked
    they autobots had scanned him as a decepticon. suddenley he knew excatly what to do he dodged the gun fire and ran to cover.
    he was using the new knolage he had gained he quickley snuck round behind them with his superior aim and his medical knolage he
    took out two of the autobots with one shot then he drew his axe and ran towards the last larger autobot. he slaed the axe into
    his arm pulled him self up onto his back climed ontop of him and ripped his head of. his abilities both made him fell frightned
    and thrilled he liked it.

    knowing now that he must be a decepticon he made his way back through the mirkey streets he made his way looking up at the hughe
    buildings he was still new to this world he was amazed. over head he could see decepticons fly over. he followed them deep down
    inside his spark he knew this world was rong something was broken there was to much death. "how can the autobots and the decepticons
    both beleave they are doing whats right when so many are dieing" he shouted dropping to his knees. as he sat there trying to figure
    out why he was born he was attacked againe. this time from the skys "its optimus" the voices said and they kept attacking him.
    firghtned he ran for cover. sitting he thought remembeing back to his first day of lifehe rembered large AA guns shooting at the
    flying decepticons. quickley he managed to savage a what resembled a larger gun than his own from the bodys around him. he ran
    to the center of the battle field. taking up position ontop of the rubble of a large monument to megatron. using his new gun he unleashed
    a barrage of morter shells into the sky. he was amazed at the knolage he had gained from the engenears he had studied he seemd. to have
    absorbed there colective abilities. the gun he had made fired well and and was incredably effective. he managed to hit one he fell
    from the sky crashing into the ground. the other decepticon shaken by the defete of his comrade flew of to alert megatron.

    now he was alone againe confused and frightned. the autobot rejected him up close and the decepticons couldnt get near him. if he
    was neather then what was he. deciding that i was better to start moving he moved to the deception he had just defeted. he was suprised
    to see he was still alive but barely. there was very little of his spark left thinking fast he started to build knowing the fading spark
    would not support a full body he created a smaller one from parts he could find. againe he was shocked by his ability this came naturaly to
    him. within a few hours he had constructed a small robotic body. not wanting to leave him defenceless he attched his mortar like weaopn to
    body. he gave it an alternate form basing it of knolage he had abotained from autobot sciantist about of world species it became a wolf.
    finally he moved the almost completely extinguished spark from its old body and placed it in a new one. at first nothing but slowely the new
    lighter and less power reliant body came to life. its eyes lit up showing that it was alive. the new small robot moved it looked around
    it was alive but very primative. it managed to make a few snarls and growls but no talking. the protoform started to mave of and left the
    new deception to return hom but instead it followed him. "you dont want to be with me i dont belong in this world" he said but the little
    bot kept coming. it seemed to want to stay with him he had saved his life and was alone now to. after some time he decided to let him come
    with him. "ill call you mortar wolf" he thought he added to mortar wolfs bady giving him the ability to comine with him and use his weapon.

    now no longer alone he travaled around cybertron trying to get close to eaither the autobots or decepticons each time he was attacked
    and although he could put up a good fight he ultimatly he was outdone by the sheer numbers of both factions. now rejected by both sides
    and with only mortar wolf to to travle with he gave up. no longer would he try to become an autobot or decepticon. fed up with all the death
    that both sides would ultimatly bring to each other and the rest of cybertron eaither by accident or on purpous. deciding that in order to stop
    them and finally bring an end to the death on cybertron he needed his own army. he would need to build it in secret. he would travle to the battle
    fields after the fights had ended and bring the sparks of dead autobots and decepticons back online. he could only manage to bring back a small
    amount but enough to sustane life. as time went by he got better eventualy making lutentants and generals. all the knolage he had gained only
    increased his mutiple sparks increasing his learning capasity. his now builds his own army of almost mindless but every loyal transformers. each one
    blindely following his orders with no regard for them selves. they raid autobot and decepticons supply trains.

    now set up deep below the surface of cybertron in the rubble of an anchient city. he slowely rebuilds preparing for the day when he can do that only
    thing that will save cybertron from war kill optimus and megatron. his name is now rejection his faction the rejecticons with mortar wolf by his side
    he leads them and waits in the darkness to clame what he never had life on a peacful war free cybertron.

    you havent truely known defete untill youv known rejection.
     
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    SavageThunder 11th Doctor's Huntress

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    im going tah tell ya.. i love it!!! more please!!!
     
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    firebapx Starscream

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    thank you i wrote this quite a while ago and had all but forgotten it as no one seemed interested lol. there's a custom transformer i painted to go with it search the customs board there's a WFC rejection and i made an earth mode one as well. if interest picks up here ill write more :)  thank you again
     
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    SavageThunder 11th Doctor's Huntress

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    and your welcome. i hope it picks up cause if it doesnt... i dont know what im going to do!
     
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    SavageThunder 11th Doctor's Huntress

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    20th time to read it! awesome!
     

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